PRAIKRAMA - THE CIRCLE OF LIFE [COMPLETE] - Page 75

Chap 11 and 12

nice update...
the karwachauth scene was good...but had you put an fb instead of the whole conversation..it would have added more magic to the whole part..i missed the sam rosh fb..😊

then came the family outing..and then the robbery..
aisha is hurt...damini is terrified..sameer helps them..

but again those family members..blabber out something differemt.. but it was actually right..
sameer shouldnt have left prithvi alone..the robbers could have attacked him too..

nways...the chapter was sort of a filler...not much progress with the story...
aisha and sameer coming closer...but again i felt that 'ji' part was sounding absurd..

now a new case...will read later in the evening..😊

okay i am back with chap 13 and 14...soon na??😆

so finally aisha confronts with her brother and SIL but wasnt it on a very minor issue??
sam and aisha were eating out and talking among themselves...they had done that in front of karan too..
even karan had left his daughter with aisha and sameer the earlier day...then suddenly their alone dinner made him angry and he confronted her...

i felt it a bit hurried...the reason could have been something more serious..🤢

the confrontation was written brilliantly..finally aisha decides to leave and luckily gets the accomodation settled too..
team's concern was nice and friendly..arjun aisha se kyu nehi pucha..they too share a nice bond na??

recently i am more hooked to arisha than raesha..(something is wrong with me)😛

finally aisha moves out...now what??

ohh i have updates pending..ab mein sone chali..will come back in the evening again..😆

comment for the last two parts...

ill be frank with you...i hope you wont mind...if yes you can bash me..😳
i am utterly disappointed..
the end was hurried and it was bit too cheezy and filmy.,,

i know u wanted to give an happy ending..but it could have been better..
they come to know of their family's real face...what were they doing in whole of the story?? cummon they are ETF officers...they would have guessed long back..

when they fought and left their house i thought u are getting to their strengths...but it all came down to such weak personalities...

one more thing...the whole story didnt have one glimpse of roshni..
sam loved her right..then how didnt he ever imagine stuffs with her?? missed those flashbacks...
even aisha's past wasnt discovered..

they supported each other but how??😕
the small gettogether in the end was nice but a filmy one..i dont complain for that though...its fine..
finally prithvi aur damini ki shadi kyu karwai??🤢

nways the storyline was good...but it should have been dragged a bit..initially it was dragged and in the end u hurried with it...that spoiled the fun for me..🤢

but nice try...u are good with such stories...do try writing again..
sorry for my blabber...its just my perception...
baki pm mein..😆

thanks for the pms..

sorry for being so late soo late...

Originally posted by: pihu_angad

sorry for being so late soo late...

aj hi wapas aayi...

awesome update,,,

finally Raisha sambandi ban hi gaye...

amazing ending yaar...

Originally posted by: FLOREY

awesome ending.. justified

Originally posted by: Armagadon

OH Dear Goldie,

Yep you have every right to hit me!

I know I am beautifully late...

Pata nahi kyun ittu sa hurried up laga...

Well I was really expecting a backlash to the parents... and trust me.. I liked that part...

Though I would have wanted Ayesha's past to be more sorted out.. as in the suffering of Gautam...

Aur haan... Damini and Prithvi married 😲 I thought them to be bro sis! LOL 😆

True.. aksar... you know... life is nothing but a circle...

But I felt sad that they were lonely... kabhi kabhi zindagi main ek jeevan sathi ki zaroorat padti hai...

I often felt myself that that there was indeed more to Ayesha and Sameer...

But unfortunately they suffered the most...

They had to live all these years with Prithvi and Damini...

And lead a love less life... *sigh*

I found a deep sense of vacuum amidst them..

I was looking forward to their union...

But then perhaps life is like this... do continue with these stories!

Me again very sorry for late commenting!

Loads of luv,

Shree 🤗

Hi GOLD 😃