An OS: A Fallen Angel - Page 4

An awesome os it was !!!!
I was crying reading it
n the shayari was beautiful
that "kinaare par hi doob jaate hum" one
really the emotions were so clearly expressed that i could feel the pain riya was going through
seriously i really appreciate this one
superb work

randomly i read this story

I don't know what to say. ... I can't write more. ... I can't say anything about it. ... . . . . . . I cried too much. ..I m crying out bitterly. ...although it is a story but I can't even imagine that. ... I know what it feels when ur love moves on in his life but we r left at the same place waiting for him... I m feeling the pain which she would have felt ... my heart is wincing with pain.but anyway you wrote well ... well not well but I just kept crying. ... seriously u r very good writer. ... but a request guys plz don't write such emotional and sad stories as they may make someone remember of their bitter past...but somewhere in my heart I enjoyed reading it...although I kept crying from the part when arjun jerked riya off...u r awesome dii...don't have words to describe the os...appreciative words would be an understatement for such an amazing writer...

it was so awesome

It is such a beautiful os😊

really some writtings are prints in our heart this one of them


i dont know why i connected with this and i loved this...


by u r index iread this one again thank u


and me also wishes...same as bublibag

What an emotional os ...
Riya has undergone so much pain 😭
I m almost crying 😭 😭 😭
Can't get any more words...

Originally posted by: stutisinghania

it was so awesome

and emotional os dii

i was speechless after reading this one

and i'm crying too

dii , it's realy a superb os

Originally posted by: BubliBag

It is such a beautiful os😊

I am just speechless😭

It is so heart touching and heart wrenching story😭❤️

Sahi kehate hai first love rarely lives for a long time and still it is immortal😊😭

I was just crying while reading this story😭

I wish that the angel of his life returns to him in some other form ,somewhere else ,some other life or ... some other world 😊

Loved it😊