Arakshi SS: Everything (Chapter 9 Updated) **COMPLETED**

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EshaalYousufzai

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Posted: 11 years ago

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EshaalYousufzai

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Posted: 11 years ago

Index-

Chapter 1- Page 1

Chapter 2- Page 3

Chapter 3- Page 7

Chapter 4- Page 9

Chapter 5- Page 11

Chapter 6- Page 14

Chapter 7- Page 17

Chapter 8- Page 21

Chapter 9- Page 25

Edited by EashaYousufzai - 11 years ago

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IArmageddonI

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Posted: 11 years ago

Amazing! Have loads more to write.. will fill in tom... I just can't wait for tom!!!! / unres..

First of all damn sorry for being late dear Eeshu :D :D :D

I have a lamba waala reason - will pm u!

First of all let me tell you ki after reading this I couldn't get this out of my head...

From early mornin till lat night na ami bass think korti thaki (that is whenever am free mentally) ki next ki hote pare...

Ora confess ki kore korbe...

Will there be a kissi too? LOL... I just think of various stuffs that might happen...

Toh this is one of the most loveliest stories of urs tht i hv read...

Cuz dunno y this has really touched the strings of my heart and I barely can get this out of my mind :)

The silent love... this one showed purity, maturity and innocence...

And deep love... something beyond the conventional fictional stuff!

Something realistic...real.. deep and true...

Toh now coming to line by line commenting... :)

Loved the intro dear... really beautiful...

In fact with the first few lines I connect myself to the girl out there...

Curiosity fills my mind as I read on.. Amazing work out there!

I was wowed by the next part...

The minute but effective details...

In fact for a sec I was like - Ghost?

Hehe.. crazy me.. but yes.. the same face having villainous deeds really took me by surprise...

Really how ironic can life be...

Ek chehra... ek khoon.. par ek hai aansoon ke wajah aur dusra hai uski muskaan ki wajah...

Arjun had a twin... opposite to the core...

Really a twist that I didn't see coming!

Oh my... he had been torturous... ugh! feel like killing him!

Ya - gud tht he is dead in ur story!

NO need to know what he had done... cuz Sakshi's state is a witness good enough...

Loved the genuine silent love Arjun harbors for Sakshi...

Concern, care... farak parna... yeh sab toh sachchi pyaar ki ishaara hai...

The beauty of this was that I could feel the warmth of the love between the two...

One knows the other may not...

But one thing that I am sure about is the strength and power of it...

Her flinching away from him as her friend reminds her of her tormentor...

Can feel my heart going out to her...

And his observation... too good!

Loved the understanding they share for each other...

In fact this itself can be a ss itself!

And fell in love with the revelation in the end...

Hope that she reciprocates... they both deserve each other...

Amazing job dear!

Keep it up!

Waiting for the next part!

Lots of luv dear!

~ Shree :)

Edited by Armagadon - 11 years ago

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NainaSM

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Posted: 11 years ago

good start ...👏... interesting 😉continue soon 👍🏼

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sisodia_shefali

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Posted: 11 years ago

wow a new story 👏 and it is quite different arjun had a twin and he was in air force and he is dead now and he was not what world thought of him to be
sakshi is arjun's twin bro's widow and only she and arjun knows the real rawte
arjun in love with sakshi but is sakshi also in love with him or does she know arjun's feelings towards her
well nice start but what all characters r there do tell us
thanks for pm

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Ritu Dang

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Posted: 11 years ago

awsme strt.. luvd it.. cntinue soon.. nd thnx 4 d pm

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Devangana

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Posted: 11 years ago

Nice plot. Sakshi is Arjun's brother's widow and Arjun loves her but does Sakshi also feel the same for him or does she even know that he loves her. And what about Parth ? Please continue soon.

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Nethravathi Jagadish

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Posted: 11 years ago

Parth & Arjun are twins. Parth died & Sakshi is his widow. Arjun loves Sakshi par vo bataa nahi saktha. Sakshi jab bhi Arjun ke paas jaana chaahe usse parth ki yaad aathi hai. Interesting start Easha. Ye dooriyaan khatam kardo aur Arakshi ko paas le aavo