Shaleen SS : Jaisa Tha Socha Waisa Na Hoya.. ~Part 6 Pg 27 And 28~ - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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"Di?? Tussi bhi kamaal karte ho! Ladkiyaan shaadiyan dekhne ke liye paagal rehti hai aur aap ho ki aapko shaadiyan hi nhi pasand!" Neha spoke eating another puri. "Nahi Chutki..It isnt lyk that!" The gurl spoke,licking the tangy water from her henna applied finger tips.."I love weddings! Spcly all the rituals but kya hai na? Abhi tak shaadi shuru nhi hui aur wahaan andar baithke aunties ki gossip sunne se accha hai ki kuch khaa liya jaye! Bhook bhi toh lagi thi..Bhaiya ek aur do!" She replied. "Hann Di..Ekdum Wadia Gallan Kitta Tussi..Waise Di aapki mehendi ka rang toh bahut khoobsurat hai..Dikhao toh?" Neha spoke,excitedly. The gurl forwarded her hands to her sister. The henna which was applied upto her elbows had taken a beautiful deep maroon colour.."Bahut Sundar Hai Di..!! Dekhna aapka hone wala pati aapse bahut pyaar karega!" Neha winked at her elder sister. "Yeah Whateva! You know Behna main inn sab cheezon main nhi maanti.." The gurl smiled. "I know di..But dekhna yeh sach hoga!" Neha smiled. "Zarur!"
Edited by Bubbly_Shanaya - 11 years ago
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The gurl spoke,amused. "Shanaya??" Poorvi came lukin for her in the food segment.. "Kya hua?" Shanaya asked her. "Wo Aunty Ji tumhe bulaa rahi hain." Poorvi answered. "Choti Maa?" Shanaya mused. "Theek hai..Coming!" She replied back. "Chal Behna!" Both of them kept their plates aside and after cleaning their hands with tissues. Both walked in. As They Walked in Shanaya sensed sumthing was wrong. As the atmosphere was grim and hollow. She inhaled sharply. The lit up place suddenly looked very empty. As they came to a halt.. She asked Suyyash. "Kya hua Suyyash? Yeh achaanak sab itne chup chap?" Then her gaze fell towards Shaleen,all gloomy. "Aur Isse Kya hua? Yeh Devdas mode me kyun baitha hai? Aisa lag raha hai jaise iski Paro I mean Diksha isse chhod kar bhaag gyi.." She chuckled. "Wahi toh hua hai.." Suyyash hissed. "Diksha Eloped!!!" "What The????" Shanaya gasped loudly, palms on her face. "Hailaaa!! Chhod ke bhaag gyi.." Suyyash smacked his forehead as to why he told this DQ (Drama Queen!) about it.
Edited by Bubbly_Shanaya - 11 years ago
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All of the guests looked at her. "But chalo accha hai...Samajh gyi hogi na ki kya galti karne jaa rahi hai Iss Idiot se shaadi karke! Tabhi bhaag gyi.." She giggled. Shaleen glared at her. "Ghooro Mat! Uski zindagi safal ho gyi.." Shanaya replied bitterly. "Tu chup nhi reh sakti kya be?" Suyyash spoke up. Bfore she cud protest Shaleen's mother called her. "Puttar! Tu yahaan aa..Mere paas!" Shanaya smiled "Ji Choti Maa!" and walked towards her. "Yeh bata..Ki main teri zindagi mein kya ehmiyat rakhti hunn?" His mother asked.. "Yeh kaisa sawaal hai Choti maa? Aap jaanti hai ki agar Maa ke baad meri zindagi me koi maayne rakhta hai toh wo aap ho! Meri Choti Maa.." Shanaya smiled her bubblicious smile. It was true. She shared a very special bond with Mrs. Malhotra! Provided that Shanaya's father Mr. Mukherjee And Shaleen's Father Mr. Malhotra were College Batchmates And Friends. After which her father went on to Pursue his Career in Indian Navy And His father joined the family business. But still their friendship
Edited by Bubbly_Shanaya - 11 years ago
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remained intact. She still remembered the luvly summer holidays she used to spend at the Malhotra House.. While her father was posted elsewhere in India. The warmth,care and love which she recieved frm her Choti Maa was beyond words. "Tu meri ek gall manegi?" She asked her lovingly. "Hunn Dasso!" Shanaya asked. "Dekh..Main Chahti Hunn Ki...Main Chahti Hunn Ki.." His mother tried. " Boliye Choti Maa? Kya baat hai?" Shanaya coaxed her,urging to speak. "Main Chahti Hunn Ki Tu Mere Bete Se Shaadi kar le!" Shanaya stood dre shocked. Shaleen lukd at his mother agape. "K..K..Kya Maa? Ky...Kya Bol rhi ho?" Shaleen spoke up. "Ch..Choti Maa? Yeh aap kya?" Shanaya gulped. "Wahi keh rahi hunn jo bahut pehle kehna chahiye tha..!! Agar bol diya hota toh shayad aaj yeh naubat nahi aati.." His mother,voiced out. "Priya Yeh aap?" His father spoke up.. "Aap jaante ho ji ki mere mann me humesha yeh baat thi! Agar Shaleen ne Diksha ki baat nhi hoti toh shayad baat kuch aur hoti.." His mother,spoke up. His father nodded solemnly.
Edited by Bubbly_Shanaya - 11 years ago
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Priya Malhotra, Shaleen's mother had always loved Shanaya as her own daughter. When she grew up into a beautiful young gurl, She always wanted her beauty to be the glory of the Malhotra Household. As She was too younger than Nishant, She had thought her to be the match for her younger son. The Boy With Twinkling Eyes And A Dazzling Smile Shaleen Malhotra! Secretly hoping her to be her younger Daughter-In-Law. And For this purpose she had talked to His father about and he instantly agreed knowing The gem of a girl His lil Shanaya was..!! She had also a firm decision in her head to talk to the Mukherjee's about it once Shanaya finished her graduation. Shaleen too had achieved his dream of becuming an Actor and this seemed the pefect tym as Shanaya was in the last year of her studies. But before she cud Act.. Shaleen let out that he was in Love With Diksha Rampal and wanted to maary her. And for the sake of her son's happiness, She agreed half heartedly. "Choti Maa..Aa..Aap jaanti hain na..Ki..Mujhe yeh Idiot!
Edited by Bubbly_Shanaya - 11 years ago
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sehen nhi hota..!!! Ek minute ke liye bhi nahi aur aap mujhe poori zindagi iske saath baandhne ko keh rahi hain?" Shanaya voiced out.. "Haan qki maine humesha yahi chaha tha..Tu banegi mere ghar ki laxmi.. Mere Shaleen ki Patni.." Mrs. Malhotra replied. "Maa? Yeh aap kya keh rahe ho? Shaadi? Wo bhi isse?" Shaleen tried. "Tu Chup Kar Ekdum!" His mother thundered. "Maine pehle hi kahaa tha ki yeh kudi mujhe kuch acchi nahi lagi..Dekha na tune kya hua? Chhad Ke Chali Gayi Twanu! Tere pyaar par laat maar ke!" She yelled so angrily that all fell silent. "Ab tu kuch bhi nhi bolega! Jo karna hai mujhe karna hai..Pehle mujhe laga ki shayad teri aur Diksha ki shaadi me hi Rab di Marzi hai..!! Par nahi aaj jo bhi hua uske baad Mujhe poora vishwaas ho gya ki Wahe Guru Ji ki marzi bhi issi me hai jo main chahti thi.." "Par Choti Maa?" Shanaya tried.
TBC..
Precap- "Main tujhse apne bete ki khushiyon ki bheekh mangti hunn Beta!" She spoke spreading her dupatta in front of her. "Maan Jaa!"
Edited by Bubbly_Shanaya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
!!unres!!
yay!! me first!!
AWESOME START DI!!
amazing n interesting!!
👏👏loved the start..shaadi ki taiyaariya aur baaraat was beautifully written👏👏
"taarey he baaraati..chandni he ye baraat" 😃 this is the only song that came into my mind while reading the update😉
😲😲third part me hi jhatka de diya😲😲
😭😭kudi bhag gayi😭😭
then everyone's reaction..beautifully written👍🏼
shaleen's comparision with arjun..shows the extent he was hurt😭🤢
😲the letter..omg..hell shocking😲
shaleen's mother still wants him to marry!! par kisse??
then came the lighter part!
wowie!! 🤗me n u!!😃😃😳
entry maari..wo bhi pani puri khaate huye😆waise i too love pani puri😃
loved their talk..so sweet😃 n their bonding too😉
mehendi ka rang accha he..so jiju's gonna luv u much😉😳
shanaya ne aate hi sabko hasane ki planning kar li
devdas..jaise paro bhag gayi😆 par yahan ki situation me hasi nahi aayi🤢
drama queen!!hailaa😉😆😆
loved shanaya n choti maa's bonding
pehle se hi use bahu banane ki planning kar li thi😲
this is interesting!!
ab jyaada bhav mat khao aur chup-chap shaadi kar lo😉😆
precap is interesting
waiting for next update
continu soon😃

Edited by Godly_Affection - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
*unres*
balle balle... Oye... Shava Shava...
*Punnnjaaabbbeee*
awesome blowsome start...
Loved it a lot..
Shallen really happy abt his marriage with Diksha.
Par..
Eh leh...
Ho gaya syappa...
Kudi bhag gayi...
Hunn ki hoga?
Hunn te Mrs.Malhotra ne kaha ki Shanaya unki ghar ki choti bahu bangei.. She always dreamt of Shanaya becoming her laddla's patni..
Hmm...
Shanaya.. Drama Queen.. Seriously.. *raises my eyebrow*
*singing yeh chhori bari drama queen hai*
shanaya hakka bakka hogayi...
She was shocked...
Hmmm..
So,Shanaya and Shaleen's parents' are very good family friends...
Hun ki hoga?
Precap is emotional...
Haan karde yaara...
Loved it a lot.
Continue sooonish...
Thanks for the pm...
Edited by ...anika... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: skrafty

Awesome concept
Loved it
continue soon

Thank You Aarohi..😊 Updated Part 1 too! Hope You like it too! Stay Tuned..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
Loved it dear shanu
awesome update
hmm so deeksha eloped on dday 😲
& now shaleen is getting married to shanaya
hmm baapre dono main bilkul nahin banti to shadi kaise hogi ?😕
lets see aage kya hota hai
shanu maanti ho ya nahin
thanks for the PM
continue soon 😊

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