ArIya FS: Manwa Laage update pg-30, 9Sep PM LATE

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rvss

@rvss

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Mind blowing concept.

arjun parents bonding very nice.

full family spend time happy movement each other.

arjun ki mom ka drama very nice .

dobo baap bete ko saza...

arjun ko pasand ki guyi ladki sadi karni padegi...

waooo. Ye ladki kagi riya to nahi...

please next part jaldi post karna...

continue. ...

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samvedha

@samvedha

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

nice concept

arjun ki maa tho bahut intelligent nikli

arjun's family is adorable

i hope wo ladki riya ho

jissne arjun ki maa pasand kiya

cont soon

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0913155

@0913155

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Plz continue 😛...loved it...

Thanks for PM 😃😊

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proteeti

@sambhavami

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Lovely Concept ! Do Continue Soon !!

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Anika_VR

@Anika_PreRish

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Amazing and awesome start.
Loved it a lot.
Awesome CS nd Prologue...
Sudha aunty toh bohut smart nikli.
Arjun toh larki ko dekhna bhi nahi chahta hai,aur Uncle ji bhi toh Aunty ki serials ka mazak ura rahe thhe...
Aunty ne apne sabse dumdaar hathiyaar azma liya...
Shartein rakhdi dono ke saame.
Uncle ji pura din bitayenge Aunty ke saath serial dekhne mein,while,Arjun will have to marry that girl.
Lovely..
Eh leh..
Cliffhanger pe stop kardia.
Yeh accha nahi hai Didu.
Continue sooonish...
Thanks for the pm.

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Areesha

@Areesha566

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

awesome di
love it

proluge is just amazing
love arjun and his parents bond
they're so cute

cs is amazing
mughda as mishti, nice choice
chotu's 11:30 wali is also nice

yeh four shot hai ya five shot?

update soon

btw is this manu di's birthday gift?

wah manu di, apki toh lottery lag gayi, itni achi story joh mili as a gift

kaash koi hamare liye bhi story likhta *sigh*