ARJUN SS : Mehfuz..ch 8/page 33 updt 7/6(complete) - Page 27

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Swara85

Sorry for being late..
Chapter 6:
Arjun's loneliness was very well described..
he did not get parent's love..😭
Sam and Roshni were great friends..
both are missing their Sam..😭
Arni talk and their emotions were beautifully written..
Sam and Roshni fb was funny..😆
Arjun will go to the exhibition..
last part was sweet..
Chapter 7:
The morning scene was nice..
Arjun and his self talk was funny..
His dilemma to go to orphanage, the phone convo, pritha's antics, Roshni's invitation and his happiness was so very nice..loved it..
So he will be ETF Chief now..Sam will be happy.
Pritha's dialogues was fun..😆
Roshni trusts Arjun..😊



Originally posted by: Swara85

Chapter 8:
Confused as what to comment..
Beautifully written..👍🏼
Feeling happy they found that someone in each other who can understand them and with whom they can share anything..
Feeling sad too..wish Sam was there with them in person..but he is still there..
loved it..!😊
PS: Their emotions through out the journey was so well described..it reached to hearts..👍🏼



thank you so much swara...glad you liked it..😳😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Devangana

It was beautiful. Sameer will always be a part of Arjun and Roshni's family. Their feelings were very well portrayed.



thank devangana..😳😳😳😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Godly_Affection

awesome story di!!

loved it!!
beautiful end!!
sam became part of ryan's life too!!😊
itni acchi story itni jaldi end kar di..ab me chota sa comment dungi *pout*!!😭
thankx for pm!😊
continu soon a new story😈



aisi sazaa do ge di ko??😭😭😭😭
kya karu...aur zyada khuich nehi sakti..i am incapable of writing emotions properly..
nways chote comment hi sahi..thank you..😳😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rimi_invisible



aisi sazaa do ge di ko??😭
kya karu...aur zyada khuich nehi sakti..i am incapable of writing emotions properly..
nways chote comment hi sahi..thank you..😳😳

di plz don't cry..par mera mood kharab ho gaya end dekh kar..isliye jyaada nahi likha..aur aap emotions itne acche se likhte ho phir bhi aisa keh rahe ho?? not fare😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Godly_Affection

di plz don't cry..par mera mood kharab ho gaya end dekh kar..isliye jyaada nahi likha..aur aap emotions itne acche se likhte ho phir bhi aisa keh rahe ho?? not fare😉



oops...subah subah mood off kar diya?? so sowwy...my writings are never satisfactory to me..i think they could always been much better...🥱

its a sad story..aur likhne mein sadness zyada ho jata hai..mujhe arni ko rulana zyada pasand nehi..they are already sad characters,.😃😃


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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
Loved it
Loved the way Arjun told his feelings to Roshni
Loved their relation
Finally they are married
but they still miss sam😭😭
He became an integral part of Ryan's life to
Beautiful ending
Just loved it👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
love arni moments
finally they married😃
love ryan😊
love the epilogue
all were missing sam😭😭
sam became the part ryan life also😃
amazing ending...just loved it
thanx for the pm
😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
I loved the entire story...
It was more than beautiful..
The arjun roshni moments in d orphanage...
Arjun buying paintings just to bring a smile on the children's faces...
Then the ever wired pritha ... Gawd... she was the best element in the story.. eating chips n drinking coke...
Lol..d children ate more than what they served..hehe 😆
Arjun left.. That convo with roshni was really cute...
It showed his true self well
Then the next part... Where roshni had found our naked hero..hehe..
Roshni ko dkh k kapde pehn na bhul gya ..hehehe..
Then d game of cards wala sceme..thank u so much for that..
Show ki kami apne puri kar di..kam se kam yaha to wo scene mila ...
then the beautiful epilogue with the cute curious ryan..
Awww.. Roshni scolded d poor kid..
They miss sam so much...
It was beautiful...
Liimi di.. Ek khatm ho gya na...
now time for you to write my return gift...mera 2nd no tha na... Apke bday ka return gift do... Ppiiilliijj
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: skrafty

Awesome update
Loved it
Loved the way Arjun told his feelings to Roshni
Loved their relation
Finally they are married
but they still miss sam😭😭
He became an integral part of Ryan's life to
Beautiful ending
Just loved it👏👏



thank you skrafty..for being one of my ardent readers...keep supporting me like this..its really a big motivation..😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aditiarakshi

awesome update

love arni moments
finally they married😃
love ryan😊
love the epilogue
all were missing sam😭😭
sam became the part ryan life also😃
amazing ending...just loved it
thanx for the pm
😊



thanks aditi..glad you liked..keep reading and commenting on my stories..😳

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