ARJUN SS : Mehfuz..ch 8/page 33 updt 7/6(complete)

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unisha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#181

nice one.. Thanks for pm..

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Snehajain

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Posted: 11 years ago

#182

Awesome update...

U know what that's the reason I never (except yesterday) asked u to update this bcoz Mehfuz se humesa rulate hi ho...😭😭😭 😭😭😭

Aap Ishi ko saddist kehte ho...aap kaunse kam ho...😭😭😭 😭😭😭

Starting mein ROshni was quite irritated with him...😆

But then Roshni's pain, her emotions, remembering Sameer, SR initial all were written beautifully...😭😭😭

Arjun don't know how to console her...😭😭😭

Arjun left the card for her...😃😃😃

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

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Posted: 11 years ago

#183

Loved it dear rimi

awesome really beautiful

You made me cry dear

Bahut rona aaya tha roshni n arjun ka convo sunkar 😭😭

roshni touching his letters n file was so real

Loved it too emotional \

So arjun left a card for her

Lets see what happens

Thanks for the PM

Continue doon

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rinku95

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Posted: 11 years ago

#184

Amazing
Thank for pm
Continue soon

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Atisha Khan

@Shamsad1607

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Posted: 11 years ago

#185

This the most emotional chapter of this SS.

Brilliant work REE, you just put two hurt souls together, though their pain as same they couldn't console each other...I was actually feeling how Arjun as feeling that moment, seeing Roshni hurt, coz I'm also not good with consoling people.

Here, I'm totally agreeing with @Ishita, You've incorporated an innovative way to dehydrate us. I didn't sweat that much in last 1 month, that I've shed tears today..😭

Now, oral saline ka bill tu degi...😆

Finally..well, next update dedo...aur kuch likhneka energy nahi hain...😕😳

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rimi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#186

comment from Anant : (posted here so that i remember to reply you 😉😉)

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i will Not say I dont like update but the effect the previous updates is missing in this one..silence of two person is some time enough to share the unspoken words,emotions nd feelings but here it felt so much heavy that two broken souls are not able to even share their sorrow..he is unknowingly searching for some ones company to sail the boat in this storm..i am not satisfied with this update..sowwy..but honestly giving my pov..😉😛

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Maham

@Mahaali2905

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Posted: 11 years ago

#187

Amazing update
sori 4 late actually
lot of pending pms
read all parts in 1 go
wonderful story love it
thanx laila n rimi 4 pms

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Tabassum Nitol

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Posted: 11 years ago

#188

Awwwsssmmm part
Loved it
Beautifully written...
Cont sooon
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princess_pari

@princess_pari

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Posted: 11 years ago

#189

ab to you are planning to bring tears in my eyes.

two broken souls in a place, one who cant express and one who cant hold herself together.

both lost their only family...

roshni's pain was visible, and arjun's shimmering at the surface.

beautifully written...

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Sakthi

@greensakthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#190

well, well, it was awesome and emotional. let t them cry, i'm running away from the tears and sobs of them, see me running toward a hiding place( a secret one actually!) and do tell me when they stop..

find me!...

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