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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: skrafty
Interesting concept
loved it
continue soon

Thanks.. shall do! 😊

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#22

Originally posted by: subhakmhl
Nyc start... Pls cont. soon...

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#23

Originally posted by: miss_precious
Hello stranger? Look who is back? The heart breaker who discontinued my mist favourite stories and starts new ones only to discontinue them again

This is a very interesting start but why did I not get a pm *cry*

Update this soon plz and do send me a pm if u can... Also if possible please complete some of ur other awesome work *puupy face*

Hey stranger! 😉

LOL! My apologies! 😆 But kya kare... sab marr gaye na! aur show bhi khatam ho gaya!

anyways... I did not PM anyone for the prologue! So.. roneka nehi! 😆

Thanks love! 🤗

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#24

Originally posted by: aroojarain
awesome prologue Di..
story seems to be interesting..
cont soon :)

Thanks prettiness! 🤗

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Originally posted by: coolRD
wndrful strt
d prologue seemed 2 b quite intrstng..
wud luv 2 read mre abt it
plz do pm me wenevr u upd8 nxt

Hey Thanks!

I will 😊

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#26

Originally posted by: _Mohabbatgirl_

Exactly my sentiments, lady!

Haila... bacchi pe tanik bharosa toh karo!

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Originally posted by: _Mohabbatgirl_
Can I please swear right now!! Like pretty please..

Where the fudge is my PM?!! 😲 😡😡

You posted it!! You actually posted it.. God!!

Okay! So now that my excitement is out of the way, I can breathe and be normal, for a change.. 😛

Do I have to tell you that I'm already hooked to it? You probably know already.. 😛

Rheani sounds like an angel.. But who's the she? If she is indeed who I think it is, what have you done to her? 😲

Khair chodo.. Lets not bombard you with questions already..
I'm going to be a patient good girl and wait..

But darling, the wait also lasts for a limited time.. Toh pleej apni aseem kripa hum sabpar banaye rakhiyega..

Love it already and it sounds bhery bhery enticing, seksy.. 👍🏼

Yours truly..

*Green mukhda*

P.S. The new banner made my heartwa go dhak dhak.. And I hope you remember who my heroine is, for this one.. ❤️

But I did not PM anyone! khamakha meri khatiya khara kar rahi ho aap Ms Gupta! 😭

It is her... 😉 with twists. And it's kinda fantasy genre but yeah, similar to the story I told you about! (With lots of changes!)

I shall update soon.. have a bank of updates already! but jab bankrupt ho jau, tab problem hogi 😉

Thanks love! 🤗

p.s : heroine huh? I wonder who! 😉

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#28

Originally posted by: miss_bennet
Wow awesome start!
And I couldn't help but chuckle reading a certain name. I will say no more. 🤣

bahahahaha! 🤣🤣🤣🤣 that was a good day! 😉

Thanks love! 🤗

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Hailaaa!

I didn't PM anyone.. kahe mereko gaaliya maadi?

Anyway... a few thing about this crazy story (all of my stories are crazy, no? 😆)

It's purely fictional.. so all the people and even the places will be fictional.

The place is a Kingdom named "Vallery". And the time set is set somewhere in the future. Meaning a lot of technology!! Yay! 😃 (Seriously.. what else can you expect from me?🤪)

But yeah.. there will be all kinds of sword fighting and all.. I'm a old school like that. 😆

Word meaning :

Nana : Grandma/ Dadima

Sensei : Chief/ Teacher / Headmaster etc

ETF : Not what you think it is 😆

All being said.. this story is a dedication to my dear Green Mukhda. (You know who you are.😉)

Apna Birthday gift hi samajh lo! 😛

haan haan.. pata hai, I love you too dammit! 😉

anyway... later baby!

- T

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Chapter One
...I remember what you wore on the first dayYou came into my life and I thought heyYou know, this could be something...

And they meet...

"I swear to God if he doesn't stop hitting on me, I'mma drain his bank accounts, and go on a vacation with his money."
I murmur under my breath.. making yet another scotch for Mr Rawte. Apparently, he is some utterly famous valorous warrior of ETF.
Named after the great toxophilite Arjuna, he is indeed supreme. Or so does the people of kingdom Vallery say so.
"Oh please.." I scorn. "He is nothing but a creep." I say to myself.
Now don't get me wrong. I don't judge people. I mean..yeah I do, occasionally. But I've got some good reasons to do so.
You must be thinking why I'm after this Arjun guy, right? Well, I'm not.. but he is. The moment he has stepped in this pub, he has made me fetch his drinks at least thousand times. Okay..maybe not thousand times, but pretty close.
However, that's not the point!
He has been hitting on me from the moment I took his first order. And it was creepy! His eyes literally looked like they would devour me whole!
And believe me, I am not comfortable wearing this skimpy waitress dress provided by the pub. It's too tight on the places it shouldn't be, and geez, it's too short. Even for me who has never wore anything that hasn't shown her toned legs. (yeah, I have beautiful legs, FYI!)
Oh my God! I totally forgot to introduce myself. Geez...Anyways.. I'm Rheani Sh...umm, I don't like to use my lastname, sorry!
Umm.. so yeah, I ran away from my home to find my freedom. But holy Geez, it's hard out there. Guess, living in a mansion all your life makes you socially inadequate.
So, I landed up taking this stupid job. But hey, even if the salary is not too much, I can still pay my rent and buy food!
And it's temporary though. Someday soon, I will be a part of the strongest warrior league of this kingdom, ETF. Even though I do not know how. It has been my dream since I learned to dream. I remember my nana reading me all those thrilling stories about the incredible warrior league named ETF. She was once part of the league herself. She bear the mark till her death.
I knew I belonged there.
So I ran away from my home.. from my brother.
Anyways.. that story is for some other day.
Seeing this creep being one of the strongest members of ETF, I doubt my decision.
"Rheani, can you please take out the trash?" another waitress calls out to me. She is nice, unlike the others. So, I nod and say, "Sure." I need some air anyway.
I open the backdoor to the alleyway, and carry the trash bags to the trashcan. Dumping them in, I wipe my hands on my skirt. But as soon I start walking back, I hear some noises behind the giant trashcan.
I freeze. Intruder.. nehi nehi, rapist hi hoga.
Oh shut it! I reprimand myself. My logical mind told me to walk in faster but the stupid, brave side urged me to go on, and investigate. And, I never listen to my logical mind.
So, I pull out my mini portable knife holder and click. A 6 inches long blade comes out of the tiny holder. (technology my dear!)
Gulping down my fear, I take small, careful steps. In half a minute, I reach behind the trashcan, and find someone lurking in the shadows. He straightens up as he hears my heavy breathing.
"Who.. are you?" I ask, trying to sound brave. But geez, I was scared! What if he was actually a rapist! Aikko Deva!
"Don't even think of running!" I warn him, becoming conscious of his turning to me. But I freak out when his blade gleams in the dim street light. And so I strike..
Only to find myself tackled down on the ground. My knife is knocked far..far away from me. My hands are pinned above my head, and my mouth is clamped shut with a very.. very manly hand. It happened so fast that I couldn't get a moment to take all in.
So, I stare at my captors' face.
If we were in a different place, in a different position, I'd say he was handsome. Hell, he IS handsome.
Black hair cascading down his forehead, as his dark eyes gazes into mine. There is a scar on his left eyebrow, and I wonder how he got it. My eyes travel down from his eyes to find a perfect M shaped lips and a jaw to kill for. Literally.
(On a lighter note, I don't know how my eyesight got so much better that I was able to see his features under the street light.)
"Shhh.. what are you doing?" he asks me in his husky voice and I lose it!
Okay pretty boy! Enough of this.
I struggle and try to kick him where it would hurt, but he presses down more on me. "hey.. I'm not gonna hurt you, Miss Rheani." He says urgently.
Holy whaaat! He knows my name! A planned rape! I start to freak out more.
"I will release you if you stop struggling." Huh..as if! I struggle with more force.
He sighs, releases me anyway. He stands up, and tries to help me but I move away, and stand up.
"Who are you? And how do you know my name?" I ask him, still tensed even though he is a point mile away.
He chuckles. "I'm not here to rape you miss."
I blush. "Doesn't answer my question though." I shoot back."Your name tag." He answers.
"and..I'm here to look for someone named Arjun." He continues. "is there by any chance, he is here?"
"and.. may I ask why you are looking for him?" I ask him, curiously.
"He is an old friend. Heard he is in the town, so I thought I would pay him a visit." He replies, picking up my knife.
Great..another creep!
"Is that why you were behind the trashcan?" I ask. But, he chooses to ignore it. I roll my eyes.
He detects it for a minute, and then hands me my knife."It's a good blade. Where did you get it?" He asks, seeming interested.
"My nana gave me." I take the knife, still holding it.. if he decided to attack back! He chuckles.. "I won't."
Damn.. I thought that out loud, didn't I?
I turn away from the stranger. I should get inside.. get away from this charismatic stranger. "He is inside." I tell him, and with long strides, I go back inside.

~*~*~*~*~

The next day, I ran into Mr Creep #1 again. I really don't understand why girls go gaga over him. He is not handsome. Girls.. really!
"hello beautiful." He winks at me, sipping on his drink."Mr Arjun." I reply with a curt smile.
"Listen..there's this party I'm throwing this afternoon, and I'd be really happy if you come. The whole town is coming, actually." he purrs, and I cringe away from him.
"I'm sure.. but I'm really sorry. I can't." I politely decline. There is no way I'm going to this creep's party.
"Oh come on.. it's gonna be fun!" "Nope.. I'm gonna pass."
"Too bad..There will be lot of ETF members.. and I'm sure our Sensei will be there too." He adds.
Sensei!! As in ETF's chief!
So if I meet him and manage him to take me in, I will be a part of ETF in no time!
eeeKsss!
"haha.." I manage to make my fake flirty laugh. "I was just messing with ya.. I'd love to come!" I flatter my eyelashes at him.
He smirks. "So, see you then?" "Sure, sir!"
Geez.. he makes me nauseous. But ah well.. anything for ETF.

~*~*~*~

Later that evening, I get dressed in a blue cocktail dress, and make my way to that creep's party. Fun! *Sarcasm Included*
The party is held in a cabin in the woods. Creepy right? Well, what else can you expect from him?
There is booze all over the place. Girls dancing, and flirting with anyone that passes by. I sigh. I need to find Mr Creep. So, I go inside the cabin, and soon enough, I find Mr Creep.
"There are approximately 70 girls out there." I hear him say on his phone. Curious, I step into the shadow and listen to his conversation. You can call me nosy!
And I was right.. he is trying to smuggle girls. Saala creep!
I fume.. clutching my knife. I'mma teach this Bas*ard a lesion.
"Not so fast, missy!" I hear a voice say. Alarmed, I turn around, ready to strike. But a hard slap knocks me over.
"So you figured out, eh?" Mr Creep comes out, smirking.
I glare at him, while being captured by his men. (A total Sholay wala scene, by God!)
He produces a syringe from his pocket, smirking at me."No.. don't touch me..I'm warning you!"
I move violently, but all in vein. I feel the prick of the needle, and a little bit of cold substance enter my skin but soon enough, someone shoves Mr Creep away from me.
That handsome trashcan guy stands fuming in front the broken door. And I keep staring at him in awe.
"Which one of you fools is Arjun?" He growls. By now, Mr Creep is back on his feet.
"I am." Mr Creepy King says. "But who the hell are YOU?"
The handsome guy snarls, punching Mr Creep hard on his face,
"The real Arjun Rawte from ETF, you bas*tard."

Oh my..

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