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sairam175

@sairam175

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#741

awesome part

first of all tahnk u so much for pm and br

but in this part starting it is difficult to

understand for me beceause i only read 25

parts in this story after that it is changed

in pm's and i dont get remaing parts i am

requesting u to send me remaining parts

please

and coming to this part

riya and sam fight is nice

know also arjun understand riya very well

sam family know about ariya am i right?

ariya in dances floor wow

ariya feeling are in high

vishal fb is really painful

anty and his relation is sweet

but what about nadia is it aisha or someone else

continue soon

and pm me all remain stories please

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SATRISHI

@SATRISHI

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#742

my abhi bhidance floor me hihoon

wondeful songs with my ariya dance

thank u

waht about vishal yaar ?? diana was a bar dancer???????!!!!

replaced by nadia /Ayesha ?

then what happened to her ??

where is she now??

but i loved sam and RIya fightings like very bbf

ha ha ha loved it and one thing me going to dance floor again

u cont soon

thanks for update

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ariyabestfan

@ariyabestfan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#743

love it..

ariya dance was superb..

omg..means vishal in love with Ayesha aka nadiya..

plz continue soon

thanks 4 pm

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pango

@pango

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#744

awesome update

loved it

loved ariya dance

all the emotions were portrayed beautifully

diana was a bar dancer who was replaced by aisha

plzzz bring ariya together

thanx for pm

waiting for next part

continue soon

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Tabassum Nitol

@_Tabassum_

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#745

Awwwsssmmm part
Loved it
Supperbbb..
Amazing...
Loved Ariya Dance...
Vishal's past was painful...
Loved Aunty n Vishal bonding...
Daina was a bar dancer n she was replaced by Nadia...
Very interesting...
Cont sooon
Waiting for the next part
Thanks for the PM

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Atisha Khan

@Shamsad1607

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#746

well...i'm late!
kya painful updates tha! sakshi and vishal both had their own reaskn to take themselves away from the merry event.
sakshis bleeding heart was well described... neither she could stand arjun nor the idea ofgetting married with someones chosen one...
then little ariya time but still it spalshed out the pain they are nursing inside them...
and finally visal...his past ws revealed...and it ws shocking... nadia! and diana! oh god...seems a storm is approaching towards them.

do continue...& thanks for these awesome chapters.

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Priya SINGH

@FLOREY

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#747

Nadia ... that means aisha? :-0

Do vish wants to take away the happiness frm aisha...

Bt he saw saks n then felt miserable... so?

Plz clear his part soon

Cont soon

Thnk for pm

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APRIL14

@APRIL14

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#748

hi RIMI

Me duck,before you throw something on me 😃 A BIG SORRY ,HOLDING MY EARS😃

Now come to comment 😉

Rawte and his big fat man ego😡 ,(look who is talking ,because me also have a EGO problem😉)

ARJUN saw the hollowness behind her beautiful happy mask , fell happy 2 know ,that he know her that much (ohh dear Rawte,we girls are master in this act😳called MASKED)

And THE DANCE 😳 what can i say ,that part is SIMPLE AWESOME 👏,the way u portrait their,sorrow,their longing,their loneliness,the regret ,the hollowness,how they still fit each other arms, they still have effect on each other, the passion,their desire 😳HATS OFF 2 U 👏👏👏 plz RIMI,save ARIYA from their misery,i am not complaining 😳 but still save their GRACE😳

Something bother me ,plz clarified,why RAWTE has ashamed and regretful gaze 😕 because he has relation with Saks or let RIYA go ,or he is dancing with her,or may be he is the reason of RIYA'S sorrow,WHAT IS THE REASON😡 AFTER SPENDING DAYS WITH RIYA ,😉Girl u know how to twist readers heart just use a mare word 😉 hear, U use day not year,👏 not bad jaan 😉WHAT THE HELL ,Rawte still act like BHAGODA 😡 i fell he is not running away from RIYA ,he is running away from HIMSELF 😭,COMMENT ABHI BAKI HAI ,😳😉

TO BE CONTIINUE 😆