ArIya FS: Manwa Laage update pg-30, 9Sep PM LATE

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I know guys aap logo ko mujhe joote chappal maarne ka man kar raha hoga but main kya karoon yeh topic mere dimag main ghoom raha tha aur fir mujhe two special person ke liye isse post karna tha.
First is


her birthday gift jo main de nahi paayi thi

& second is


as unka birthday tha so unke liye gift...

aur isse likhne main meri help ariyabestfan

my sonu didu ne ki hain...

hope you liked it...

CONCEPT----

Isme concept yeh hain ki

shree, chotu arjun, sam and ayesha are the part of etf...

but there is no roshni and not arjun painful past...

and samjun are best friend..

arjun lived with his parents

Sam was orphan as his parents died in car accident but now he have a family his wife ayesha who was two months pregnant..

Shree is married to mishti who is teacher in school.

and chotu engaged with his 11:30
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Posted: 10 years ago
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INDEX----

Prologue & CS 1 - pg-1
Prologue & CS 2 - pg-9
Edited by ll_megha_ll - 10 years ago
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PROLOGUE----

IN ONE HOUSE---
IN EVENING----

One women whose age is 48 yrs old she is talking to his son whose age is 24.

Lady: beta tu shaadi kar lena problem kya hain?

Boy: maa maine keh diya na mujhe yeh shaadi nahi karni.

Lady: par kyun arjun? Aakhir kya baat hain?

Arjun: koi baat nahi hain maa but mujhe shaadi nahi karni.

(Yes the guy is non another than arjun. Our ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte. Second hand command of ETF. And he was talking to his mom. Her mom Mrs. Sudha SUryakant Rawte.)

Sudha: lekin kyun?

Arjun: maa aap to jaanti main ek police officer hoon. Aur meri jaan ko 24hrs khatra rehta hain so main kissi ladki se shaadi karke uska future barbaad nahi karna chahata.

Sudha: maanti hoon but tu dekh sameer beta ne bhi to shaadi ki hain na aur shree ne bhi. So tu mujhe yeh faaltu ke excused mat de. Maine tere liye ek ladki pasand ki hain woh bahut hi sunder aur pyaari hain aur woh

But before she could complete arjun says

Arjun: maine kaha na maa mujhe shaadi nahi karni. Aur naahi woh aapki pasand ki hui ladki dekhni.

Sudha: but beta tu mujhe batayega aakhir baat kya hain? Tu shaadi ke liye kyun naa kar raha hain? Kahi tera kissi ke saath chaakar to nahi hain yaa fir tera kissi ne dil todh diya yaa fir tune mujhse chupake pehle se hi kissi aur se shaadi karli?

Hearing this arjun gets shocked but before he could complete his father Mr. Suryakant Rawte interrupted him who comes there from office and hears his wife and son talk

Suryakant: bus sudha bahut ho gaya tum kuch zayada hi filmy nahi ho rahi. Jabh dekho tumhara shaqi dimag. Yeh tumhara dimag in saas-bahu ke serial ne hi bigada hain.

Hearing this Sudha just glared hin while arjun just started laughing and hearing his laugh suryakant also couldn't controlled his laugh so he also started laughing with arjun.

Seeing this sudha gets more angry and says in her angry voice

Sudha: haan hasso khub udhao mera aur mere serials ka mazak.

(loll obsessed for serials😆)

Saying this she sits on sofa and turned her face away from him on the other hand hearing this both father and son stopped laughing and looked sudha and then each other and smiles to himself as they know sudha was doing just drama. Both smile at each other then goes towards sudha.

Suryakant sits beside sudha where as arjun just sits in front of his mom and put his head on his lap.

Sudha sees this but she didn't say anything when arjun says

Arjun: I am sorry maa. Please mujhe maaf kar dijiye.
(ohh my god arjun saying sorry😲 but mom hain na aur vaise bhi mom ke saamne acche acche ki fati hain to fir arjun kya cheez hain😆)

Suryakant: sudha maaf kardo na bechare arjun ko vaise bhi woh kabh kabhi kabar hi sorry bolta hain aur tum to lucky ho woh tumhe sorry keh raha hain. Aur fir woh apni galti maan raha hain na so tum maaf kardo isse.

Hearing this arjun and both sudha looked towards suryakant. Arjun was looking his father with shocked expression as his father put blame all over him and also he didn't asked forgiveness from his mother and sudha also shocked and gets more angry and turned towards him and says

Sudha: isme arjun ki nahi balki aapki galti hain. Infact sabse zayada aapki galti hain because aaphi ne mera aur mere serials ka mazak banaya tha. Arjun to sirf hasa tha lekin aapki doosri galti yeh ki mera mazak udhane ke baad aap bhi uske saath hase so aapko m,ujhse double maafi maangni chahiye.

Hearing this now Suryakant gets shocked and arjun just smile atr him and now suryakant says

Suryakant: ok galti meri bhi hain and I am sorry sudha for hurting you.

Arjun: haan maa mujhe bhi maaf kar dijiye hain

Sudha says

Sudha: ok lekin meri ek shart hain
Hearing this both looked towards each other then sudha and smiles and both says in union

Both: hame har shart manzoor hain

Hearing this sudha smirked and give them her evil smile says

Sudha: surya (suryakant as arjun mom called suryakant surya) aapko mere saath ek poora din mere favourite serials dekhne honge.

Hearing this suryakant first shocked and just nodded his head and arjun was controlling his laugh and sudha sees this but sm,iles evily and she says

Sudha: aur arjun tum

Before she could complete arjun says

Arjun: haan maa

Sudha smiles and says

Sudha: tumhe uss ladki se shaadi karni hogi.

Hearing this arjun gets shocked and says

Arjun: what???

TBC...

Now what will arjun do?

Is he says yes to the marriage?

To know more stay tuned...





Edited by ll_megha_ll - 10 years ago
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CHARACTER SKETCH----
1. ARJUN SURYAKANT RAWTE


hot headed cop never believes going by law. Loves his ETF member and his family a lot an emotional and sensitive person loves his friend sameer a Lot 2nd in command of ETF.

2.Mr. SURYAKANT AND MRS. SUDHASURYAKANT RAWTE


Mr. Rawte is a famous dimond merchent and Mrs. Rawte is house wife. Both loved his son very much and also loved arjun team mates specially sameer and his wife. And both want now there son arjun gets married.

3. ACP SAMEER DHYAMSINGH RATHORE



A tough cop full fill all his duties towards his nation & family loves his job a sweet natured person by heart loves his friend Arjun & his wife Aisha a lot. Duty always comes first for him chief of ETF. He also want his friend arjun should now settled in his life.

4. AYESHA RATHORE


3rd in command of ETF a beauty with brains a lady with a strong mental strength. She loves his husband very much. She is two months pregnant.

4. SHREEKANT SEN

Gadget freak of ETF and an intelligent Technical expert a fun loving guy. And loves his wife mishti.

5. MISHTI SHREEKANT SEN



She is very sweet and kind nature. She is teacher in school. She teaches poor children. She opened her own sschool. Loves shree very much.
6. CHANDRAKANT PATIL


Commando of ETF huge size body but a beautiful and caring heart person . Loved his 11:30 and enjaged with her.

7. SAPNA SHARMA


She is chotchotu 11:30 loves her chotu very much.

Rest the character will post soon

Hope you liked it

Edited by ll_megha_ll - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It's awesome concept di
Loved it very much
Between u didn't mention anything about Riya
Loved Arjun's bond with his family
I think her mother was saying about Riya
U stopped at wrong place di
Eagerly waiting to read more
Please do continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice story dr.Beautiful.Plz plz plz cont sn.Is that girl riya?U didn't mention about her even in CS.
I love this line "mom ke saamne acche acche ki fati hain to fir arjun kya cheez hain"😃😃 plz pm me when u update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome
lovd itt
dekhna hai arjun kya kahenge apni maa se...
continue sooon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome 😳
update soon plz plz plz
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow nice start
n very much interesting
plz next part update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb...


kash serial Arjun ki family lyf aise hti...


aur vo ladki???? where is she???



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