ARJUN SS : Mehfuz..ch 8/page 33 updt 7/6(complete) - Page 8

Originally posted by: Godly_Affection

yay..me first..

par update padhkar dance aur masti ka mood nahi raha😉

such a senti update di🤗

the pain was so beautifully expressed..👏

u r so nice with ur words👏

the emptiness that filled the space was expressed in the best possible way⭐️

i felt like crying while reading the update😭

i never get so senti easily..but ur update did it👍🏼

fantastic n awesome is very less to describe it

masi also missing sam😭

everyone wass missing sam😭

loved the way Jun was beating salim😡😡..he deserved this😡

then Jun's outburst👏

DIG is planning something..

Jun doesnt want to leave in mumbai😭

waiting for next update

thankx for pm

continu soon😊

thanks neha...glad you could relate so well..😊
keep reading update coming up..😊😊

Originally posted by: zebbie0504

Rimi di,i just read the 1st chappie and i must say,it was awesome yet highly emotional... Tears flowed from my eyes when i read that Bhai is no more...
Arjun feeling the void of his best friend,his only family after Kaka and his Dada,his confidante...
Beautifully expressed...
I really loved it...
Sorry,cant comment much as i m highly attached to my Sameer bhai...
Do continue sooonish.

Originally posted by: zebbie0504

Omg...
It was hell emotional...
I myself cried at the state of Arjun...
I can feel what Arjun is going through...
Arjun is determined to punish his only confidante,his only best friend Sam's culprit and he will make sure,he does that...
Curse that DIG...
Everyone is sad at the sudden death of Sameer bhai,who wa not just a chief for everyone,but a family,a brother and a mentor to them...
Continue soonish...
Thanks for the pm.

thanks zebbie for reading both the parts and commenting..😃😃

glad you liked..keep reading and comenting..😊😊

Originally posted by: misakiscarlet

woweee diii
it was soo emotional agar thodi aur likha hota i would b in tears right now
loved it esp. how u wrote arjun's inner turmoil
masi part was sooo well written
arjun's outburst on salim was awesome
DIG!!!!!is he hiding something..
arjun thinks he would be suspened or transferred but i think DIG will reveal something
waiting eagerly for next one
thnx for pm di

thanks aradhya..DIG part will come up...
staytuned..keep reading..😊

Originally posted by: Swara85

Sorry for late comment...was little busy..
Chap 1:
What a start..!👏 loved it..
Arjun and Sam's friendship was 👍🏼..you wrote it so well..
Sam died..😒 that was a shock as I did not expected it coming on way..
and Arjun's parents..😡..but at least he had kaka by his side..
but again he lost everything..😭
thanks for pm

Originally posted by: Swara85

Chap 2:
It was so emotional..
The start part was fun where Arjun throws towel at Sam and Sam giving punch and glares..but it was sad too as it is a memory now.
Arjun's emotion was well portayed..his helplessness, suffocation, anger everything was well written..
The house and office haunting him that was heart-breaking..!
He looked around with the hopeless-hope of finding 'him' again, like always glaring back at him from a distance. this line took my heart away as i truely understand it..
but is DIG planning something..? and i have a doubt is Sam really dead DIG's last words..we can take it two ways..anyways i guess my brain is over-working..
it was a great update.. cont soon do pm next time..

thanks swara...glad you could get the time to read and comment..😊😊

keep reading..😊

Originally posted by: unishaz

awesome dear.. Loved it.. Thanks for pm..

thanks😊

Originally posted by: aditiarakshi

awesome update

it was so emotional

all were missing sam😭😭

arjun was punishing that salim , he deserves it😡

i think DIG was planning something

loved it

thanx for the PM

cont soon😊

aditi..glad you read and comemnted...thanks😳

stay tuned😊😊

Originally posted by: GOLD.A

that was so touching RIMI

Awesome dear

u have expressed the pain so beautifully

Poor Arjun I really felt like crying 😭

They way u expressed how his office n house was haunting him with sams memory was so touching & so beautiful

N that person he got his punishment well 👏

poor Arjun always suffers

Lets see what happens next

Thnaks for the Pm
Continue soon 😊

thanks goldie..glad you liked dear...

well still loads left to haunt..its all about haunting you know😆

keep reading..😃

Originally posted by: laila1994

unres...😃

Firstly, The scenes you narrate of Sam-jun friendship are fab. I like them. more about it on PM.

Masi: another superb character by you. She loves Samjun as her own child which is so rare now a days. My maid hates me

But My favourite scene in the whole update was Arjun's beating scene. You nailed it girl👍🏼I am so happy you added that scene.

Arjun's berserk attitude was out of the world. It just didn't show Arjun's anger toward Salim for killing his best friend But also his helplessness.

Arjun's state was written brilliantly with care. As I always say Not so cheezy Not so dull just brilliant👏👏👏

Arjun will be suspended🥳

I am so happy you know why😉

first tell me why your maid hates you?? you did something with her??😲😲

you devil..always dusro ke dard pe happy hoti ho..👎🏼

stay tuned..update coming up..😃😃😃

Originally posted by: SweetShreu

di khahi aisa toh nhi sam zinda hai

and woh undercover hokr mission pr hai

salim ussko toh flogging krni chahiye aur namak chirakana chahiye

nic update

mujhe accha lga isliye maine do do comments kye

Originally posted by: SweetShreu

awesome update

masi new chracter

oh di when roshni entry will be there

cont soon

thanks dear..stay tuned😊😊

Originally posted by: rinku95

Fantastic
Arjun misses Sam a lot
Thanks for pm Laila and thanks for update rimi
Continue soon

thanks dear..😳