Arakshi SS: Everything (Chapter 9 Updated) **COMPLETED** - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
Read whole story in 1 go
its nyc dear and thanx 4 pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
gud pt so every1 knows about parth ..luvd Arjun teasing
than for pm..update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
Happy Ramadan. Sameer kya tum Arjun ko kutthe, kamine bola. Dost hai vo tumhara yaar. Dadi bua ki vajah se jaldi jaldi mein shadi hogayi vo dono kya karenge? Chalo tumne apne dost ko maaf bhi kardiya. Arjun, Sakshi & Sameer, maa, papa went to mandir. After puja Arjun & Sakshi left for hospital. Arjun is making Sakshi comfortable with him with his teasing. Kya maanga bhagawan se bolo na Sakshi kaha Arjun ne. Tumhe, tumhaari khushiyaan hi tho maangegei. Arjun hai na Sakshi tumhaare saath har mushkil gadi mein
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
Today I read your story
I must say very nice and we concept
Sakshi confusion between parth and Arjun
Is really important
But most important part that me and mrs Rawte know
Parth bad behaviour regard sakshi
It's mean something fishy in sakshi past
Which Arjun don't know
Any how he get married lets see what going happen next
Keep it up and sorry to late comments
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
awesome update
loved it
thanx for pm
waiting for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
love the update dear
so everything is sorted out now hope sakshi will be happy soon n recover herself in treatment
sameer entry was lovely good atleast someone is in the office who stop him
cont soon sundari
but please update other work also if u free other wise exam bura karne ki koi jarrorat nahin hai
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
Superb update dear...
Sameer's entry was nice
hope sakshi will recover from her fear soon
cont soon...
Happy Ramadan...
😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
"The best love is the kind that awakens the soul and makes us reach for more, that plants a fire in our hearts and brings peace to our minds. And that's what you've given me. That's what I'd hoped to give you forever"
Nicholas Sparks

I simply loved this update.. and I think this quote somehow reflects her state of mind...

Ok today I am officially in luv with this story of yours...

Especially the characters that you have carved... Arjun and Sakshi :)

Amazing job dearest Eeshu :)

So now coming to line by line commenting of ur story...

Well the first breakfast - the two had it together... that is a nice thing...

Mr. Rawte ko dekh ke pata chalta hai ki Arjun ki style kaha se aata hai!

Epic Yaar Rawte sr and jr!

Aha - Pati dev.. kya introduction diya Arjun ne!

Loved it when he added Sakku's name as well :)

Yeh dono best friends ko dhasu introduction dene ka bohot shauq hai na!

Toh finally Rathore sahab ko pata chala ki dono ne shadi kar hi li!

His expressions I bet were worth recording!

Oh.. so Arjun's mom n dad know about Parth???

That really came as a shocker for me... didn't expect!

But why do I think that Arjun's mom knows way more than what has been revealed to us...

Sameer bechara - loved his wish yaar!

Arjun ka toh ho gaya ab mera kuch karwado!!! Ayesha - sun rahi hai tu!

Arjun's wish was sweet but I simply was 😳 in Sakshi's wish...

I so understand her feelings... having got the best husband in the world..

She wants to be the best wife... give him all the rights of being a husband...

So finally they will be going to the psychiatrist... good thing..

Hehe Arjun babu teasing bholi bhali Sakshi...

Isko patience naam ki koi cheez hi pata nahi!

Jab woh wish fulfill ho jayega tab woh dono hi sabse khush honge na! ☺️

Awesome update dear!!!

Am waiting for he next part :)

~ Armadolly

Edited by Armagadon - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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CHAPTER 6:

Mr. and Mrs. Rawte got down from their car when they noticed another car in their parking lot. They went to drawing room and found Mr. Purohit. Mr. Rawte's close friend. Mr. Rawte and Mr. Purohit hugged each other. Then they sat on the sofa and started talking.

Mrs. Rawte: Aap dono baithye. Main abhi ayi.

Mrs. Rawte went to the kitchen and instructed the servants to make some snacks. Then she went upstairs and opened Parth's room which she locked after his death. She went to his wardrobe and opened a drawer. It contained a diary. She brought it out. Diary of dead children is too precious to every mother. But to her it was no less than a nightmare. As if she didn't know her son all along. Just after his death she came to this room. She was crying hard when her eyes landed on the diary. She opened it and started reading. What she read snatched away her senses.

Parth described just how he tortured Sakshi day and night. How he got psychotic pleasure from it. Once he accidentally heard Sam-Arjun conversation. He came to know that Arjun loved Sakshi. He loved another girl but after hearing that he decided to marry Sakshi just to torture him. He hated Arjun. He didn't want any twin. He wanted to be only son of his parents. That didn't happen. So he decided to torture Arjun to no end. Marrying Sakshi he just got the ticket.

New tears formed at her eyes.

Mrs. Rawte: Meri Sakshi ko kitna kuch sehna pada. Maine Parth aur Arjun ko sath mein bada kya par pata nehi mera Parth kasie aisa ban gya. Yeh bat kisise nehi kahungi. Arjun se to bilkul bhi nehi. Kitna yar karta hai woh apne bhaise. Toot jyega.

After sometime she composed herself and went downstairs.

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Mr. Rawte and Mr. Purohit were talking about random things when he inquired about Sakshi.

Mr. Purohit: Yeh Sakshi kaha hai? Kahi dikh nehi rahi?

Mr. Rawte: Woh Arjun ke sath bahar gya hai.

Mr. Purohit raised his eyebrow.

Mr. Purohit: Arjun ke sath?

Mr. Rawte: Haan. Kal undono ki shadi ho gyi.

Then he narrated the whole story.

Mr. Purohit: Chalo accha hi hua. I am sure Sakshi jaldse jald apni beete bato ko bhulkar Arjun ko apna legi. Surya maine dekha tha Sakshi ki halat jab unlogone usse hospital mein admit kya. Main to dar gya tha. Behoshi mein bhi bar bar yehi keh raha the ki "Please mujhe aur mat maro. Parth mujhe aur mat maro" . Main tujhe call kya to tune suggest kya ki main Arjun ko call karu.

Mr. Rawte: Pata nehi kiyu par mera dil keh raha tha ki Arjun usski madad kar pyega.

Mr. Purohit: Arjun ke pouchneke adha ghanta pehle mera duty change ho gya isslye Arjun ne mujhe nehi dekha. Phir uss das din ki pal pal ka news main tujhe deta raha,

Mr. Rawte: Tab mujhe ehsas hua ki Arjun Sakshi se kitna pyar karta hai. Bas Rajan Parth ki yeh bat teri bhabi ko pata nehi chalna chahye. Toot jyegi bechari.

Mr. Purohit: Tu phikar mat kar. Mera muh bandh hai.

Just then Mrs. Rawte entered with snacks and coffee.

Mrs. Rawte: Kya ghus phus chal raha hai dono dosto mein?

Mr. Rawte: Woh main usse Arjun aur Sakshi ke shadi ke bade mein bata raha tha.

Trio got busy with chatting..

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Arjun took Sakshi to Mr. Tribedhi. A kind looking doctor.

Mr. Tribedhi: Dekhye Mrs. Rawte though apke pati ne mujhe pehle hi sab bata dya phir bhi main aapse muhse sab sunna chahunga.

Sakshi looked at Arjun who squeezed her hand reassuringly. Sakshi started narrating everything. Though Arjun knew the whole story. Listening everything again and seeing the tears in Sakshi's eyes he wished to kill Parth all over again.

Mr. Tribedhi: Mr. Rawte kya aap Sakshi se pyar karte hai?

Arjun: Haan.

Mr. Tribedhi: Parth se usski shadi honese pehle se hi ya..

Arjun: Pehlese hi.

Mr. Tribedhi: Phir aapne unhe propose kiyu nehi kya?

Arjun: Karna chahta tha. Jab apne dilke isharo ko samajhkar usse propose karneka plan bana raha tha tabhi usski shadi mere bhaise tay ho gyi.

Sakshi sat there with tears in eyes. How could've she been so blind? How she couldn't see the undying love he had for her? He had to go through so much. She suffered the pain Parth gave her. But Arjun bear all the pain as well as guilt all alone. He gave her shelter while he himself stood in the heat. He gave her shoulder to cry while he himself yearned for a shoulder.

Doctor gave her some medicines and told her to do some yoga. He also suggested them to spend as much as time together as possible. Giving him thanks they came out from the hospital. Sensing Sakshi's tensed attitude Arjun decided to bring her out of her worry land.

Arjun: Waise Sakshi. Main soch raha tha ki kiyuna haam kahi honeymoon karne chale. Aab dekhona doctor ne bhi kaha haam donoko sath time spend karne ke lye. Aur uparse kuch din ke lye mujhe bhi Sam aur Mr. and Mrs. Rawte ke daily kich kich se chutkana ml jyega.

Sakshi blushed deep red at the mention of honeymoon. But along with it a fear came on the surface. Parth also took her to honeymoon and there he started torturing her. But she pushed the dread feeling away. She didn't want to hurt Arjun.

Sakshi: To haam honeymoon pe kaha ja rahe hai?

Arjun: Goa.

Sakshi froze on her steps. Parth took her to Goa. Why Arjun also wanted to go there? Her heart started beating faster.

Argon understood her feelings but also understood that this time words wouldn't calm her. He purposely wanted to take her Goa. He wanted to show her difference between him and Parth. He wanted to realize and accept his love. Till then he can do nothing but pray.


Please hit the like button and do comment. I will resume my other works after finishing this one..

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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
Awesome update
Loved it
Hope Arjun Sakshi ko apne pyaar se thik karde
waiting for the next part
continue soon

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