AriyaTS: U R My Life (Last part)pg 16(28/2/14)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello friend here come my first TS today I little free so I think to update this TS hope u like it

I this story Arjun and Riya all ready married


Ariya TS : U R My Life





Riya get up early morning go frensh up and after fresh up she goes kitchen to make breakfast for her and her husband who is sleeping in there room

After finish her house work and breakfast she goes in there bedroom to wake up Arjun

R : Arjun get up soon neither u will late of office

A : Pls riya let me sleep

R : No arjun see the time its already 7 :30

A : Arjun with jerk what 7:30

R : yes go get get fresh and come for breakfast

A : Ok

Arjun goes washroom and in the means Riya remove his clothe ,wallet, watch ,handkerchief,shoes ,shock she make his all this ready and go to the kitchen to pack his lunch box for lunch


Arjun come out from washroom and wear all this which riya all ready arrange for him

A : arjun while shouting coming down riya riya

R : yes arjun I am here in kitchen

A : Coming toward kitchen my breakfast is ready

R : yes u sit dinning table I will bring

A : Ok

Riya bring breakfast and and both eat there breakfast going to there office but riya stop at door and tell arjun bye

A : Arjun with confuse face what u r not coming to eft

R : Coming but little bit late

A : Why u not feel well

R : No arjun actually I want to buy some house related thing

A : Then we will buy together while coming u come with me etf

Riya thinking how should I tell him I want to go hospital if I say he will also come with me think riya think some excuse

A : riya where u lost come soon

R : Actually Arjun today me and ayesha decide to go shopping pls try to understand she will feel bad

A : What ayesha also coming with u

R : yes

A : Ok kiss riya forehead and bye her but his heart is still beat fast like something bad happen with Riya but then also give force smile to her and live etf

Riya immediately run inside the house and call ayesha to meet her in the hospital



ok how its is next part tomorrow if I get nice response

I know I am not good writer then also I try something hope u all like this

and I want big big comment not small small and like awesome ,nice I want what u like this update
and press like button with comment if there is more like then I will update second part neither not


And body want pm send buddy request to me

and I sent this story pm to u is my buddy list

Why I am asking big comment because I want to know whether u like it and which part u like it and where I want to improve that main thing not any other hope u all can understand because I am a not good writer


Part 1 page no. 1
Part 2 page no. 7
Part 3 page no. 16 (Last past)








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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow ariya married...awewome


Lekin ye arjun na kuch jyada hi unromantic hai...

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Awesome start dr...!!!!!
Why Riya want to hide that she hv to go to hospital frm Arjun...?????
Awww Arjun felt a bit uneasy but avoided it...!!!!
Thanks for pm dr...!!!! Continue soon...!!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks Pink Beautiful update
Awesome Dear
Thanks for the Pm
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow dear so you wrote a new ts.
Awesome start dear.
Just loved it.
So ariya is married.
This arjun is very unromantic.
Hey but why riya want to hide that she have to go hospital?
Is there any problems?
And why arjun felt uneasy?
Do continue soon.
And thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice start
continue soon
thanks for PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
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superb awesome wala start
loved it
ariya moments simple..
want more of them..
waiting for the next partt
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks dear but press like button
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sdutta

Sweet start

Beautiful Ariya morning



thanks pres like button also
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb update...! Ok there's sumhin bad with riya..eager for next update n thanks for the PM..!

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