ARJUN SS : Mehfuz..ch 8/page 33 updt 7/6(complete) - Page 28

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: IshitaRocks015

I loved the entire story...
It was more than beautiful..
The arjun roshni moments in d orphanage...
Arjun buying paintings just to bring a smile on the children's faces...
Then the ever wired pritha ... Gawd... she was the best element in the story.. eating chips n drinking coke...
Lol..d children ate more than what they served..hehe 😆
Arjun left.. That convo with roshni was really cute...
It showed his true self well
Then the next part... Where roshni had found our naked hero..hehe..
Roshni ko dkh k kapde pehn na bhul gya ..hehehe..
Then d game of cards wala sceme..thank u so much for that..
Show ki kami apne puri kar di..kam se kam yaha to wo scene mila ...
then the beautiful epilogue with the cute curious ryan..
Awww.. Roshni scolded d poor kid..
They miss sam so much...
It was beautiful...
Liimi di.. Ek khatm ho gya na...
now time for you to write my return gift...mera 2nd no tha na... Apke bday ka return gift do... Ppiiilliijj



thank you so much sisky..glad you liked the story..keep you support coming..😳😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
Khatam...😭 Really??
Anyways, unlike in previous chapter...I wont say Beautiful only, it's superb!
Arjun..finally spilled the truth in front of Roshni... & Pritha, that tomboy ne kya Sys dia Rosh ko... ek hi jhatke main akal thikane aa gayee👏

& After that the beginning of friendship...it was cute...followed by Roshni's surprise visit ..hat's off girl!!👏 It was perfect for me!!😳

&then the epilogue...loved that little curious kid...& in the death anniversary day of Sam, he got a new friend in his life...curiosity ki jai ho!!😳

Thanks a lot for this amazing story...& making me greedy for more.
Keep writing.😊

Season 2 kab doge??😊😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful ending...
Loved it very much
Awwwsssmmm...
Supperbbb...
Loved Arjun's confession... the starting of their friendship...
Finally their Saadi... Loved Ryan...
Beautifully written...
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
ch 7:
Lovely update!
The phone scene was really funny..
Roshni friend is a comic relief in this story.. um liking her😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful End!❤️
it was a lovely story...
every emotions you portrayed were perfect...
will miss it 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome dr!
with heavy heart u r leaving the story here... with someone's sacrifice someone's memories filling and fueling to move on...

right we've to move on but with those pleasant memories of sam, ar, ro, masi and of course ryan...

Hats off to u dr!

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Posted: 11 years ago
Finally manage to edit comment ...that to be without crying...😃😃😃
Edited on Pg:- 33...😳😳
Hope now u are not angry on me...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: laila1994

unres...

Arni convo: It started with casual talk & turned into poignant one.
Arjun finally told her the truth...That was expected from him.
Roshni's reaction was justified...

thank you so much...you had cleared my doubts about this part..😳😳

Pritha: She nailed it. She put her words in a very simple way & made Roshni do what was needed to be done. Well done buddy👍🏼

I had to justify her role in this SS...her funny antics did have a matured and sensible mask...i had to bring them out...thanks again for loving her..😳


When Roshni went to meet Arjun at the hotel it was not because she loved him but coz she could relate to him & his pain...It was a unique idea for me. I am pleasantly surprised that you didn't show that Rosh started loving him in just 3 days😃
Even if you would have show it I would have had no problem But it was much better😳
Arjun & blushing😆
I am already imagining his burning cheeks☺️

i normally dont write what i cant relate to...for me love at first sight doesnt exist...you must have already guessed that part of me by now..😃
blushing Arjun...well😉

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The card scene: It was really cute.
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Arjun moved on in his life So did Roshni But they never lost contact with each other. again the realistic touch you added here was brilliantly & smartly written
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Roshni's proposal😆😆😆
Again it was cute
I am glad they didn't marry just like that...Grand function to banta hai yaar😉
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card scene wasnt my creation so give the credit to the creators..one of their best magical moments..
realistic touch...well thanks again..


Ryan...He seems like a sensitive & sensible kid.
Arni were missing Sam...They never moved on from his memories & they will never do it in future...this is called True friendship
Masi has became Ryan's grandmother whom he never had.
The best part was the last line At the end of the day, Sam had become a part of Ryan's life now..
It was out of the world. the simple line yet with so much impact👏👏
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i have nothing more to reply you...thank you..😳


Song was the cheery on the top.
It was a perfect choice👍🏼
Quotes were beautiful especially the last one. just loved it😃
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😳

PS. Thank you for the special mention...Means alot😃
PSS. now give me a big replay for big comment.
PSSS. Don't worry if you get less response for last chapter most of the ignorant readers skip commenting on Last chapters...



I know sweetheart...ignorant readers...kya karu inka??
we should make a punishment booklet..😆😆

waise i dont mind...i got the comments i had expected and i am rejuvenated..

Finally replied to your long comment 🥱

Baji hates you..😆😉

PS i love the dots you give in between..👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Shamsad1607

Khatam...😭 Really??

Anyways, unlike in previous chapter...I wont say Beautiful only, it's superb!
Arjun..finally spilled the truth in front of Roshni... & Pritha, that tomboy ne kya Sys dia Rosh ko... ek hi jhatke main akal thikane aa gayee👏

& After that the beginning of friendship...it was cute...followed by Roshni's surprise visit ..hat's off girl!!👏 It was perfect for me!!😳

&then the epilogue...loved that little curious kid...& in the death anniversary day of Sam, he got a new friend in his life...curiosity ki jai ho!!😳

Thanks a lot for this amazing story...& making me greedy for more.
Keep writing.😊

Season 2 kab doge??😊😳



thanks buddy...glad you liked...season 2 really?? hum to bas masak kar rahe the...ap ne sach maan liya k..🤣

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: _Nikita_

Beautiful ending...
Loved it very much
Awwwsssmmm...
Supperbbb...
Loved Arjun's confession... the starting of their friendship...
Finally their Saadi... Loved Ryan...
Beautifully written...
Thanks for the PM



thanks nikita,,,😳

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