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Posted: 11 years ago

#721

sry di

newly wed

so no much tim

awsmm prt

thnks 4 pm

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rimi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#722

Originally posted by: IshitaRocks015
res,,,...
me 1stLOL
I love u Rimi di...Big smile
Gabbar

Finally Sameer Aisha getting married...Big smileBig smile
Chhotu still busy eating... sharam karo..boss k ghar pe ho...LOL Shree busy with sam's cousinShocked maar khane ka shauk hai isko!!
Feeling bad for sakshi... she is hell confused with her emotions... she is upset,angry...helpless..and now seeing others happy made her jealous...Confused
I don't blame her..its her fate which played the horrible game with her...
Banged with arjunOuchShocked oh bapree!! acha hua usne thappad nehi mara arjun ko sabke samne..Ouch
Then overhearing the girl speaking to her bf made her curse herself more..
chhotu... 20th jalebi??Dead koi itna meetha kaise khaa sakta hai??Ouch
Shree ka pachka!!!LOLLOLLOL
ye Diana ka kya chakkar hai???ConfusedConfusedConfused
last part bahut confusing tha... mujhe samajh nehi ayaOuch Ria ko Diana samajh raha hai kya vishal?? Diana was killed??? i mean..vishal ki nazron me Diana was killed???
well... i will wait 4 d next update...

ishi what happened?? gabbar has entered you...coz gabbar guessed it right and you left confused..well no offence only few guessed it...🤣
ishi ria is very well alive...why would she be killed??
okay no more confusions...read the next part...hopefully it will clear your doubts...😃
thanks

Originally posted by: kumkum88
sorry for late comment
Awwwsssmmm part
Loved it
Supperbbb.. as always
sam was so nervous
love samjun convo
i have a one question
is arjun and sakshi share physical realtion?
p[z update next chapter soon
and pm me ch 27Smile

to answer your question...yes...Arkashi shared physical relation..
thanks..stay tuned..😳

Originally posted by: laila1994
unres...
It was a confusing update.
Sakshi's state was very well written. Her insecurity, restlessness, & anger...all was justified.
She is my favourite character is this FF. Bold, daring & strong as today's women should be.Big smile
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Shreetu scene was funny.
Shree is flirting with Rathod's cousinROFL
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Vishal's diana was killedShocked
I had guessed it long back that his GF would be dead but wasn't expecting this kind of a twist.
He is a broken men. living with broken dreams...I pity this guy.
I know who is 'her'Big smile
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Vishal could relate to Sakshi's pain.
last scene was a nice addition.
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devil i am really glad you guess it...had you not..i would have discontinued right away...😛
glad you liked the confusion...thanks keep reading..😳

Originally posted by: GOLD.A
loved it Rimi dear
awesome update
sasha marriage has started a new chapter all together Smile
lets see what will happen next
I loved saakshis reaction
it was very natural well explained & justified Clap
well i would say perfect emotion portrayal Cry
Arjun & rest are enjoying sasha marriage except saakshi Cry
even ariya they are just there for the friends Dead
well vishal saw saakshi while leaving Tongue
& he is asking riya about it
lets see what comes next
I want to know abut vishal past Smile
& I have a feeling that saakshi is related to it Confused
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon Smile

thank you so much goldie...vishal saw sakshi at the bus stop when sakshi was leaving for home...well it think you missed it too...
no worries partner...wait for the next part...ill pm you soon..thanks...keep reading..😊

Originally posted by: skrafty
Awesome update
Loved it
Finally Sasha married
Sakshi's reaction was justified
Perfect potray of emotions
Vishal saw Sakshi
and wants to know more about her from Riya
interesting
waiting for the next part
continue soon

thanks skrafty...glad you liked the update...keep reading..😊

Originally posted by: saritak
wow
awesome update
love it
i dont like sakshi attitude
cont soon

Originally posted by: jia03
Awesome update!
feeling bad for sakshi...
want to knw more about vishal's story...

Originally posted by: sonycs001
nice part
sakshis emotons are nicely described
arjun is totally lost in rii then why cant they talk stupid ego
so sakz is linked to vishals past
kahi diana ke death ki peeche sakz ho but you may have your own story in mind
plz update soon

Originally posted by: _Nikita_
Awwwsssmmm part
Loved it
Supperbbb...
Amazing...
Poor Sakshi she was feeling lonely...
Lol poor Shree...
Vishal was asking Riya about whome...???? What did she told him...????
)Who is Daiana...???
Cont sooon
Waiting eagerly for the next part...
Thanks for PM

thanks gals..stay tuned...

Originally posted by: SATRISHI
oh shash's marriage satrted Big smile

cool i want to see the face of ACP RATHORE as dulaha ...DAMMIT

sakshi ...hmm tahts her fate .

and dont know how fate will turns

is vishal ka kya chakkar hai yaar uaka past hai ye tho patahchalrahi hai lekin wo sakshi ko dekhker kyoon poochraha hai??

kya wio pehale se jantah hai??

Ariya ...HUH ye dono ka EGO

about vishal's past..you would come to know with future updates...stay tuned...thanks..😳

Originally posted by: kumkum88
Awesome update!
finally sasha are married
feeling bad for vishal
want to know more about vishal's story
i dont like saakshi attitude
are vishal and saakshi know each other?
plz update next ch soon and pm me of ch 27

Originally posted by: FLOREY

kal rakhi..haath mein mehendi...left hann fingr tip typin..so sory cudnt type for this wndrful update
Ouch

Originally posted by: Harsha111
Superb update di...
Realy sad for sakshi. She safers a lot
Daina, vishal's past story coming
eagerly waiting for next part
cont soon...
Love u di...

thanks gals..

Originally posted by: Snehajain
Awesome update...
Feeling really bad for Sakshi...CryCryCry
Sakshi is very hurt...CryCryCry CryCryCry
Sakshi is feeling lonely & jealous of happiness of all...CryCryCry...Once upon a time she was also a cheerful girl...CryCryCry
Sakshi left from there...OuchOuchOuch
Shree snatched Chotu's laddo...LOLLOLLOL
Shree find his GF in Raesha marriage...LOLLOLLOL
Arjun was observing Riya every move..OuchOuchOuch
And now Vishal's part...Its still confusing Thakur...ConfusedConfusedConfused ConfusedConfusedConfused...& since u r going to update KTK only after BOL or FH is finished mera curiosity level pata nahi kaunsi height pahuchne wala hai...CryCryCry
Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

dont worry gabbu...ab tumne itna roya hua hain..to mein sochi..ek update de deti hu..before getting back to BOL..hopefully this will clear the confusion...not urs though...you can ask me...ill try to reply you..
thanks stay tuned...

Originally posted by: M.V.Kohli007
Areee... ye last ka part mujhe thoda confuse laga...

means Dina mar chuki hai ya phir vo jinda hai...

kyu ki thoda part read kar ke laga ki Vishal Sakshi ke bare mai bol raha hai , par last mai Vishal ne use dekha , to kuch ajeeb laga , jaise vo use nhi jaanta...vo Sakshi ke saath relation mai tha ya nhi?????

and feel bad for Sakshi... she is deeply in love with Arjun...

ya phir Vishal Sakshi se pyar krata tha , and vo bhi One sided love???

and tod's update clerly shows that Ariya still feel for each other... they want to be with each other , but their ego...arrrghhh...

and Shreetu is always good.. Smile

manali...long time finally i got your comment...hope to get more..about vishal sakshi and the last part...wait for the next update...hopefully it will work out..😳
thanks..stay tuned..

Originally posted by: -SREE93-
thnks for the update simmi
i

was this suppose to be a comment?? or you have forgot to type??😕

Originally posted by: Jo_Pinchy
Sorry dear Rimi, for being so late.
From chapter 22 onward--- Superb!
Finally Riya confessed it to Sam about abortion, I really felt pained reading their conversation. But I'm happy for Sam AND Ayesha. Hope their marriage will go well. His fears are reasonable, as it is he saw how his friends marriage is off tracks. Waiting for more shadhi events.
Next update was cute, Arjun eating burnt toast. LOL and then Riya who drinks coffee tried tea. Wow! This girl is trying really hard. Why is she moving. No!
Well jealousy track on the roll soon huh... That Ariya moment, where she wanted him to stop her but yet didn't expected it from him. And the song... sad and perfect choice. And the banner with the tag line was really good.
Oh fo, Sakshi ke parents... and the meeting went as expected. I knew he would not move ahead without putting forward his past to them. WEll im glad her father said no to the marriage.
Vishals's characters seems cute and funny. I think jealousy from arjun's side should start. haha. He calls riya Diana.. love that!
Overall it was superb update. off to read more.Clap

jo..finally you took the time to waste it on my story...well..still a long way...hope you enjoying the journey...
jealousy..well..thats a cheeky track..i hate such emotions..(just joking)
go ahead to read the rest...in case i have missed a pm..do tell me..

thank you so much..

Originally posted by: aroojarain
whoa..
again.an.amazing update..
loved it..
feeling bad for sakshi... she still miss arjun n feeling lonely...
n I think the girl whom.vishal is thinking about is sakshi..
cont soon. :)

thanks dear...sakshi?? really?? well check it urself in the next update..😳

Originally posted by: kunchu
Felt bad for Sakshi
Her only mistake was to love him
Now the whole happy surrounding makes her lonely. But Vishal part is a twist
Why am I getting a feel that he was shocked after seeing Aisha
Waiting for d revelation

i am glad some of my readers could actually guess...what i wanted to say...you are right kuchu...thank you so much...keep reading..😃

Originally posted by: ariyabestfan
thank u so much for updating dear..
sakshi is really in heart broken state..
vishal is asking about someone to riya..whom..?
why he get so much upset..?
who is this Diana..?is she died..?
vishal saw the similar pain he was facing on sakshi's face..
plz continue soon
thanks 4 pm

about vishal diana...it will come up with the future updates...stay tuned..a small part coming up in next..😳

Originally posted by: pango
awesome update
beautifully written
finally sasha are married
feeling bad for sakshi..she is really hurt
who's daina?
waiting for vishal past story
thanx for pm
waiting for next part
continue soon

thanks dear...keep reading..😃

Originally posted by: anuraya
Update was gud.. Thumbs Up Thumbs Up
sakshi's emotions...her anger,hurt,jelousy,helpnlessness all u describe very well Clap
shree nd chhotu apni hi masti m gum h..
Last part of the update full confusing..Confused Confused
vishal call riya as diana naa...then who is this new diana..
sakshi n vishal koi cnnection h kya??
vishal ne kisko dekha ?? kiske baare m riya se puccha ??
lots of questn..hope tht we will get answers in cming update...
thank u for PM..
contiinue soon.. Smile

thanks so much...glad you liked...well about diana...vishal sakshi...everything will be replied with the coming updates..stay tuned...😊

PS could you please use a darker color in your comments..these colors are difficult to read..😛

Originally posted by: samara_shiba
awesome update
finally sasha are married n arjun stealing glances of riya :-):-)
feeling bad for sakshi..she is really hurt, who's daina?waiting for vishal's past story thanx for pm continue soon...

Originally posted by: chand91
sry di
newly wed
so no much tim
awsmm prt
thnks 4 pm

thank you so much...
chand congrats on ur wedding..take ur time..i am in no hurry..😳

Edited by rimi_invisible - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

#723

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ishita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#724

res me 1st

Sneha di...

Unres
Arjun ka ab gussane se kya fayda hoga...
Situation khud itna complicate kia...n here i think even if sakshi walkd away without bothering...she did right...
Because at the end of the day, She was the one suffering 4 no reason ...
He needs to throw his big fat ego somewhere...
Ria teasing Aisha 😆
Sam nehi sudhrega...😊
Y was Ria fighting with sam? 😕

Ria arjun living same kid of life 😭
Both tried to leave the place because both knew that they would be asked to join the dance...
N that happened too... They ended up dancing ...
Ria was still hesitating...
They were feeling awkward at the dance...
But the dance was nicely written...
They were lost in the old days...

Filhaal the song ...maine download pe laga rakha hai...[ u rejected my whole playlist :-( :-(] chalo ...koi nehi...iska badla badme lungi..

Shree chhotu...arjun se dar bhi nehi lagta ab inhe...they wanted another round...
Omg Vishal drunk... He is ina miserable state...
Aunty was hell worried for him...
The backstory was really touchy...
The bond which Vishal and Aunty shared was amazing...
Specially his love for aunty...and his decision to quit over drinking after aunty got injured...
He hated Nadia basically...and the sight of her being happy made him even more angry..
How did diana die? was Nadia responsible? i mean the replacemnt thing or something else?
Update soon...

Edited by IshitaRocks015 - 11 years ago

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laila

@laila1994

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#725

unres...

Nice update.

but again I would say the intensity was missing.

I am confuse about one thing Y is everybody trying to untie push Ariya towards each other by these silly & irritating ways.

For crying out all they are divorced it must be hell awkward.

I know you would say that they love each other & they wanna unite them n all but still it is irritating for me.

Ariya's dance scene was nice.

Aunty's back story was touching.

Aunty & vishal are support system to each other.

I am very much impressed that you even concentrate on the side characters's stories. It makes your stories more interesting.

Vishal's broken state was well written but something was missing

Vishal was in Love with diana & according to him nadia snatched that love I am waiting to read Ayesha & vishal's meeting. 😊

Edited by laila1994 - 11 years ago

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IArmageddonI

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Posted: 11 years ago

#726

HI Rimi dear...

I am hopelessly tortured by Kaisi Teri Khud Garzi... itna ki aar bolo na... maane oboshta kharaab hoi geiche!!! That's why I fear commenting and trying to read ur story... warna I swear pakka the end hoi jabe!!!!

Boli chilam na onek din aage that I would comment on your story and only send me the epilogue... hehe.. here is the comment! Jeez.. finally!

First of all this story gave me the signs as if I were to be in love... raaton ki neend le li... bhook khatam ho gaya wagera wagera...

And then u know the side effect of the story na... prologue toh porei cho!

Well u see am feeling bad for both the wife and gf... what justice does it do to the girl with whom he was physically intimate even without giving it a permanent name... at least wife had aborted their child so ya.. one mistake there of hers.. but she is his wife and yeah.. she has the greater right on Arjun and thing...

if it was Riya in place of Sakku na... same feeling... somehow in between this husband n wife the gf had to give her bali... n no one practically bothers abt tht apart from saying one senti line for her... just bcuz his gf wasn't his wife... so there is literally no one next to her... and since the other one was his legally wedded wife and all so ya... she gets the sympathy votes...

But for a person like me I believe that such intimacy is only to be shared with a wife... or at least someone who is to be your wife... just think... if Arjun had skipped on a protection or suppose one of it didn't work... at this situation if gf became pregnant then? But no.. since she was just the "gf" of Arjun she would have to bear the brunt of loving a guy who does not even spare a look to her after making love to her... (spare alook maane u know... pore kichu... arrey bujhle ki bolchi ami..)

oh ya... and plz one request... just don't pair up the gf with another guy... with a break up so bitter - it would be an insult to hv another guy for her... she's a person.. not a thing to be passed...

and I hope rj comes up with a better explanation thn "she is innocent and blah blah"

It's na insaafi... I often believe it is the intensity of the emotions shared which define the relationship a person shares...

First of all ... even abt making love part... I don't know why I feel the GF suffers more than anyone... and the worst part is that (even I applaud the slap and no nonsense treatment... he deserves it) I don't find anyone to be next to her...

And I would be disappointed if a new guy wld be brought for her... a girl isn't a doll that she can be used and thrown around... hai na... she really wouldn't be able to move on... trust me...

Even I believe how important wife is... and over here my issue is not the wife... it is that why must a girl (gf) suffer so much?

Just because her relationship never had a public name acknowledged... people love the way she fought back but what about the immense pain in her heart... rather yay we become (not you) happy when she becomes attached to a new guy.. .etc...

It could be that I missed a part in the story where GF too has committed a mistake... if it is so then my mouth is shut... and fine there is a fault in a character... having to be duped by ur groom just at the egde of being married... after sharing every fibre of your body with him... its horrendous... horrible feeling... and something which brings a sour taste in my mouth...

I am a kind of person who doesn't see the name of the relation but rather the intensity shared hence are my views like that...

And I think Arjun has evolved into such a guy that I would neither want him with Wife nor GF... both deserve something better...

But I must say this is one of the best stories I have read in my entire life which deals with emotional complexities... torture kora jonno koto taka pao toh ektu bolo? 😆

Tomar bhatakti aatma ke koti koti pranam!

see I knew it that love sucks! *wry smile*

kidding - I personally don't believe in luv na... toh ab yeh story padh ke mummy daddy aur dada ke convince kore dite paari about my stance! what if my guy turns out to be a rj?

well I have really enjoyed this story dear.. u hv really made me cry! u r too good in writing dear... too good... just whenever the epilogue comes... do send it to me! but then I trust u... u always make sense dear :D

Lots of love dear... Innumerable hugs!

Edited by Armagadon - 11 years ago

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rvss

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Posted: 11 years ago

#727

My id - siyashah2014@gmail.com
please send me this update in my pm box.
I also don't read last update.
Please ab agare pdaneko na mile to kese chalega
I am waiting for pm.
Please very fast soon.