Shaleen SS : Jaisa Tha Socha Waisa Na Hoya.. ~Part 6 Pg 27 And 28~ - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: M.V.Kohli007

Haye Shanu..


ye to hit hai..


plz update soon , agala part bhi aaj hi update kar lo mere liye...



plzzz... iske badle jo tu chahe tujhe dungi...


but plz update...

Thanxx Mannu Di..😊 Hayee..Aapko Inna Pasand Aaya? Chalo Ji..Next Part Aaj Hi..!! 😉 Stay Tuned..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: _Nikita_

Awwwsssmmm part
Loved it
Supperbbb...
Cont sooon
Thanks for PM

Thanks Niki..Stay Tuned! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: skrafty

Awesome update
Loved it
WOW
tumne to Shock kar diya
Diksha Shaa ko chod ke bhaag gayi😲😲
amazing
waiting for the next part
continue soon

Thanxx Aarohi..Haan Diksha Bhaag Gayi..!! Hahaha..😈 Stay Tuned..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: ll_megha_ll

wow dear...

awesome update..
just loved it..
do continue soon..
and thanks for the pm..

Thanx Meghu! Stay Tuned..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: fatiLuvShaleen

sorry for being late didu🤢
aapne kitne pyaal se bataya tha ki u have updated but mene sabse last me comment kia
but kia karo probs thi bataya naa dad prob?? 😡😡😡
jab aap online hogi naa tab bataogii 😃😃😃
coming to the update...
Shaleen kitna khush tha hayee uski smile
Diksha bhag gyi 🤢🤢🤢
or saali ka letter tu dekho no guilt 😡
galliyan baakne ka dil chaah raha hai $#@#$$##@!!!!>>>
itne maaze se mere SM ko mana kardia
SM was sad 🤢🤢🤢
ROFL u eating pani puri 😆😆😆 or andar har kisi puri par paani fir gaya 🤢🤢🤢
SM mom asked u to get married to him
waah apni tareef 😉😉😉
precap bhi acha tha
good work 👏


Thanxx Fati Babu! Koi Baat Nahi..I understand! 😊 Stay Tuned..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: rizwanaa

awesome start!!
the wedding sequence
reflecting the bundle of joy
among the family members of Sha
and his buddies was well written n was enjoyable to read
Sha's happiness of being tied up
in the scared bond with his lady love
was also beautifully written
but then Diksha's step ruined all the dreams n happiness of Sha
n his family
Shan's intro was superb
Sha's mother pov and her dream to see her son n Shan together
n her wonderful bond with Shan as a mother
were both beautifully described
eagerly waiting as what would be Shan's decision
abt getting married to Sha
thanks for pm
cont soon

Thank You Sweetheart! ❤️ Im glad ur lyking it..!! Yes Shaa is very happy but Diksha's step ruined his happiness!! 😡 Stay Tuned..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: nata.aa

wow
superb start
eh ki ho gya
kudi bhag gyi
ab kya ho ga
shanaya ko idiot se shaadi krni padegyi😉
loved it
thnx for pm

Thanx Naina..Yup Kudi bhag gyi but kya hai na Shanaya ko Munda Pasand Nahi..😛 Stay Tuned..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
Part-2
"Choti Maa..Yeh...Aap Kya...?? Aap agar mujhse kuch aur maang leti toh shayad main manaa nhi karti par Shaadi??" Shanaya tried. "Dekh Bacche! Teri Choti Maa Ne Aaj Tak Tujhse Kuch Nahi Maanga..Par Aaj Main Tujhse Apne Bete Ki Khushiyon Ki Bheekh Maangti Hunn.." Mrs. Malhotra replied spreading her dupatta in front of her. "Maan Jaa Puttar! Qki main jaanti hunn..Ki sirf tu hi mere iss bete ko sambhal sakti hai. Tujhse Acchi Jeevansaathi Shaleen ke liye aur ho hi nhi sakti.." His mother pleaded. A helpless Shanaya lukd on to her parents. Both nodded in approval. They didnt have any problem..Infact they wud love to have Shaleen as their Son-In-Law. Who wudnt? A gem of a son-in-law. Shanaya then lukd at her Choti Maa who was on the verge of crying. She cudnt see her lyk this, she loved her immensly. Shaleen who was quite for sumtym now suddenly yelled.. "Maa!??!! Yeh aap kya keh rhi hai? Iske saath shaadi? Jis ladki se bachpan se leke aajtak meri nahi banni..!!! Uske saath??"
Edited by Bubbly_Shanaya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
"Tu bilkul chup kar! Aur ek lavz nhi nikalega tu!" His mother shouted at an equal decibel. "Dekh liya maine..Teri Pasand Aur Tera Pyaar! Ab tu wahi karega jo main kahungi.." She then lukd at Shanaya.. "Tu taiyaar hai puttar?" "Haan Ji Choti Maa..Main Shaadi ke liye taiyaar hunn!" Shanaya sighed in defeat. Mrs. Malhotra's face brightened and widened into a sweet smile. "Wahe Guru Ji Teri Lakh Lakh Meher Hai Ji.." A silent prayer left her lips. The gloomy atmosphere suddenly seemed to brighten up a little. Diksha's parents apologized to all and insisted that the wedding shud take place at the same mandap as a making up to their daughter's shameful deed. "Par sabse pehle Sagai.." Mrs. Malhotra announced. "Shaleen apni purani angoothi utaar..Wo Diksha ki thi na Ab doosri pehenega tu.." "Par Mummy Ji..Shanaya ki angoothi kahan se aayegi?" Anamika asked. "Puttar maine na Shanaya de vaaste ik angoothi pehle hi banwaa ki rakhi thi.. Socha tha ki jab inki sagai hogi tb kaam aayegi aur dekho hua bhi yahi.." His mother
Edited by Bubbly_Shanaya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
replied her face beaming with happiness. Shanaya parents too seemed happy.. The Ring from Shanaya's side for Shaleen And Also From Shaleen's side for Shanaya arrived. As Shanaya was a local delhiite, things werent much difficult. "Chalo ab pehnao ek dusre ko." Mrs. Malhotra urged. Half heartedly Shaleen took off his old ring and handed it over to Nishant. Both slipped the rings into each other's fingers widout even luking at each-other. Shaleen's was a simple platinum band with a diamond attached at center while Shanaya was Flower Embossed Wid a Diamond Attached In Middle. The guests clapped along wid Malhotra's And Mukherjee's who clapped enthusiastically.. "Chalon Kudiyon..Ab Meri Bacchi ko taiyaar kar do!" Mrs. Malhotra gleamed. "Aur acche se sajana! Par meri bacchi hai hi itni sundar ki Chaand bhi uske aage paani bhare.." She kept a loving hand on Shanaya's head who in turn smiled. "Par Mummy Ji..Hume Shanaya ki choode ki rasam bhi toh karni hai na?" Anu suggested. "Haye Rabba! Yeh toh main bhul hi gyi.."
Edited by Bubbly_Shanaya - 11 years ago

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