ShanJun SS: Tere Lie-Love,It Just Happens. Epilogue-pg5 *completed*

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Prologue:

''Kyun kar rahi ho tum aisa? Tum uski khushi keliye itna bara balidaan kyun derahi ho? Tumhe koi andaza bhi hai ki tum kya karne jarahi ho? Tumhari khushiyo ka koi mol nahi hai?'' Sameer asked,in an irritated tone...

Shanaya,with a faint smile plastered on her flushed face,said, ''Unki khushi mein hi meri khushi hai... Main bohut khush hu ki Roshni Ma'am unke zindagi mein wapas agayi hai... Main koi balidaan nahi kar rahi,Bhai.. Main kisi apne ko uski zindagi lauta rahi hu.. Dukh iss baat ka humesha rahega,ki,main Arjun ke saath kabhi nahi re paungi,par,iss baat ki khushi rahegi ki maine apne jeete ji Arjun ko unki khushi wapas lautayi hai..''

Karan,Anjali,Simran,Chotu,Sameer,Shree,Aayesha and Chotu were really stunned at the love and respect she holds for Arjun and his Love for Roshni.

Shanaya quickly wipes her tears and said, ''Abhi niche chaliye... Humein undono ke sagai ki taiyaari karni hai..''

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Prologue-pg1.
Ch1-pg1
Ch2-pg2
ch3-pg3
ch4-pg4
epilogue-pg5.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG Zee...!!!! Tune toh starting me hi rula diya yaara..😭😭 Im sacrificing my love fr Juno nd His Love..His First Love And Perhaps The Foreva Love..Roshni !!!! Ek baat bolun..Waise shayad reality mein bhi main Shayad yahi karti..!! All I want is Juno's happiness! Ab uske liye chahe mujhe mere pyaar ko bhulna pade ya usse durr jaana pade toh I'll happily agree!!! Aww..I soo love the fact dat Bhai is always dre to rebuke me,support me,question me!! Inke Jaisa bhai ho toh duniya me aur kya chahiye?? Love You Bhai..❤️❤️ Im having tears in my eyes reading this!! Awww...Aur saara ETF too is sad! Sagai? ArNi ki?? Lets See aage kya hota hai?? Thankies a lott fr writing such a bful prolouge!!! ❤️❤️ Lovee Ya..❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved it Zee u made me cry dear 😭😭
my poor shanu 😭😭
it was so emotional 😭

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ch1:

''Shan bohut bari galti karne jarahi hai,Sameer yaara.. Usse rok le... Warna bohut der hojayegi...'' Karan said,in a concerned tone.

''Tum logo ke liye galti hi sahi,par,agar Shan ke nazariye se dekho,toh,yeh galti nahi hai... Yeh uski sacrifice hai for Arjun sir... But,still,all i hope is that,a miracle takes place...'' Ayesha piped in.

''Jo bhi ho,Aayesha.. Par Shan ka kya? Manlo ki Rawte ki shaadi Roshni se ho bhi gayi,toh uske baad Shan ka kya? Na toh uska koi hai iss duniya mein,na hi koi jaan pehchaan wale,humare sivai... Aise hi maine usse apni kalai pe rakhi bandne nahi di hai,Aayesha... Fikr hoti rehti hai...'' Sameer sounded worried...

''Aap sahi bolrahe hai,Sameer.. Lekin,hum bhi kya karein? Yeh toh Shan ki final decision hai... We will have to respect it..'' Simran piped in..

Sameer frustratedly ran his fingers over his head and muttered a silent Damn-It and said in his mind, ''Hey Krishna Kanhaiya,ab tu hi koi leela dikha de...''

Here,Sameer,Simran,Aayesha and Karan were concerned about Shanaya's life,on the other side,Arjun was highly excited for his engagement with Roshni... He was feeling out of the world.Shanaya was checking the decorations of the house,while,she gave the duties to Chotu,Shree and Liza to check the food arrangements. Even Shree,Chotu and Liza were furious at Shanaya for taking this decision,but,after constant pleading from Shanaya,they had to give in... They were stunned to see such respect and love for a person,who doesnt even love her...

In the evening,guests started to come in.Sameer,Karan,Aayesha and Simran welcomed the guests,while Shree and Chotu checked the food arrangements,while Liza and Shanaya checked the Aarti platter..

Soon,Roshni and her family came..They were welcomed by Shanaya,traditionally and whole-heartedly,while others were cursing Roshni and her family.

Shanaya took Roshni and made her sit on the sofa,while Karan brought Arjun... Both of groom and bride exchanged the rings.Shanaya couldnt look at them,Tears formed in her eyes... She moved away a bit from the crowd.She went away to the kitchen to see the food arrangements...

After an hour or so,the food was served and everyone praised Shanaya's capability for the whole arrangement of the party... Even Arjun and Roshni praised her... Shanaya,half-heartedly smiled and went away from the crowd.

Shanaya went towards the terrace and stood facing the moon and a star... She has always considered the star as her Mother.. She looked at it and tears fell from her doe-shaped eyes... As she couldnt hold herself,she slumped down and pulled her knees and cried loudly.After some seconds,it started to rain heavily,as if,the clouds are also crying for their daughter...

''Dil mera hai nasamjh kitna,
Be-sabr yeh bewakoof bara,
Chahta hai kitna tujhe,
Khud magarnahi jaan saka,
Iss dard-e-dil ki sifaarish,
Ab karde koi yahaan,
Ki,
Mil jaaye usse woh baarish,
Jo bhiga de puri tarah...''

The party came to an end and Roshni with her family departed.They looked for Shanaya,but Karan said,she has some other work,thats why she left...Only,they knew,where has she gone,that too,in this bad weather... To hide her pain and sorrows in the rain...

TBC...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Againn A Very Emotional Update..!! Phir se rula ditta..😭😭 But yeh baat bhi utni hi sach hai ki Juno ki khushi ke liye kuch bhi..😊 Awww..Sab are soo worried fr me! Sply Bhai..❤️ I loved his lyns.."Aise hi usse apni kalayi pe rakhi nhi bandhne di.." Very Touching!! Rula diya re..😭 Love You Bhai..❤️ Also I love my whole ETF family..❤️❤️ KaSim,RaEsha,ShrIza And Chotu too!! ❤️❤️ Hmmm..So ArNi got engaged!! Yeh Arjun sach me meri feelings nhi samajhta?? 🤔 Chalo Koi Na..!! Wo Khush toh Main Khush! Eh Leh..All r cursing Roshni nd her family..😆 Bechari zabardasti gaaliyan khaa gyi..🤣 The last ka sequence was heartbreaking nd Painful!! 😭😭 Mera koi nhi hai iss duniya me..Sivay ETF family aur Juno ke!! Haye..You know Doll I was about to ask u To use Baarish frm Yaariyan but u did it!!! Thanxx a ton fr it!! ❤️ Love You fr this..❤️ Beautiful!!! Continuee Soonz!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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unres kab karegi??? [B]
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Posted: 11 years ago
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[B]Unresd..Checkk!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#8
Loved it anika
Awesome & so touching
N this arjun needs to get some whip
he is not understanding shanus love for him 😭😭
engagements moments were so beautiful
does roshni knows that shanu loves arjun 😕
& love the concern Sameer & entire ETF is having for her
beautiful bonding
I could feel my friends pain 😭😭
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon 😊
N do PM Me next time 😡😡😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ch2.

Next day was Haldi.. Arjun didnt want to apply Haldi on himself,but,after a hard glare from Shanaya's side,he sighed in defeat and sat for the Haldi... At first,Panditji did the Tilak and some elderly women applied Haldi on Arjun.. After them,one by one,Sameer,Karan,Shree,Chotu,
Aayesha,Liza,Simran and Anjali applied Haldi on Arjun,half-heartedly.

After that,Shanaya came from inside and took some Haldi paste on her palm and applied it gently on Arjun's cheeks and hands and legs.

''Dulhe Raja ko bhi toh shaadi wale din mein gora chitta dekhna chahiye,kyun?'' Shanaya said to Arjun,with a smile,masking away all her pain.

Arjun smiled at her words. The jovial,happy-go-lucky girl,bubbly,chubby,gutsy and beautiful girl,Shanaya seemed to be happy at her best friend's wedding.Only she knew,what is she going through these days...

Arjun was taken away for a bath,not before taking out the smeared Haldi from his body,because,Arjun's haldi will be sent to Roshni's house for her Haldi. Shanaya was putting the Haldi in another bowl,when,accidentally,a little bit of Haldi smeared on her cheeks.She checked it by moving her fingers over her cheek. Tears formed in her eyes after looking at it.. She imagined herself at the place of Roshni where Aayesha,Liza,Simran and Anjali were applying her Haldi and teasing her by Arjun's name... She let out a muffled smile and wiped her tears and sent the Haldi at Roshni's place through some servant.

Roshni's Haldi took place nicely,where,Arjun's Haldi was smeared on her body... Everyone was happy at her place...

As Shanaya was walking and wiping her cheek with a soft cloth,she collided with Simran,who was about to leave from Arjun's venue... Simran looked at Shanaya's cheek and asked,

''Gaalo ko kyun poch rahi ho,Shan?''

''Woh.. Woh... Arjun ki utari huyi haldi galti se mere gaalo pe lag gayi thhi,wahi saaf kar rahi thhi.. Tum bolo?''

Simran held her hands and said, ''Kehte hai ki dulhe ki haldi,jo ki shagun hoti hai,kisi larki ke gaalo pe lag jaaye,toh uski shaadi bohut jaldi hoti hai..''

Shanaya let out a sigh and with a faint smile,said, ''Kaash..Jo tum kehrahi ho woh saach hota...''

Saying this,she went away and left for her home,with tears in her eyes...

Next Morning,Shanaya took the shagun ki mehndi to Roshni's home,along with Liza,Simran,Aayesha and Anjali. Mehndi-walis' started decorating Roshni's hands' with the mehndi,while Roshni's Mom also asked Aayesha,Anjali,Simran,Liza and Shanaya to get the mehndi applied. At first,they hesitated,but,after constant nagging from Roshni's mother,they agreed... After an hour,everybody's hands' were adorning with the henna designs... Simran and Liza teased Aayesha,because,her mehndi had Sameer's name written in it,where as Roshni's friends' asked Roshni to reveal her palm so that they can see the colour of her mehndi... As soon as Roshni opened her palm,her friends' were shocked to see the colour of the mehndi so light... Roshni was stunned..She started to panic and cry. Her mother tried to console her,but,it went vain... Shanaya went to her and said, ''Dont worry,Roshni... Beete huye kal mein mayne rakhta hoga ki mehndi ke ranng zyada garha hone se,pati patni ke beech pyaar zyada gehra hota hai,par,ab yeh zyada maayne rakhta hai ki tum Arjun se kitna pyaar karti ho.. Raat ko sote waqt nimbu aur shakkar wali pani lagana,,,Rang garha niklega...''

''Sacchi?''

''Mucchi...''

Roshni smiled and asked Shanaya to show her mehndi colour... Everybody in the house were stunned to see Shanaya's mehndi... It had a very darkish-maroon shade of red,with a light tinge of orange,which added the glow... Roshni felt jealous but decided to keep mum...

''Maan toh karta hai ki uss nimbu-shakkar ke ghol mein Roshni keliye hydrochloric acide bhejdu... Nautanki kahiki... Accha hua ki uska mehndi ka rang garha nahi hua... I wish ki Arjun Shanaya keliye apna pyaar phirse mehsoos kare... Hey Krishna Kanhaiya,ab tu hi koi leeela dikha de.. Ab tera hi sahara hai...'' Liza said,praying to Shree Krishna...

''Dekh toh zara churhail ko... Shanaya ki mehndi ka rang itna zyada garha huya,isiliye Roshni madam jalrahi hai... Havankund ka aag isse khajaye...'' Aayesha was hurling curses at Roshni in her mind,because of Roshni,Arjun and Shanaya are not together...

After all the ceremonies' ended,Shanaya went to her home..She changed into something light and went towards her Madhav's mandir,in her room. She folded her hands and prayed to her Madhav for her Arjun's happiness... Tears fell from her eyes.After finishing her night prayers,she sat on her bed and looked at he henna-coated hands.The henna colour came out really well.. A deep shade of maroon colour with a tinge of orange colour... She gazed at the mehndi and said unknowingly,

''Yeh mehndi ka garha rang hi meri pyaar ki aakhri yaadein bannke rahegi... Bhaley hi Arjun mile na ho mujhe,par,unka pyaar iss mehndi ke ranng ke roop mein mere saath rahega aur isski khusbu ki tarha rahega humesha..''

TBC
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow
Awesome update
Love it
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