Arakshi FF - Forever with You - Last chapter and Epilogue 07/05

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Shreya

@shreya09

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Posted: 10 years ago

#651

another very very very sweet update Ritu ❤️

I always wanted to know how little Arjun got sooo attached with Maai.

and it was sooo nicely written,

i guess now Both Arjun & Sakshi will take that small girl with them.😊

looking forward for more 👍🏼

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TereLiyeMINU

@TereLiyeMINU

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Posted: 10 years ago

#652

I seriously hate rains but always feel the rain through your updates.The whole scene was mesmerizing and I bet Marvell or Donne could have crafted another beautiful poetry readin the update...😃 The pattering raindrops,food and playfulness added the feather to the cap.the orphanage scene was heart rending. the diary entry was just like the cherry on pudding giving glimpse into little sakshi and arjun's lives through Maai's love filled eyes..😊

it was brilliant and raised expectations for the forthcoming update.

thanks for the pm and keep writing with unabated spirits.

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Snehajain

@Snehajain

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#653

Awesome update...

Arakshi night's in cafe was 😃😃😃

Best part of the update was Maai's Diary entry in last...😃😃😃

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

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Shravani / Arohi

@skrafty

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#654

I know I'm super duper late Ritu

I'm really sorry

But was busy with college

Anyway

Awesome update

Amazing

Beautiful

Just loved it

Waiting for the next part

Continue soon

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Swara85

@Swara85

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Posted: 10 years ago

#655

Chapter 28:
Sheeshh..I know I'm extremely late in replying and I'm so sorry for that.😔
Coming to the update...
The morning scene with Sakshi and Papa teasing Arjun was so sweet..
OMG..! A cafe in hills which Maai dreamt..now coming true..❤️The surprise was too good re..*sniff* Arjun really loves Maai a lot..
Wish she was present there to see the cafe.

The letters made me emotional..*sniff*
The line was just perfect...👍🏼"Its my dream and her reality." when she has her cafe in mumbai.. I was stuck to this line for sometime..couldn't go ahead..*sniff*
It was so Beautiful Ritu..🤗I'm at loss of words..Just Loved it..!❤️

You know some months ago, our house was painted again and I painted a part of the wall..sky-blue..The feeling is just Wow..Painting-scenes you have mentioned,I felt like I'm painting it..
Ok that was causual..

Next part ka comment kal karungi..Something else..Rather a Painting by certain someone has gained my attention..😛

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Swara85

@Swara85

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Posted: 10 years ago

#656

Chapter 29:
The reason he gave her for not telling her about the cafe..*sniff*
Loved Arakshi and also loved your description..😳It was Beautiful..❤️
You know I couldn't help but go into WOL zone A LITTLE..😳
And the letter touched my heart..🥺damn I m getting emotional too much these days..
The scene at the orphanage with the girl and Sakshi..🥺 exact feelings..perfectly put into words..
I took this second half a bit personal so don't know what to say..It touched me somewhere...*made me comment late*
I want to say I found That Ritu's magic here again after So many days..(don't mind).🤗
Anyways thanks for pm..Continue soon..

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Tabassum Nitol

@_Tabassum_

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#657

Di Where Are You...??
Update Please

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

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Posted: 9 years ago

#658

Heylooo🤗

Hushhh.. It has taken me so long to do this.

Like, seriously. To be honest with you, I started this chapter in August last year, and now it is May. Nearly a year. Jeez! It has been that difficult to pen down the last chapter. And finally, it is here! Finally I have ended this fic. Sorry for the slow torture lol.

I hope that this gives the story the end it deserves. I think I am happy (and satisfied) with the way I have ended it. If it becomes a little weird, blame it on my weird dreams 😆 But yes, the end had to be the way it is.

This is the end.😭 Sigh.

Eh, well.

Something possessed me as I wrote the end. And I got weird goosebumps. Fiction can be this weird.

I hope u like it! I wasn't going to write the epilogue, but somehow it demanded to be written. (Again, blame my weird dreams).

And so, I bid this story adieu!

Thank you so much for loving Maai as much as you have.. and thank you for sticking to the end.

Love you all.🤗

P.S - As always, the updates are at the blog.

Edited by SeasonOfLeaves - 9 years ago

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anitasharma

@anitasharma

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#659

thank you for taking us on an amazing journey of friendship and love
and yes it was the perfect ending for me too
will miss this one
thank you once again

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Tabassum Nitol

@_Tabassum_

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#660

Perfect ending to a Wonderful story
Words are not enough to describe how Beautiful it was
Awwwsssmmm loved it to the core
I just love Rimjhim she's an angel
Sakshi n her bonding So Beautifull n when she first time call Sakshi Ma ohh that moment was pure Magical
Loved The Rainbow Cafe
Awww Arakshi's twins are Sooo Adorable
I'm gonna miss Maai a lot she is my favorite her last dairy entry n her POV in the end it was just don't know what to say beyond description
Gonna miss this one very badly
Thanks for making me a part of this Wonderful journey :)