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Delusional Minx

@Delusional_Minx

Stunner

+ 33

Posted: 11 years ago

#591

awesome update di

loved it🤗

I'm speechless.. u described everything so well..so perfectly!*hats off to u!*

Avni's outburst..superb!👏

sam went to search Arjun but returned without him..he so well knew that he needed to be alone!

then kiren telling them about Roshni's murder n Sam's reaction! mindblowing!

sam is correct..imagine himself in place of Arjun n Avni in Roshni!

fonally everything between Sam-Jun is about to sort out..almost sorted!

eagerly waiting for their reunion!

do continu soon

thankx for pm

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Shravani / Arohi

@skrafty

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#592

Awesome update
Just loved it
All the emotions, pain, guilt,longing everything was written just beautifully
Avni-Kiren confrontation was just superb
Avni is right
A mother would never want her child to be shadowed by her father's wrong deeds
and Arjun
alas I really have no words for this man
he has gone through so much that his pain is really unexplainable
Finally Sam came to know about Kiren's involvement in Roshni's murder
he realized his mistake and now wants to apologize to Arjun
waiting for the next part
continue soon

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638783

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#593

Awesome update!

Finally everyone now knows the truth...

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prachi

@prachi90

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#594

Awam update kunchu
frm last 2-3 updates it's bcmng mire emotional
Avni's anger nd kiren's situation vs written vry we'll
Rathore's outburst...nd Arjun's pain...nd hollowness nd painfull.state is beautifully wriitten
😭
Sam nd everyone knws truth nw.
👏

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Devangana

@Devangana

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#595

Awesome. Everyone is in pain in their own way. No one is wrong, it is only the circumstances which has brought them to this point. Avni did what she thought was right. Sameer too wasn't wrong but now he is trying to come to terms with the truth that Kiran told him. Arjun's plight was apparent from his painkiller wala question. They are all fighting their inner demons. Please update soon.

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rinku95

@rinku95

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#596

Fantastic
Finally Sameer knows that their is sikinder
Arjun is so much shattered
How will Sameer help him
Continue soon
Thanks for pm

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Snehajain

@Snehajain

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#597

Awesome update...

Avni had said those things that Kiren heart's was saying but he didn't heard it...

Avni-Kiren both were 😭😭😭

But yes Kiren is right...all his sins are now paying off...

I guess now Rathod-Rawte vll become SamJun...😃😃😃

Finally Sameer came to know everything from Kiren himself...

Sameer guess very well that Kiren was involve in Roshni's murder...

Arjun went to ETF building to find solace in silence...

Last scene was 😭😭😭 😭😭😭

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

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Atisha Khan

@Shamsad1607

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#598

you know why I love you sooo much?
bcause you are the best to play with emotions.
revelation...today you proved how painful it can be...starting with kiren...arjun...sam...each was bleeding badly...& i just loved those bleeding hearts.
the way you put the truth in front of the public... you deserve 2-4 sloppy kisses from me...and a hug for the slap avni gifted kiren.
it was something i was expecting...but the way you scatched the pain, anger, helplessness and shock ...it's just praiseworthy...
thans for this brilliant update
keep writing.

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Shweta Gupta

@ll_megha_ll

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#599

Awesome update di..

Just loved it...

Do continue soon...

And thanks for giving me pm..

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deffa

@deffa

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#600

Part 20

Awesome... Everything written so nicely 👏
Avni broken 😭 she can't stop herself from crying
Arjun broken too... N angry also... he is tolerating Kiren somehow
Arjun doesn't wanna take help from Kiren but it was expected...
Anjali's state is no better the little girl has to take so many things at this small age...
Kiren's reunion with his daughter was heart touching 😭 😊
Rawte gusse se chala gaya 😲 but he needs some time alone...
Avni slapped Kiren 😲 didn't she want him back
Nicely depicted part...

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