Arakshi/Raesha SS; Ye Hai Mohabbatein (Part 4 updated page 23)

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EshaalYousufzai

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: ll..Ridz..ll

batao konsi line per kaha hai i m being andhi had read this 5 6 times.. 🤢🤢

Neche tune kuch questions chode the..Wahi pe abi bhi Karan likh hua hai..

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Rida

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: EashaYousufzai

Neche tune kuch questions chode the..Wahi pe abi bhi Karan likh hua hai..

mene sahi krlia hai now waiting for shree to comment 😃😃

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EshaalYousufzai

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: ll..Ridz..ll

mene sahi krlia hai now waiting for shree to comment 😃😃

😛😛

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IArmageddonI

@IArmageddonI

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Hmm...

Rida... yeh ladki ne mere stories padhi bhi nahi... main padhoon ya nahi?

*me thinking*

Aur kyunki yeh meri dost hai toh pad toh loongi... par kya bada comment doongi kyunki woh toh bhool hi gayi mere stories pe comment karne ke liye 🤢

*me thinking*

Chal chod yeh sab...

FIrst of all I loved the start that you wrote.. beautifully written...

Especially the emotions.. nicely sketched...

Sigh... Arjun seems to forget that if a father has lost his baby... then even a mother has lost a part of her being...

9 months a mother gives to her child... her own flesh and blood... even then... she becomes strong only to look after Arjun... :)

His walls have to be broken... otherwise by the time he revives... Sakshi would be broken forever...

And yes... Raesha... aww... such a cute baby they have..

Waiting for the questions to be answered... 😊

Samar... nice name...

Really liked this story...

Continue soon and all the best dear!

Hope this story becomes a success soon :)

~ Shree

Edited by Armagadon - 11 years ago

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Rida

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Armagadon
Hmm...

Rida... yeh ladki ne mere stories padhi bhi nahi... main padhoon ya nahi?

*me thinking*

Aur kyunki yeh meri dost hai toh pad toh loongi... par kya bada comment doongi kyunki woh toh bhool hi gayi mere stories pe comment karne ke liye 🤢

*me thinking*

Chal chod yeh sab...

FIrst of all I loved the start that you wrote.. beautifully written...

Especially the emotions.. nicely sketched...

Sigh... Arjun seems to forget that if a father has lost his baby... then even a mother has lost a part of her being...

9 months a mother gives to her child... her own flesh and blood... even then... she becomes strong only to look after Arjun... :)

His walls have to be broken... otherwise by the time he revives... Sakshi would be broken forever...

And yes... Raesha... aww... such a cute baby they have..

Waiting for the questions to be answered... 😊

Samar... nice name...

Really liked this story...

Continue soon and all the best dear!

Hope this story becomes a success soon :)

~ Shree

hawww...

no ghussa karing pwwease..

wo kia haina mardaani ke lie comment kr rhi thi

wo khadoose warna parts nhi deti mujhe

or tu ab nhi nachi 😆😆

lol rehne de joking

and yeah teri comments me jaan hai chal baccha ur also intelligent 😉😉

koi nahi just wait n watch 😊😊

and thanks for the lambu comment lub u 🤗🤗

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misakiscarlet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

amazing update rida..
loved rohan .. amd feeling sad for him
contd. soon
thnx for pm

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ashmi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Nice start more doubts are want to make clear for upcoming updates continue soon dear... Thanks for the pm

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samvedha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

kitna acha flash back tha

what happend to rohan

pls let him be kidnapped or missing

for some reason not there with them

but dont say he is no more pls

cont soon

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Areesha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

wow nice start

what happen to rohan, plz tell me he's not dead

chahe usy gum karwa do, kidnaped karwa do par plz dont kill him

fbs were super cute

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Areesha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: samvedha
kitna acha flash back tha
what happend to rohan
pls let him be kidnapped or missing
for some reason not there with them
but dont say he is no more pls
cont soon

i didn't copy your comment, its just a coicidence hum 2no ke comments lag bhug same hain