FF: ASTITVA - STRUGGLE FOR EXISTENCE PT. 9 PG. 101 - Page 28

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update goldie...

sameer finally knows about Ayesha's marriage and son...he is confused...bechara dil dukha hoga kitna..😃😃😃

ayesha and her mom's convo was so well written..😊😊
Arjun too is surprised with the new discoveries...very good..😛😛

ab riya ko kay hua? the case was interesting...love the new character...😉😉😉
looking forward to read riya's story and also ETF's reaction to it..😳
i am not leaking the other parts..😆

continue soon..thanks for the pm

sorry for the late comment...you know na why..😛😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
Read all the parts today. nice story..update soon please
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Posted: 11 years ago
hiii meri golden behna 😳 first of all am really very sholly for nit being able to comment or like in last few parts sholly na actually was highly inactive now a days but i am back again n read all tge parts n click like too so now my comment on latest part 😳

coming to the appu omg i have so many questions to ask but donno from where to start aisha is a single mother what does it mean...her husband left her she is unmarried mother confusion confusion...now why riya is fainted chakkar kya hai...n who aisha scared...lots of question n only you can answer so its better to update nnext appu soon..will wait

thanks for tge regular pms
take care
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rimi_invisible

awesome update goldie...

sameer finally knows about Ayesha's marriage and son...he is confused...bechara dil dukha hoga kitna..😃😃😃

ayesha and her mom's convo was so well written..😊😊
Arjun too is surprised with the new discoveries...very good..😛😛

ab riya ko kay hua? the case was interesting...love the new character...😉😉😉
looking forward to read riya's story and also ETF's reaction to it..😳
i am not leaking the other parts..😆

continue soon..thanks for the pm

sorry for the late comment...you know na why..😛😛

Rimi dont u dare leak it 😡😡
it was a deal between us
well tumhe to sab pata hai my partner in crime
stay tuned & keep commenting😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Devangana

Read all the parts today. nice story..update soon please

thanks devangna
Stay tuned n keep commenting 😊
Gold.Abrol thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: virmanfan013

hiii meri golden behna 😳 first of all am really very sholly for nit being able to comment or like in last few parts sholly na actually was highly inactive now a days but i am back again n read all tge parts n click like too so now my comment on latest part 😳

coming to the appu omg i have so many questions to ask but donno from where to start aisha is a single mother what does it mean...her husband left her she is unmarried mother confusion confusion...now why riya is fainted chakkar kya hai...n who aisha scared...lots of question n only you can answer so its better to update nnext appu soon..will wait

thanks for tge regular pms
take care

Sure dear not an issue
glad u liked it s much
oh saare questions ke answers jald mil jaayenge
Stay tuned n keep commenting 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update guys
too many suprise unfolds
loves it
thnks for pm
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: farana786

lovely update guys
too many suprise unfolds
loves it
thnks for pm
cont soon

Thanks Farhana dear
stay tuned n keep commenting 😊😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Guys Just introducing riyas Family hope u like them 😊

Mr. Saurabh Mukherjee : Father of riya a strict father owns his family but a simple retired government official .



Mrs. Shubha Mukherjee: Mother of riya a humble lady & a house wife loves her family.



Ruhi Mukherjee : sister of riya a beutiful & bubbly girl student of Betch & loves riya a lot & her family too.



Hope u like new characters 😊






Edited by GOLD.A - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago



PART 4 A

Riya kept mum & didn't reply to his question & was not convinced at all with this but let it go thinking some personal issue but what he couldn't shrug off was reaction of Riya when he saw they went for investigation in that house.

Liza got indulged in examining the body & said, "Sir poora examination main time lagega"

Arjun said, "Main tumse kuch pooch raha hoon Riya?"

She said, "Shayad bhool gayi hoongi waise bhi main sirf 8 mahine hi thi wahan fir IPS ki training main chali gayi" giving a lame excuse to Arjun.

Liza said, "main check karti hoon fir aapko report deti hoon" Arjun nodded & as soon as he went out of the house along with Riya.

Priyani who was busy with sketch artist called them to move to her place to have some thing & take rest by the time Liza will complete her work too.

Riya plainly refused but Priyani was hell bend onto her along with her.

After bit of discussuion she along with Arjun went to her house.

As soon as they entered the house Priyani parents were surprised n were having a disgusted feel on their faces even Arjun heard them mumering to Priyani "isse yaha lane ni kya zaroorat thi?"

Arjun was plainly surprised at this gesture & there disrespect to Riya who was just like their own daughter.

Now all this was like a riddle for him. He wanted to ask Riya but postponed it to the time when she will be alone.

Suddenly Arjun got a call from Sameer & informing him about the case proceedings.

Priyani here took the chance & whispered in her ears, "Riya uncle aunty se mil leti yahi do gali chod ke makaan liya hai unhone pichle saal shift hue hai"
Riya nodded her head in negative & said, "Nahin Priyani nahin mil sakti main unhone ne khud hi mujhe.." before she could complete Arjun entered after ending the call & Riya stopped there itself.

They moved out of Priyani house & Liza came to Arjun & gave them the report saying, "Arjun Sir is ladki ki body ki buri haalat hai private parts poori tarha damage ho chuke hai ye aadmi sach main bahut khatarnaak hai, maine ab tak jitne bhi cases dekhe hai ye sabse bura aur brutal hai"

Arjun nodded & called the sketch artist & saw the sketch & asked local police to search in this area about all this guy & anything suspicious happens then report them, he also forwarded the sketch to all the police stations in the nearby area so that if anyone has seen this man they should report to the police immediately as he is a complete psycho & all should be alerted before he could harm anyone further so he warned everyone & circulated the sketch so that indentification is possible.

Later after a while Arjun, Liza & Riya made their way to ETF office so that everything can be discussed.

During the drive to ETF Arjun asked, "Riya main ek baat poochu tum bura to nahin manogi?"

Riya said, "Please Sir aap aisa kyu keh rahe hai?"

Arjun said, "tumhari dost Priyani ke maa baap tumhe dekhkar aise mooh bana rahe the jaise ki tum koi achoot hoo, maine yeh bhi unhe kehte hue suna ki isse yaha kyu le aayi, aisa kya hua, kuch jhagda hai kya ? main bas is liye pooch raha hoon kyuki jahah samman na hoo wahah jana nahin chahiye"

Riya said "sir par Priyani bahut acchi hai isliye main gayi aur koi jhagda nahin hai bas uncle aunty ko shayad main pasand nahin"

Arjun was bit surprised by her answer, he could see that something was troubling her might be the brutality she saw today towards an innocent girl has shook her up to the core & had a deep impact on her innocent heart, yes being a cop she had not at all left her soft side she was not in the favor of even using bullets.

He shrugged all thoughts & they made their way to ETF after an hour they reached the ETF premises.

All went upstairs & Riya & Liza joined shree & chotu & Aisha who were doing the paper works & Arjun directly went to Sameer for the discussion of the case.

In the cabin Arjun took the seat & said, "rathod case simple psychopath killer ka hai sketch hame mil chukka hai maine bol diya hai local poilice station aur aas paas ki localities mai bhi taaki ye pagal jaldi pakda jaaye par bahut bedardi se us killer ne maara hai Riya toh behosh hi ho gayi"

Sameer said, "Kya Riya behosh ho gayi thi?"

Arjun said, "Haan woh laash ki haalat hi aise thi aur upar se shayad aisi vAishat dekhkar Riya shocked ho gayi tum jaante toh ho Riya kitni sensitive hai par ek bahut ajeeb baat hui"

Sameer said, " Kya hua ?"

Arjun said, "Rathod Riya thane main rehti thi wahah uski saheli Priyani se mulaquaat hui ussi ne sketch banwaya, par uske maa baap Riya ko dekhkar aise react kiya jaise unke ghar main choot ki beemari aa gayi hoo aur mujhe aise dekh rahe the ki maine koi bahut bada gunah kar diya hoo Riya ke saath aake, maine poocha toh Riya ne kahah ki woh uske mummy papa ko pasand nahin hai"

Sameer said, "Rawte baat kuch aur hai hum sab Riya ka nature aur uski aadate jante hai shayad hi aisa koi hoo jise Riya pasand na hoo, usne ETF ko bilkul ghar jaisa mahool diya hai aur shayad Riya woh dhaaga hai jisne hum sab ko jood ke rakha hai"

Arjun said, "Haan Rathod aur aisi ladki ko koi pasand na kare aisa ho sakta hai kya? Mujhe baat bahut ajib lagi aur tumne Aisha ke saath jo hua tha uska pata karne ki koshish ki"

Sameer said, "haan maine abhi tak security wapas nahi li hai yadi koi harkat hui toh mujhe pata lag jaayega "

Arjun nodded & said, "Theek hai main chalta hoon " with that he moved on to his cabin.

Here all were completing their paperworks & Liza told them about the brutal case & all felt disgusted after hearing that.

When the paperwork was completed Sameer called the day off & all started to move to their respective places .

Aisha packed her stuff her stuff & tried to put her bag on her shoulders but as she was hurt she was having a problem in turning her arm & elbow Sameer who was passing by saw & clutched her bag & voiced "Aisha tumhe chot lagi hai chodo aur chalo main chod deta hoon" with that he left with her bag leaving a stunned Aisha behind.






SCROLL DOWN FOR PART 4 B 😊😊

Edited by GOLD.A - 11 years ago

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