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Shravani / Arohi

@skrafty

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Congrats for the new thread

Awesome update

Loved it

Case proceedings were written nicely

Sushma bohot chalak hai

waiting for the next part

continue soon

Thanks for the PM

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Tabassum Nitol

@_Tabassum_

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Congratulation! for the new thread...
Awwwsssmmm Update
Loved it
Supperbly written as always...
So Christine wad Sushma... n now she is missing...
What will they fo now...???
Cont Sooon
Waiting eagerly for the next part..
Thanks for the PM

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Atisha Khan

@Shamsad1607

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

congratulations for the new thread...

this chapter was really fabulous... a day of investigation... and full of clues... moreover you've woven the suspence and thrill very nicely... i just wished it doesn't end...i was totally engrossed into it.

sakshi,sam, arjun,chotu,shree...everyone got something,they saw,noticed, felt the threat around themm...but still they couldn't catch them...or failed to realise... beautiful!!!

do continue... reallly can't bear the suspence anymore... make it fast...pleeezzze!!

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rimi

@rimi_invisible

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

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@Savali : thank you so much dear...samjun ko jab pic mila they have already lost christine...😛
haan sushma is intelligent and smart too..😉😉
wait..story abhi baki hain mere dost...keep reading..😆

@ariyabestfan : thanks😊

@sneha : thanks gabbu...agar tum doubt nehi karti to mujhe likne mein itna mazaa nehi ata..trust my each word on this..😆 keep reading..🤢

@laila : 🤢🤢🤢

@ishi : kabhi to padh bhi to lo..kabhi to unres bhi kardo..😛

@kuchu : thanks KG..homework...ab bas pucho hi maat..🥱 keep reading..😃

@aditi : thanks dear...glad you liked..keep reading..😳😳

@skrafty : thanks dear..keep reading..😊

@nikita : thanks dear...😊

@atisha : thanks buddy...kaha ho ap?? really missing you nowadays..glad you still making the time to read and comment on this..next updt coming up..😳😳

@goldie : thanks darling..lekin thread 2 pe kyu comment kar diya??😕
nways glad you liked..keep reading and do leave your comments..😃

@annu : thanks annu...glad you liked...waise tumne bhi gold ko follow kiya?😕😕😕😕
keep reading..updt coming soon..😃😃

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rimi

@rimi_invisible

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

A sneak peak for chapter 41C 😉

Ayesha opened the door of her car and asked her to move in. She looked back for the last time at Arjun annoyed and slipped inside.

Ayesha took the steering. Annu looked out from the window while the engine started and that's when her rescue came in view. She forwarded her head outside the window and shouted with all her might.

'Dost!!!! Bachaaooo,' she shouted at Sameer, who was just coming out of the auditorium hurriedly with officer Apte while the bomb squad people worked inside.

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update is pmed to my readers...please leave your comments..😳

next update will be posted next saturday..😃😃

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Shravani / Arohi

@skrafty

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

res/unres

YAY!!!!!!!

me first

🥳🥳🥳🥳

Awesome update

loved it

that camera guy was DIXIT!!!!😲

finally they have found the bomb

Annu waha kaise pohoch gayi

Aisha is taking her home

just hope is sab ke peeche aur koi intention na ho

waiting for the next part

continue soon

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Bhavna Antriwale-Gargate

@bgargate

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Sorry ... couldn't comment on earlier part 😳

But both the parts were brilliantly written ...👏👏

Loved the every little detailing 😊

And what happened in the end was really unpredictable 😳

Annu being there ... It seems to be planned

Waiting for more 😊

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Snehajain

@Snehajain

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

For cliffhanger...(I m the one who is pressing the red cylinder & u r the one being blasted)

Awesome update...

That guard was bewakoof...

Details were written nicely & clearly...👏👏👏

I think hospital blast was not accidental...😕😕😕...dont know why but I have became very sceptical about everything...😆😆😆

Billu came there to fit the bomb...😲😲😲

That reporter was Dixit...😲😲😲...itna doubt kiya har cheez pe phir bhi kuch kaam nahi aaya...

Really liked Arjun controlling Sameer from loosing his temper...😃😃😃

Finally they locate the bomb...👏👏👏

I think it has been connected to some wire there in audi...😕😕😕

Bomb description was superb...Medical chodke Bombs banane mein lag jao...😆😆😆 😉😉😉

Than comes entry of Annu...🤢🤢🤢

Annu's entry in all this again gave me doubt...

Annu was excited to come here & became more excited seeing her mum their but her excitement was changed into sadness...koi uski nahi sunta story aur aap meri nahi sunte...

Ab Sameer kya karega??😕😕😕

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

PS :- Last line of this update has been misused by me to make someone scared...🤣🤣🤣

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

loved it Rimi

Awesome update

case details as usual really good

crisp , clean & to the point ⭐️⭐️

I think you seem to masters in such things dear 😉😉

& this is your strong point

Finally ETF ko bomb itni mushkil se mil gaya 👏

lets see aage kya hota hai

Anu ko wahah laakae tumne really jaan nikaal di thi 🤢

hope ETF stops all this on time 😊

Thanks for the PM

Continue son

PS : dear ispe isliye kiya ki wahah already 152 pages ho chuke the 😆

Edited by GOLD.A - 10 years ago

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Annu

@Chulbuli_Annu

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

gold ko follow kia matlab 😕

wah kya guard hai...fasa dia naa sabko

ab etf team dhundo apne bal pr bomb ko

and dixit wo bhi kam chalak nhi ha

sakshi ki aankhon k saamne tha pr pehchan me nhi aaya

aur bach nikla...kisi aur ko fasa kr

sab kuch gadbad hi hota jaa rha hai

jaise taise bomb mila bomb squad aaya

lo annu bi aa gyi

mujhe doubt lga hi tha...tum annu ko kahi fasa mat dena

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