ShanJun SS: Tere Lie-Love,It Just Happens. Epilogue-pg5 *completed* - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh Em Gee! Oh Em Gee! Oh Em Gee! What shud I say? *falls wid a thud!* Jitna dard mujhe uss din hua tha usse double khushi toh mujhe aaj ho rhi hai..😃 I cant tell you even how happy I am! Tune meri saari tammanye poori kar di..*sigh* I wanted a typical Marathi Lagan and you did dat! Thankk You..❤️❤️ Firstly...The Navari look was beautiful! ❤️ The Purple And Yellow Combination was beautiful! The Varmala ritual was beautifully written! ❤️❤️ Then the rituals wer beautifully described by you as always! ❤️❤️ Sply the Kanyadaan..I had tears in my eyes! 😭 Bhai and Bhabhi doing it! The pheres wer also luvly! ❤️ And you also involved my Madhav in it! He is really my everything! That was the most touching and beautifulest! ❤️❤️ Finally the Sindoor And Mangalsutra! 😳😳 Hayee..I just wanted to close my eyes! 😳❤️ The Mangalsutra is off my Sasubai! Beautiful..❤️ Ahaan! Apna Yaara papa banne wala hai! 😊 Mubaraka Ji..Beautiful Ending! Loved It! ❤️ Finally We are Married! ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
Loved it anika awesome
Rituals were beautifully written
so sweet 😊
so finally my shanu & arjun are husband wife
& ur madhav is also blessing u great 😃
shnau got sasumaa ka mangalsutra not bad dear 😆
Loved the way u described all the rituals
Thanks for the PM
& happy & lovely ending 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
Epilogue:

''Simmi,aaj tune mujhe ek aisa khubsurat aur nayaab ehsaas tohfe mein diya hai,jo main shabdo mein bayaan nahi karsakta... Mujhe Papa banane keliye Thank You..'' Karan said with a smile.

''Thank you toh mujhe aapko bolna chahiye.. Mujhe Maa banne ka sukh dene keliye..'' Simmi said with tears of happiness in her eyes.

Everyone was playing with the newborn baby of Simran and Karan,while,Arjun and Shanaya looked at them.Shanaya was really happy for Karan and Simran. Arjun could really feel what Shanaya must be thinking. So,he decided to talk about it with her at their home.

At night:

After dinner,Shanaya went to the balcony and sat on the chair with a lost look.She doesnt know why was she feeling gloomy from inside.Knowing that she will be outside,in the balcony,he went there and sat by her side,pulling her close to him. She hugged him tightly and snuggled to him more.Arjun also hugged her tightly.

Silence resided in between them...He couldnt bear Shanaya's silence,so,he broke the silence and asked her, ''Kya baat hai,Shan? Bohut pareshaan lag rahi ho?''

She sighed and said, ''Kuch nahi Arjun... Bas,aaj Karan aur Simran ke bacche ko dekhke thora emotional hogayi.. I mean,aapka bhi toh mann hoga na ki humdono ka apna baccha ho.. Aap usse apne goud mein le,usse pyaar kare,usse lori sunaye,etc etc...''

Arjun put his hand on hers and said with a soft smile, ''Not at the cost of your happiness,Shan. Main jaanta hu ki ek baccha ek parivaar mein sukh aur shanti laeke aata hai.. Ek parivaar ko ek mazboot dor se baandhta hai... Mera bhi mann hai apne bacche ko apne goud mein lene ka,usse lori sunane ka,usse ghumane ka,usse dher saari baatein karne ka,usse sulane ka,par,tumhari marzi ke bagair kuch bhi nahi.. Tum jaanti ho,Shan.. Mere liye iss duniya mein agar kuch mayne rakhta hai,toh woh hai tumhari khushi... I know yeh thora jaldi hai,par,mujhe koi aitraaz nahi hai... Main aise kai logo ko jaanta hu jo shaadi ke kuch hi mahino mein baccha ke planning karte hai... Main tumhari marzi janna...''

Before he could complete his sentence,Shanaya placed her warm lips on his.Arjun was stunned and shocked at her action.He understood that,she finally wants to start a family with him.She hugged him and rubbed his back while Arjun pulled her to him and carried her in his arms and went towards their bed and made love like a truly,madly in love couple... They were husband and wife now,so,they had full rights on each of them... Shanaya was on cloud nine as she felt Arjun so close to her. A tear drop fell from her eye,when,Arjun sucked that tear and said, ''Ab se tum rougi nahi.. Tum bhi Maa banogi,humare bacche ki Maa... I promise ki main tumhara aur humare aanewale baache ka pura ka pura dhayaan rakhunga... Samjhi ya...''

''Samajh gayi,ACP sahab..'' Shanaya smiled and blushed at the same and finally,they became one soul in two bodies'.

9 months later:

''Uffo... Yeh Arjun bhi na... Apne khane ka bhi khayal nahi karte hai yeh... Bilkul ziddi bann gaye hai... Mujhe apna fit and fine wala Arjun Rawte chahiye,not the sukhi bombill wala Arjun Rawte... Hmm... Let me make some tasty poha for him and for everyone.. Poha banake main aur baby Baba se milne jayenge...'' Shanaya huffed at Arjun's negligency for food and went to the kitchen to make Poha for everyone... The maid helped her in the cooking..

After the Poha was made,she packed it in the big wala tiffin box and went to ETF in her car... As she entered the ETF compound,the guards' saluted her,as she is the ACP ARJUN RAWTE's wife... She smiled and went inside the elevator and reached its destination within no time...

She was welcomed by Shree,Liza,Aayesha and Sameer.She hugged them and asked for Arjun and Karan.. They informed her that both of them went out for some case related investigation...

As they were chatting,Arjun and Karan came.Arjun shook his head in negative and muttered, ''Yeh nahi sunegi aur sudhregi nahi.. Mana kiya tha na isse bahar na nikalne ko..''

Karan: Arey Shan,kaisi hai tu? Aur Junior kaisa ya kaisi hai?

Shan: Main bhi thik aur yeh babu bhi... Simmi aur chotu baby kaisa hai? Sorry haan,tere bacche ke naamkaran pe nahi apayi coz of this halat,u know.. Waise,baby ka naam bohut accha rakkha hai.Madhav usse bohut accha rakkhe aur khush rakkhe... Waise,aaj maine sabke liye poha layi hu.. Khao na...

Everyone was excited.. Aayesha and Liza helped in serving..Everybody ate to their heart's content. As Shanaya was about to take a spoon of Poha,she realised,her abdomen was aching... The spoon fell from her hand and cried loudly in pain... Everyone,especially Arjun reached to her quickly and took her to the hospital immediately.. Everyone followed them..

Hospital:

Arjun and the others were pacing through the corridor when the doc's arrival brought in a good news...

''Congrats ACP Rawte. Mrs.Rawte delivered twins,that too girls'. Both the mother and the children are fine.You can meet her.''
Edited by ...anika... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Everyone congratulated Arjun for becoming the father of twins...Arjun,at first went to the makeshift Mandir of the Hospital and prayed to Ganpati Bappa and to her Madhav.

''Mere bacche aur meri patni ko sirakshit rakhne keliye shukriya aap dono ka... Main pehle aapko nahi maanta thha par ab maanne laga hu,kyunki,meri patni bhi aapko maanti hai.. Usski khushi jisme hai usse main pura karunga aur usse aur humare baccho ko bohut pyaar aur khayal rakhunga.. Bas,aise hi aap humesha hum chaaro ke upar apna aashirwaad banake rakhiyega.. Dhanyavad..'' Arjun joined his hands and prayed for the happiness of his family...

He went inside to see that his loving wife was playing with their daughters'. He went to them and huged them lightly and pecked his daughters' foreheads' lightly... He picked each baby girl,one at a time and played with them a little... Later on,the babies' slept in their cot...

''Finally.. Humara sapna pura hogaya... Hum Aai-Baba bann gaye hai.. Ab toh tum khush hona?'' Arjun asked Shanaya with a smile..

''Bohut khush hu... Yeh khushi toh mujhe aapse mili hai,Arjun... Main apne aapko bohut khushnasseb maanti hu ki main do bacchiyo ki Aai bann gayi... Yeh sab aap ke wajah se huya hai... I love you,Arjun...'' Shanaya confessed..

''I love you too... Tumne bhi mujhe duniya ki sabse anmol tohfa diya hai... Main tumhara aur humare bacche ka bohut khayal rakhunga aur pyaar karunga...'' Arjun said with a smile and pecked her lips lightly...

Shanaya blushed and hugged Arjun tightly... After some moments,Shanaya broke the silence and asked, ''Humare bacchiyo ka kya naam rakkhe,Arjun?''

''Umm... Purvi aur Madhvi... What say?'' Arjun suggested..

''Very nice name,Arjun.. I really loved it a lot... Toh,aajse,meri bari pari ka naam Purvi aur choti pari ka naam Madhvi hai...'' Saying this she smiled at their daughters' and pecked lightly on their foreheads...

Soon,both Arjun and Shanaya got into playing with their daughters' and planned for their better future... Shanaya silently prayed to her Madhav to keep her Ajun,her daughters' and her family happy,everytime and also asked for strength,as well..

*The End*

Hope you like it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful Epilouge! Loved It To The T..❤️❤️ Not only the story was beautiful but the epilouge too!! ❤️❤️ Aww..Finally KaSim Became parents..!! Everyone happy for them! We too..But im feeling lost! Loved the fact that Arjun understands me so well..❤️ Love You Juno..❤️ Loved his words..That he wants babies only at my happiness..He is rambing on and cudnt cumplete cuz...I silenced him! 😳😳 So we consumated..😳😳 The delicate moments wer beautifully described! 😳😳 Aise tym pe bhi Samjhey Ya Samjhaun? Hadd hai..😆 But I cumpleted It! Hehe..😆 Yeh toh hai mujhe fit fyn aur hotty Arjun pasand hain na ki Sukha Bombill..🤣 Hailaa...Itni respect! Arjun Rawte Ki Patni..😳 Kaise Manu main tumhari baat? Hunn to Arjun Rawte ki patni na? 😉 Finally hum Aai Baba bann gye..!! We have two baby gurls..❤️❤️ Purvi And Madhavi..So Swettt!! ❤️❤️ Love Arjun and our dolls! Beautiful Ending..Thankies and lobbb you lotzz! ❤️❤️ Muahhh!
Edited by Bubbly_Shanaya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
OH wow Dear anika
lovely end so sweet
Finally 2 baby girls too cute
Loved the end 😊
keep writing

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