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chandrima

@chand91

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#731

omg

arjun jls

bt visl prt s soo bitr

realy dii

wht a twst

aysha as nadia

wid visl

awsmmm prt

thnks 4 pm

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638783

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#732

Awesome update!

arjun-ria part was nice...

The story is getting more interesting now...

Wondering how aisha is responsible for diana's death...

eager to knw the complete story... feeling bad for vishal...

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samara

@samara_shiba

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#733

Awesome update...
Sameer was beaten up by Riya & scolded by his mother,...liked Ariya's dance :-):-) Both wanted to go to out to avoid the dance... But Sameer's father caught them...at right time, Arjun learnt dance from Riya...
Daina was a bar dancer who was replaced by Nadia/Aisha...What had actually happened??? in vishal's life,
Continue soon...
Thanks for PM...

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

@MRD1692020

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#734

really superb yaar..

Aisa laga ki dance meri eyes ke saamne chal raha hai...

and Vishal & nadia?????

Diana Vishal ki gf thi... and Nadia ne uski place li...

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jeharshu

@jeharshu

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#735

pls send me pm dear

my id is harshithasamthaan@gmail.com

I had read all parts of this story I just love it

pls send me pm dear

eagerly waiting to read next part dear

plzzz

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kumkum88

@kumkum88

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#736

As usual awesome part 😊
Arjun felt jealous to see riya and vishal
Ariya emotions were really well portrayed
If they love so much to each other
Why the can't solve their issues
But their dance was superb
Vishal was drunk 😭
He hide so much pain in himself
Story of vishal and aunt was heart touching
I think nadia is Ayesha and she is related to vishal past 😲
I am confused about Diana character
Plz in next update give more details about this character
And plz try to solve the issues in ariya life
And bring them close
Because they love each other
Ur song choice is awesome
Thanks 4 giving such a wonderful update
Continue soon and pm ch 27

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Shravani / Arohi

@skrafty

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#737

Awesome update
Loved it
Loved Ariya donce
it was superb
their pain,guilt,emotions were potrayed beautifully
Loved the way u wrote them
A little sneak-peek into Vishal's past
So diana was a bar Dancer who was replaced by Aisha/Nadia
interesting
want to know more
waiting for the next part
continue soon

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kunchu

@kunchu

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#738

I guessed it right

it was Aisha's presence that made the tension

So Nadia replaced Diana and Vishal lost Diana maybe forever.

poor guy

his past is sad

hope he wont take any wrong step now

Riya-Arjun dance

such a pain all along

great update dear

waiting for next part

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rvss

@rvss

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#739

Hi. ... friends . Where is my update. Mere pm box me last 2 parts ki update nahi he.
This is not fear di. .ab me kese age ki story ko read karungi.
Other friends ke diye coment padhke story me kya huva ye pataa chal ta he.
mene tumhe pehle bhi coment nahi diye kyoki story mene adhi padhi thi .
Please send me last 2 parts this story in my pm box.