FF:Reshimbandh [New version link in 1st post] - Page 6

Created

Last reply

Replies

338

Views

55.9k

Users

36

Likes

793

Frequent Posters

rinku95 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#51
Superb
Everyone shocked
Thanks for pm continue soon
kaveriw2008 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#52
wow awesome
i can imagine all ETF members faces ...lol
Aks13 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#53
Awesome concept n Cs...!!!!
Just read all the updated...!!!!
They are fantastic dr...!!!!
Neha's entry was superb...!!!!
Loved it...!! Continue soon...!!!!
Shamsad1607 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#54
Your chapter 2 was great!!...nice going..
that Neha...is an interesting specimen I must say...her antics..enjoyed a lot.
But this line.. " pani yr ch"na?" what kind of bangla it is? I never heard it.

Good going...she made R-R dancing on her tunes...great!

Do continue..& thanks for PM.

(P.S. Sorry for late..was busy)..Happy valentines day.
ariyabestfan thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
#55
awsome update.. Plz continue soon.. Thanks 4 pm
greensakthi thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#56
Nice part.
one thing clear here, that -can we trust the Rajastani and Marathi ?😉
One more thing i hope it is the third one on the 3rd row is Neha. Tell me if i',m correct.😛
the fight was nice and the reaction of Arjun to it too..😡
keep entertaining us dr. and give us the translation if you r going to speak in other languages.(of course we 've to trust it for we know nothing of those langs.)😃
Do con soon dr.😉
Edited by greensakthi - 11 years ago
Delusional_Minx thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#57
thankx for liking

read comments n replied everyone..

@pink1 - thankx

@halima_zaka - thankx

@ GOLD.A - thankx

@shreyashi19mld - thankx

@ rimi_invisible - thankx di

@ rinku95 - thankx

@ kaveriw2008 - thankx

@Aks13 - thankx

@ Shamsad1607 -that bangla I found on google I don't know bangla. N thankx

@ ariyabestfan - thankx

@greensakthi- yes u can definitely trust Marathi as it is my mother tongue n rajasthani is quite similar to gujrati n I know that as well n I use google as reference before posting it dear so u can trust it n u r correct

Delusional_Minx thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#58
replied everyone on pg 8..
here comes the next part..

Chapter 2 (c)



In ETF Office...

In conference room..

Sam- team ..aaj koi case nahi he to aap sab apna paper work khatam kar lo.

Sam n jun go to their cabins

Aisha -😔 yaar.. ye Neha hai koun? Sri tum apne laptop se iski profile kholo na. Dekhte he ye ladki koun he jo hamare boss ko unke saamne Sadu Akdu keh diya aur wo dono chupchap sun bhi rahe the.

Ri - ha aur kaise ha me ha mila rahe the. Waise ye darling kehkar ruk gayi thi..wo koun ho sakta he?❓

Aisha - ye ladki to kal mujhe aur Rathod sir ko raaste me mili thi aur usne sir ko sam' kaha tha.

Liza - kahi wo darling' Rathod sir to nahi the?Aisha..

Aisha - 😔pata nahi yaar..par ho bhi sakte he..kaise usko itna pyar se Baby' keh rahe the..

Chotu - ho sakta he ..tabhi to Rathod sir tumhe bhaav nahi dete Aisha.😛

Sri - lekin Arjun sir ne bhi use baby' kaha tha..to iska matlab samjhey ya samjhau?😆

Ri - matlab uska pet name baby' he? Aur wo Arjun sir ki behen he..😃

Sri - 😆chalo Arjun sir ke saath rehne se ri to ye samajh gayi..Aisha lekin rathod sir aur iska kya connection he ye tumhe hi samajhna padega..aur me tumhare liye uski profile to khol sakta hu lekin uska pura naam pata kiye bina nahi. to uska full name lekar aao n ur work will be done..

Jun - Kiska full name chahiye tumhe Sri? Aur kya kaam karna he?

Sri - a..a.. Arjun sir..w.wo kuch nahi bas aise hi..k...kuch kaam nahi tha sir.

Jun - Sach me kuch kaam nahi he? Kya thumhara paperwork khatam ho gaya?Khatam ho gaya ho to mere paas tumhare liye kaam he.

Sri - p..paper work to baaki he sir..

Jun - Baaki he to use khatam karo aur baate kaam hone ke baad karna.. samjhey ya samjhau?

Sri - samajh gaya sir.

[Jun takes a file n goes]

Sri - oh thank God ki us samjhey ya samjhau ne hamari puri baat nahi suni warna to hamari band hi baj jati aaj. Agar Neha Arjun Sir ki behen he to me try karke dekhta hu.

He types n gets information about Neha.

Sri - yaar Aisha tera kaam ho gaya..ye dekho.

Ye Arjun sir ki cousin he. Yaar ye Neha to mastermind lagti he.😲.she's topped in her every exam.Aur use Marathi ke alawa aur 7 languages aati he, Hindi,English,Gujrati,Punjabi, Bangla, Marwari aur Sanskrit bhi aati he..

Chotu - Itni saari bhasha sikh kar ye kya karti hogi?😕

Sri - ye to sirf trailer he..ye poems n articles bhi likhti he,dancing me visharad purn he and singing bhi karti he. Aur drawing bhi acchi khasi kar leti he. Aur wo martial artist bhi he!😃

Aisha - ye ladki to humne soocha usse kahi jyada smart n talented he.

Ri - Neha ki smile bhi kitni pyaari he na!

Aisha - ye sab to thik he par iska aur Rathod sir ka kya connection he?

[sam comes to take a file n see everyone around Sri looking at something on his laptop. He guesses that they must be looking for Neha's profile to know about her.]

Sam -Ab tum logo ka Neha ki profile dekhna khatam ho gaya ho to ab apna Paperwork khatam karo.

All together - yes sir.

[Sam goes to his cabin]

Sri -😲 ye damnit ko kaise pata chala ki hum Neha ki profile dekh rahe the?

Chotu - Sri mujhe to lagta he ki sir antaryami he. Bolo Sameer baba ki jay!😆😉

Aisha - stop it Chotu! Ye kya bewakoofo jaisi baat kar rahe ho?

Liza - Ri..mujhe to kuch jalne ki boo aa rahi he..tumhe aayi kya?

Ri - ha aisa lag raha he jaise kuch buri tarah jal raha he.

Sri - Ri..kuch nahi koi jal raha he.

Chotu - yaar mujhe to koi badbu nahi aa rahi tum logo ko kya jalne ki bu aa rahi he?

Aisha - tum sab mera mazaak uda rahe ho na? me tum sab se baat hi nahi karungi.

Ri - are tum to naraaz ho gayi..ok sorry..agli baar aisa mazaak nahi karenge.

Liza - Aisha..ab maan bhi jaao na.

Sri - ya tumhe bhi hume punish karne ka mood he? Uss Neha ki tarah?

Chotu - Yaar Sri, ye punishment kya ho sakti he?ye Neha hamare dono boss ko kya punishment degi? Tujhe kya lagta he?

Ri - Statistically speaking 80% cases me punishment situps hoti he so maybe wo in dono ko situps karwayegi..

Sri - lo sun liya Chotu Statistics mata ki bhavishyawani?ya aur kuch puchna he?

[arjun enters n hears Sri's last words]

Jun - tum logo ka doubt solving session khatam ho gaya ho to apna kaam karo.[n he goes n sits in his chair n is reading a file ]

~ ~ ~

Neha reaches her home..

It is a large mansion "Rawte's" was written on its entrance gate.

She goes inside n ..

Neha - Ramu kaka!

[a person of 60's comes to her ]

Ramu kaka - ji baby ji..

Neha - Humne aapse jo kaam karne ke liye kahe the saare ho gaye?

Ramu kaka - ji..sab ho gaya..

Naye parde aur chadare lagwa di he,sabhi kamro ki saf-safayi bhi ho gayi he,aur khana banane hi ja raha hu..aur koi kaam ho to bataiye..

Neha - ji nahi..thik he..hum abhi apne kamre me aaram karne jate he. Khana ban jaye to bula lijiyega.

[she goes to her bedroom.it is very well setup room..behind her bed is a big collage of her family pics. Neha sits on her sofa n opens a book but then keeps it n goes to her bed n takes a short nap. She takes lunch n then sits to watch tv.]

At 4:00 pm..

Neha hears a constant ringing of doorbell n opens the door. A very handsome boy is standing at the door.

Rahul - kitni der laga di darwaza kholne me? Kab se bell baja raha tha? So rahi thi kya? Jaldi khol nahi sakti thi darwaza?

Neha - oh ho Rahul dada! Had karte he aap. Bolte waqt saans bhi le liya kijiye sehat ke liye accha hota he.ab andar ayiye ya bahar hi rukne ka irada he..

Rd - accha thik he. Waise tumhari chot kaisi he?

Neha - chot? Wo to thik he lekin aapko kaise pata chala ki hume chot lagi he?

Rd - wo sab baad me batata hu pehle fresh hokar aane do. Tum baitho me 10 minute me aata hu.

Neha - ok.

[after 10 min. Rd comes wearing a black shirt.]

Rd - baby! Ab tumhara aaj shaam ka plan kya he?

Neha - aaj ki shaam bahot hi dhamakedar hone wali he. Humne sam aur jun bhaiya ko 7 baje bulaya he aur unki bahut acchi khatirdari bhi hone wali he. Aur hum soch rahe the kyu na colour code rakhe?

Rd - idea bura nahi he..kounsa colour choose kiya?

Neha - black! Hum soch rahe the black rakhe.

Rd - that's good.accha he mujhe firse change nahi karna padega. Par tum to black pehnogi na?

Neha - ha..pehan lenge.[in mind - har baar ki tarah is baar bhi nahi pehenege.]chaliye hum nashta karte he.

[they both have some snacks n sit chatting]

At 5:30..

Rd - baby tum baitho mujhe ek call karna he..me abhi wo karke aata hu.

Neha - ok.

[Rd goes]

Neha - are! Humne sam bhaisa aur jun bhaiya ko colour code ke baare me bataya hi nahi.koi baat nahi hum unhe msg kar dete he.

[she msgs sam n jun to wear black n come]

~ ~ ~

ETF conference room..

All are busy doing their paper work but silently as their bosses are also sitting with them.

But they r distracted by buzzing of phone.

Sam - Rawte! Tumhare liye msg he.

Jun - mere liye?lekin tumhe kyu aaya? Aur kiska he?

[before sam says anything jun's phon buzzes]

Jun - ye msg tumhare liye aaya he.

[they exchange phones n look at the msg it was frm Neha]

Sam - kuch samajh me nahi aata ki is ladki ke dimaag me kya chalta rehta he. Ab punishment ke liye bhi koi dress code decide karta he kya?

Jun - to kya socha tumne ? black pehnoge aaj ?

Sam - isme sochne jaisa kya he? Msg pura nahi padha kya? Last me by order likha tha. Ha magar tum kaha order follow karte ho?

[be4 jun says anything his cell rings]

Jun - [on call] ha Rahul bolo..

Rd - bhaiya aapko msg mila hoga na..

Jun - ha mila..kyu?

Rd - wo me soch raha tha kyu na baby ko surprize de?

Jun - kaisa surprize?

Rd - mere paas ek idea he..aap to pata he na ki baby kabhi colour code follow nahi karti to me soch raha tha kyu na hum uske plan ko flop kare?

Jun - tum kehna chahte ho ki hum code follow na kare?

Rd - ha lekin hum sab white pehenenge thik he

Jun - me rathod se baat karke tumhe batata hu..

Rd - plz sam bhai ko mana lena ki wo bhi white pehne ha ..bye.

Jun - thik he ..bye.[cuts the call]

[to Sam] Rathod wo Rahul ka phone tha

Sam - pata he mujhe ab aage batao.

Jun - wo chahta he ki hum sab aaj white pehne.

Sam - kya?white? Lekin kyu?black pehenne me kya problem he? Hume shok sabha me thodi jaana he?

Jun - problem nahi he lekin baby ko surprize dena he ab baaki jo tumhe thik lage..waise hum teeno white pehenege..tumhe akele black me aana ho to tumhari marzi.

Sam - ye tum mujhe option de rahe ho ya apna faisla suna rahe ho? Waise koun teen?

Jun - me,Rahul aur Neha. me to bata raha tha.

Sam - I have no option .. lekin agar Neha ko gussa aa gaya aur hamari punishment usne badha di to? Mujhe to waise bhi tumse 10 jyada karni he..

Jun - hum use punishment dene ya badhane ka chance hi na de to?

Sam - wo kaise?

Jun - wo tum Rahul par chor do.

Sam - pehle apna plan batao..agar is baar bhi koi stupid plan kiya aur wo flop hua na to me tum dono ko nahi chorunga..

Jun - ye plan nahi flop hoga.

Sam - tum itna yakin se kaise keh sakte ho?pehle apna plan batao

Jun - [tells him the plan]

Sam - what? Me ye nahi kar sakta.

Jun - come on Rathod isse accha plan nahi ho sakta.

Sam - lekin agar use pata chal gaya to? I don't want to take risk.

Jun - risk to leni hi padegi warna tumhe punish hone ka shoukh he to tum jaa sakte ho.

Sam - par..

Jun - behes baad me karna abhi agar late ho gaye na to hamesha ke liye late ho jaoge.😉[n he leaves]

Sam - team! Tum sab apna paperwork khatam karke ghar jaa sakte ho.

[he leaves]

~ ~ ~

At 7:00..

Rawte Mansion..

Neha - ye dono abhi tak aaye kyu nahi? abhi tak to aa jaana chahiye tha. Koi baat nahi 5 min wait karte he aur jitna min late honge us hisab se punishment badha denge.

7:15...

Neha - bhaiya ko call karke puchte he kab tak pahuchenge?[she calls but niether Sam nor Jun pick up phone. She calls at ETF office. Aisha picks up]

Aisha - ETF se Aisha bol rahi hu..

Neha - wo aapke boss he kya wahan par?

Aisha - nahi. wo dono to 6 baje hi yahan se nikal gaye the.

Neha - 6 baje nikal gaye the? To ab tak phunche kyu nahi? aur mera phone kyu nahi utha rahe?

Aisha - ye mujhe kaise pata hoga? Plz aap hamara time waste mat kijiye.[n she cuts the call]

Neha - [she is waiting n her phone rings..it was Jun's no.]hello..bhaiya aap kahan he?abhi tak ghar kyu nahi pahuche?

Caller - aye ladki.. chupchap apun ki baat sun..tere dono bhaiyo ko apun ne kidnap karela he. Paise kab kahan kitne pahuchane he ye baad me bataunga. Aur ha chokri koi hoshiyaari mat karna warna tere bhai sahi salamat ghar nahi pahuchenge.[n cuts the call]

Neha - something smells fishy..ye kidnaper ne sam bhaisa aur Jun bhaiya ko kidnap kiya par kaise aur kyu?

~ ~ ~

That's it.my work's done..now its ur turn to give ur reviews.

pink1 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
#59
nice update they are
making plan to save them self
from punishment but who is playing
neha role and arjun wife dead or
not because riya like arjun u show
update soon
Edited by pink1 - 11 years ago
ariyabestfan thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
#60
awsome update..

Plz continue soon..

Thanks 4 pm

Related Topics

Arjun thumbnail

Posted by: VirMan506 · 3 years ago

HELLO EVERYONE I AM SIMA, THE WRITER OF AN ANGEL IN DISGUISE I CAN NOT ACCESS MY ACCOUNT VIRMAN505 SO I WILL BE CONTINUING FROM THIS ACCOUNT...

Expand ▼
Arjun thumbnail

Posted by: rosamale · 1 years ago

Hi Everyone, It’s been close to a decade that I stopped writing any stories. Last week I accidently came across the stories I have written while...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".