Arakshi FF T2: Mars V/S Venus (Ch 30 - pg 36) *new*

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Delusional Minx

@Delusional_Minx

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+ 33

Posted: 10 years ago

#201

Whoa Dear!! what have you written, you've just left me speechless!!😳

Loved this update to the core, truly amazing!👏

I was actually waiting for Arjun's POV, I'm glad that I got it! You've written it fantastically! Just perfect!😃

Looking at everything form his POV was really important, well I did it before but reading this was more fun! 😉

Arjun's love for Sakshi is portrayed beautifully! His wants, desires n lust!👏

He fainted at the scene, "Sakshi bled n I died" This line was superb!😃

His fears were nicely put up! He feared to lose her! He is still unknown to her past, it'd be damn interesting when he comes to know about it! Eagerly waiting for that part!😉😊

He feels that he is responsible for her suicide, but he isn't, really! The blame game is on!

Waiting for the next chapters! 😃

Do continu soon

thanks for pm

Love,

You know..😛😉

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Snehajain

@Snehajain

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Posted: 10 years ago

#202

Awesome update...

I think this was the first update with Arjun's POV...😃😃😃

It was written perfectly...😃😃😃

But the fact that Arjun is totally blind about Sakshi's reaction is

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

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Anu

@anu91

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#203

Awe shree...

The emotions u portrait was no words...

Simply loved it...

Waiting for further updates...

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IArmageddonI

@IArmageddonI

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#204

Originally posted by: 0913155
Beautifully described😃😛😉 loved the update.hope .. Arjun knws saakshi's past
Plz continue soon thanx for pm

Glad you loved it!

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IArmageddonI

@IArmageddonI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#205

Originally posted by: shurtiekta
awsm update
sakshi ne suicide
yr jldi sari misunderstanding khtm kro
both r r8 in dr view
thnx fr pm
cnt soon.

Thanks a ton for ur comment, yes the new chapters shall bring more of sunshine :)

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IArmageddonI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#206

Originally posted by: _Shivani_
Its too difficult to express ur feelings...even to ur parents...Sometimes even they misunderstood you...The only solution is to speak ur heart out...Is it so easy?? Nope..!! Not at all...Its too hard...Jaise Majak mein tum dost ko hazar baar i love you bol sakte ho...but the day u actually mean it...or feel for that person...Wat!! lag jati hai!! hehehe...Even sometimes you will trouble urself with ur fears n insecurities...and..will get into depression...but you won't speak a word about it with parents...untill you face any major consequences...Bechara Human...N...Uska MahaBechara Nature n Behavior... Phewww...Saks is alive... Btw sorry for the above PRAVACHAN... Saks is afraid of Arjun...Ye toh hona hi tha... OMG!!! Arjun fainted...Gosh!!! Atleast Usse pata toh chala ye sab uske wajese hua hai... Eagerly waiting for next update... pls post it soon...

Glad you loved it so much.

I am so happy that you actually ki dil ki baat bolne main kya dikkat hoti hai.

That's true... what u have written is perfectly true!!!! Not a pravachan at al...

Yeah... i hope u love this update :)

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IArmageddonI

@IArmageddonI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: Devangana
Thanks for the pm. It was awesome. I had read what Sakshi felt earlier but Arjun's pov is also to be considered. Neither of them was wrong but they did not talk to each other enough. Only if they had, a lot of heart burn could have been avoided. Continue soon please.

Aww! Glad u loved it! It's true... lack of communication often causes the greatest troubles of all...

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IArmageddonI

@IArmageddonI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#208

Originally posted by: shaheen82
awesome update dear 😊
just loved arjun's pov...
It was superb...beautifully written.. Do continue soon and thanx for pm 😊

Glad you loved it dear! Tks for comment

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IArmageddonI

@IArmageddonI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#209

Originally posted by: _Nikita_
Awwwsssmmm Update
Loved It
Supperbbb
Till now it was Sakshi's POV n now Arjun's POV m
He was insecure n scared that he might lose her but never express his emotions fully
Sakshi also never her voiced out her feelings n Arjun couldn't understand her
Neither of them are at fault
Let's see what happens next
Continue Soon
Waiting eagerly for next part

Thanks a ton dear for ur comment, means a lot to me.

Yep, misunderstandings are one of the greatest problems in our life!

tks for comment <3

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IArmageddonI

@IArmageddonI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#210

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU
I just drown in the illusory world of aristocracy that builds up in the chapters.I simply gape in awe while I go through this work of yours.The plethora of conflicting emotions displayed with neatly weaved words is simply magnificent and worth applauding.😊👏 The figments of past memories made me remember T.S.Eliot's poems on the frailty of modern man's life.
The story is great going and cast its spell all over again with exploration of new dimensions to the characters.
Thanks for the pm and keep writing with unabated spirits.😊

Ah and I am simply in love with your comments :)

Glad you love this story of mine as well <3 It's one of my own personal favourites.

Thanks a ton for ur comment, means a lot to me.

I hope u like what's to come further <3