Arakshi Fic: Entwined with you.. Ch 6/ Note - pg. 27 9/4

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Avantika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: SeasonOfLeaves
How do you do it? 😲 You get up at IST timings and sleep at GMT timings.. if you know what I mean!
Anyway..
Ress!😳

😆😆 Wait a few years, and you'll know how.. (O Wait.. you'd rather not..)

Jokes apart.. I will never be able to write if I dont do that, u know..

Edited by Fantasia_junkie - 11 years ago

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kunchu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Hailaaa... aajkal mujhe sablog virtual tours derahi hai

Now you took me one of my biggest dream destination (of course with you all) Mumbai.

The initial paras, you took me to those rush roads, Marine drives and bhel puri... yummy. Nice smell. Damn sabere hi muh me paani.

But then of course the terrible loneliness creep in, and no it was not a bad thing. I always said na... words have magic when put together perfectly in a chord.

The the logger heads meet... and how!!!

Every word, every look, every sigh and even every postures showed how much they are hurt, alone and self loathed than towards each other.

Betrayed!! that indeed is a terrible pain. believe it or not back stabbing hurts like hell, esp from the person whom we never expect to. yupyup... I know I am drifting. *Come back KK*

Sree-Liza-Ayush!! what a perfect timing to reduce the intensity. Loved them and the intro to the RRs.

Waiting to know the changes in that end. you know what I meant.

And then Radhika. As I told you, you made me realize how much I had missed her. The change in scenes doesnt change the love to her jaani. Loved her more and more. And the FB was a cherry on top of a black forest. yum I miss it.. *come back again KK*

As I said before, he is lonely. Its not only the memory of roshni that hurts him. Its his guilt towards Radhika of abandoning her. I just can't wait for the reunion. I know you will take your time. waiting for the sweet torture just like me waiting for the waiter walking in with a tray full of my fav items in my fav restaurant.

*I seriously lost my nuts!! KK jagooo*

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Nethravathi Jagadish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

So sorry for late comment

Arjun - Roshni, Radhika - Sameer. So no Ayesha here

Arjun lost Roshni and Sam thinks that Arjun is responsible for this. Radhika Sam se door hain aur Arjun samajta hain ki Sam ki galti hain isme. Yaar indono ki misunderstanding kab katam hogi.

Loved Liza & Shree's convo. Ye dono kabhi nahi sudrenge.Little Arush was so cute. Kya karaar jawaab diya Arjun ko

Radhika & Arjun ka bonding bahut hi cute hain.

Radhika, Arjun, Sam teeno ke dil main ek doosre ke prati bahut pyaar hain phir bhi they are not expressing it

Edited by Nethravathi - 11 years ago

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Tabassum Nitol

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Awwwsssmmm Update
Loved it very much
Wonderfully Written
Arjun is back...
They mer after two long years...
Sam had hurt both Arjun n Radhika
Flashback was Supper Awwssmm...
They care for eachother more then anything else...
Radhika thinking to move on
Cont Sooon
Waiting for next part
Thanks for the PM

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NainaSM

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Sollly sollly sollly

Anjali nahi radhikaa mujhe wo old banner yaad aaya

Superb update

Samjun radhika apane aapne past KO bhulane ki koshish kar rahe he ...but its not easy to move on

Shree lizaaa ayushh cute

Samjun dono ne kuch decision liye aurrr galati kar di

Abb kya ?

Continue soon

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smanchik

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

I LOVE YOU FF's. they are just amazing. I loved the beginning. greedy for more! LOL keep on updating!!!

- your fan

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Devangana

@Devangana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Loved it. Thanks for the pm and looking forward to the story. The bonding between Roshni-Arjun, Shree-Lisa and even Sameer-Arjun was so wonderfully portrayed. The undercurrents of pain, hurt and betrayal as Arjun put it stood out. Please update soon.

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Natasha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Awesome update
Loved it :)
Thanks for the pm

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Farheen Shaikh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

No wait!!! I haven't read the chapter yet.This one's for the Prologue😳

Waiting for the entry of Cutie pie lollipop

Edited by ll-Farheen-ll - 11 years ago

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Avantika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: ll-Farheen-ll

No wait!!! I haven't read the chapter yet.This one's for the Prologue😳

Waiting for the entry of Cutie pie lollipop

Aww.. that is soo true.. in fact we have double the responsibilities.. 😛😆

Cutie pie ki cuteness ke liye, like I said, thoda sa rukna padega.. 😳

Edited by Fantasia_junkie - 11 years ago