ARJUN SS : Mehfuz..ch 8/page 33 updt 7/6(complete)

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unisha

@unishaz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

awesome dear.. Loved it.. Thanks for pm..

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_Aditi_S

@Aditi_S

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

awesome update

it was so emotional

all were missing sam😭😭

arjun was punishing that salim , he deserves it😡

i think DIG was planning something

loved it

thanx for the PM

cont soon😊

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Swara85

@Swara85

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Chap 2:
It was so emotional..
The start part was fun where Arjun throws towel at Sam and Sam giving punch and glares..but it was sad too as it is a memory now.
Arjun's emotion was well portayed..his helplessness, suffocation, anger everything was well written..
The house and office haunting him that was heart-breaking..!
He looked around with the hopeless-hope of finding 'him' again, like always glaring back at him from a distance. this line took my heart away as i truely understand it..
but is DIG planning something..? and i have a doubt is Sam really dead DIG's last words..we can take it two ways..anyways i guess my brain is over-working..
it was a great update.. cont soon do pm next time..

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

that was so touching RIMI

Awesome dear

u have expressed the pain so beautifully

Poor Arjun I really felt like crying 😭

They way u expressed how his office n house was haunting him with sams memory was so touching & so beautiful

N that person he got his punishment well 👏

poor Arjun always suffers

Lets see what happens next

Thnaks for the Pm
Continue soon 😊

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laila

@laila1994

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

unres...😃

Firstly, The scenes you narrate of Sam-jun friendship are fab. I like them. more about it on PM.

Masi: another superb character by you. She loves Samjun as her own child which is so rare now a days. My maid hates me

But My favourite scene in the whole update was Arjun's beating scene. You nailed it girl👍🏼I am so happy you added that scene.

Arjun's berserk attitude was out of the world. It just didn't show Arjun's anger toward Salim for killing his best friend But also his helplessness.

Arjun's state was written brilliantly with care. As I always say Not so cheezy Not so dull just brilliant👏👏👏

Arjun will be suspended🥳

I am so happy you know why😉

Edited by laila1994 - 11 years ago

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Princess_Pataka

@Princess_Pataka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

awesome update

masi new chracter

oh di when roshni entry will be there

cont soon

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Princess_Pataka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

di khahi aisa toh nhi sam zinda hai

and woh undercover hokr mission pr hai

salim ussko toh flogging krni chahiye aur namak chirakana chahiye

nic update

mujhe accha lga isliye maine do do comments kye

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rinku95

@rinku95

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Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Fantastic
Arjun misses Sam a lot
Thanks for pm Laila and thanks for update rimi
Continue soon

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kunchu

@kunchu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#59

very emotional update

missing Sam verymuch

but what is DIG planning

felt bad for Arjun

continue soon

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Devangana

@Devangana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#60

Everyone is missing Sam and Arjun has lost the only friend who could keep him sane. He is punishing the criminal and also himself . Hope DIG does not remove him from ETF. Continue soon.