An OS: A Fallen Angel

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Megha32

@Megha32

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#31

An awesome os it was !!!!
I was crying reading it
n the shayari was beautiful
that "kinaare par hi doob jaate hum" one
really the emotions were so clearly expressed that i could feel the pain riya was going through
seriously i really appreciate this one
superb work

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neitka

@neitka

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#32

randomly i read this story

so emotionally

well written

made me cry

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-DarkSlayer-

@-DarkSlayer-

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+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Came back to this forum after well over 9 months and this was the first thing I clicked on...Lord help me but I grew crazy senti as I read this. I'm speechless...this was a fabulous piece of writing. Hats off! 👏

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Diya

@auroradowney

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#34

I don't know what to say. ... I can't write more. ... I can't say anything about it. ... . . . . . . I cried too much. ..I m crying out bitterly. ...although it is a story but I can't even imagine that. ... I know what it feels when ur love moves on in his life but we r left at the same place waiting for him... I m feeling the pain which she would have felt ... my heart is wincing with pain.but anyway you wrote well ... well not well but I just kept crying. ... seriously u r very good writer. ... but a request guys plz don't write such emotional and sad stories as they may make someone remember of their bitter past...but somewhere in my heart I enjoyed reading it...although I kept crying from the part when arjun jerked riya off...u r awesome dii...don't have words to describe the os...appreciative words would be an understatement for such an amazing writer...

Edited by neerajanariya - 10 years ago

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wordsofwisdom

@wordsofwisdom

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#35

it was so awesome

and emotional os dii

i was speechless after reading this one

and i'm crying too

dii , it's realy a superb os

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Ishita

@BubliBag

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#36

It is such a beautiful os😊

I am just speechless😭

It is so heart touching and heart wrenching story😭❤️

Sahi kehate hai first love rarely lives for a long time and still it is immortal😊😭

I was just crying while reading this story😭

I wish that the angel of his life returns to him in some other form ,somewhere else ,some other life or ... some other world 😊

Loved it😊

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SATRISHI

@SATRISHI

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#37

really some writtings are prints in our heart this one of them

i dont know why i connected with this and i loved this...

by u r index iread this one again thank u

and me also wishes...same as bublibag

Edited by SATRISHI - 10 years ago

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swethalovely

@swethalovely

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#38

What an emotional os ...
Riya has undergone so much pain 😭
I m almost crying 😭 😭 😭
Can't get any more words...

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rosamale

@rosamale

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: stutisinghania
it was so awesome

and emotional os dii

i was speechless after reading this one

and i'm crying too

dii , it's realy a superb os

Thank you soo much dear. even i was crying today while reading it again😳

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rosamale

@rosamale

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: BubliBag
It is such a beautiful os😊
I am just speechless😭
It is so heart touching and heart wrenching story😭❤️
Sahi kehate hai first love rarely lives for a long time and still it is immortal😊😭
I was just crying while reading this story😭
I wish that the angel of his life returns to him in some other form ,somewhere else ,some other life or ... some other world 😊
Loved it😊

As a matter of fact, i am thinking of a sequel to this OS😉 So that the Angel of his life returns to him