An OS: A Fallen Angel

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laila

@laila1994

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

OMG. This was a brilliant OS.

Riya's suffering was really painful.

I just couldn't stop myself from pitying her.

But like others I wouldn't blame Arjun either. I get it he loved her & he promised to stay in love with her But for how long?? I am talking about a real world here. He did wait for her as much as he could.

& he did n't even know about her state. So yeah, I don't blame Arjun.

I must say Riya's strength, Will power, Determination...all deserves the applause.

Riya's death was a shock...I wasn't really expecting an end like this😲

Arjun is in mental asylum...waiting for his angel. His riya😃

But again I can't help myself from connecting the chain between Riya-Arjun-Sakshi.

Firstly Riya waited for Arjun, Now Arjun is waiting for Riya, & Sakshi must be waiting for Arjun...One mistake & three life are destroyed.

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@Phir_Mohabbat

Trailblazer

+ 15

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

thanks to devildiva for recommendatng this OS

well i will be honest... arakshi kiss at first ws smwat disturbing fr me 😆 rest ws worth it 👏 👏 ur writing is too good.

how weird is love? Armans words...is it easy to fall in or out of love? So Arjun did love Ri even after marriage to Sakshi? Was it guilt the reason he bcm mad? so many unanswered ques 😆

loved it. keep writing 👏 ⭐️

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

@MRD1692020

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

I dn't have wrds to explain..

really heart touching.. 😭

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Rumpa Majumder (tani)

@tani.m

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Very Emotional Heart Touching Story

U made me cry..😭
beautifully written

Edited by tani.m - 11 years ago

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cuteariya

@cuteariya

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

OMG what a update
itna rulaya mujhe I cnt stop my tears 😭 😭 😭
I read from last night still reading & crying 😭 😭 😭
poor riya suffer so much 🥺 🥺 🥺
her father was really beast how could he do like this to his own daughter 😡 😡 😡
after free from mental hospital she came to meet arjun
but what he did to her push her away from him 😡 😡
broke her really badly 😡 😡 😡
riya suffer everything fro arjun
just keep her promise that she did to arjun
but didn't even care that & tell her he had moved on 😡 😡
let her die in werehouse 😡 😡
if arjun love was true he would try to find abt riya
but he didn't do that just wait for couple of year & moved on 😡 😡
first riya's dad hurt her badly & then arjun just killed her 💔 💔
OMG riya was pregnant with arjun child 😲 😲
but riya's dad killed her baby also 😡 😡 😡
arjun was shocked to know that riya was pregnant with his child
arman outburst on arjun justify 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼
finally arjun realize what he done to the girl who loved him beyond her life 😒 😒 😒
riya lived for arjun & died for arjun 🤢 🤢 🤢
& what she got nothing 😭 😭 😭
the way arman blame arjun for riya's dead
& he told arjun what happened with riya in this 7year that was really heart broken🥺 🥺 🥺
god came from haven to take riya's soul 🤔 🤔
arjun knew now riya's soul also leave him for forever
riya was cry to see love of her life crying for her death 😭 😭
OMG arjun went to the same mental hospital where riya was 😲 😲
just waiting for riya to came to take him with her
dear iss ka second session mil sakta hai want to know what gonna happen with arjun after riya's death

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DivineDarkness

@DivineDarkness

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

I so hate Arjun he deserve what he is going through...

His love was so fickle towards both Riya and Sakshi...

Only mistake both girls did was loving him and suffered!

Arman's word's r so true if you are to fall in &out of love why n 1st place fall in love???

RIYA She LIVED for Him and DIED for HIM and HE Moved on!!!

She told him what she went through yet broke her heart again...

Fine he moved on but couldnt he spoke to her bit nicely...

and how dare he question her about her whereabouts ??? What kind of ACP is he who couldnt find about girl whom he loved???? OH well he moved on!

Brilliant Work... Do write more😊

P.S :Thanks Ri for telling about this story and you know for what 😉

Edited by DivineDarkness - 11 years ago

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DivineDarkness

@DivineDarkness

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: rosamale

Surya's movie
jillendru oru kadhal😊

But i dont like the ending of that movie. i only like the part where Surya and Bhumika Chawla are together.

Err dnt know why i like it's ending... May be bcoz she too moved on or coz of my liking towards Surya- Jo☺️

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Tumpa12

@Tumpa12

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

superb awesome

loved it

it's so emotional yaar

i'm really speechless

thnx 4 pm

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Amita Patel

@KaShforever06

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

It was emotional os..

You have written it so amazingly..

Poor riya she had to face lot..

Arjun moved on with Shakshi forgetting about riya..

How could he?? He hurted riya lot..

Riya was pregnant with Arjun's baby..

And the baby died..

Thanks for the pm..

Keep writing

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Arooj Arain

@aroojarain

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#30

whoa..
jus loved it..
it was awesome..
it is one of the amazing OS I have read so far...
u literally made me cry...
n.shayari and the last lines was too good.. :)