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Shreya

@shreya09

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Posted: 11 years ago

#571

Perfect 👏 👏 (but i wanted to read more... next time thora lamba update milega please 😳 ? but no force 😆 )

Arjun & Kiran's confrontation was very nicely written. its not easy for Arjun to accept Kiran's apology. i doubt he will ever accept it. no reasoning, no situation and simply noone can erase the crimes committed by Kiran. its not only about Roshni... but there are many more person's death...many more wrongdoings... & those were done by Kiran... without his wish though...

Sameer... time for him to face the truth. time to know that Arjun was never wrong about Sikandar... and yes... Sikandar exists !!

Anjali took my heart again 😭 Avni & Kiran...

waiting for the next part 😳

btw thanks for making my Sunday. Its still the Arjun day for me. and this story of urs helps me to feel that the show is still going on 👍🏼

Edited by shreya09 - 11 years ago

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638783

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#572

Awesome update!

Loved the meeting of Kiren & Anajali..

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rimi

@rimi_invisible

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#573

superb update kuchu...

the reunions...for me kiran is a hero here...😃

a tough man wrong by his fate...finally he meets his destiny inside a 2 room flat...👏

the initial hesitation of each of the members present..the rage, the anger, a bunch of lost and confused souls..very well potrayed..

the long waiting Arjun-kiran confrontation...was mind blowing...
then the father-daughter meet after years of longing...

inbetween comes rathod's confusion and help...well

waiting for avni-kiran...continue soon...

thanks for the pm

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Devangana

@Devangana

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#574

Very well written. Arjun and Kiran confrontation was justified and needed too. It reassured Arjun about Sikander's existence. Although not directly nevertheless Kiran is also involved and responsible for Roshni's murder. However Arjun also showed him the difference between them and him by saying that he will always protect Avni and Anjali. Now after all these years Sameer and the ETF team know that Arjun was right all along and Sik is real. Please continue soon.

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pango

@pango

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Posted: 11 years ago

#575

awesome update

loved it

than for pm

waiting for next part

continue soon

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Atisha Khan

@Shamsad1607

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#576

now that'a face off of it's kind...
arjun's hold on his flocculated wrath was fabulous...but the dad-girl reunion was simply awesome...kiran's most difficult state was penned down with such ease...or i'll say, in 'KUNCHU' style. 😃
kiren confirmed both R-R that sik exists...and really loved that simple but awesome question asked by kiren...Rathod ko ek hi question se ghayal karr dia! 😛
and finally avni...kya slap tha yaar...i hope 2-4 teeth tho gayee...
but aab toh story aur interesting ho gaya...& you know..I'm loving it!
do continue.
keep writing!

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misakiscarlet

@misakiscarlet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#577

amazing.. what a reunion ...kinda forced one
arjun was hard contolling his anger.. it was justified...
kiran's state was written very very well... the father duaghter duo were amazing..
and the slap ...
contd. soon
thnx for pm

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Shravani / Arohi

@skrafty

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#578

Awesome update
Loved it
Arjun's anger was very well written
Loved the Father-Daughter moment
Sam is still in dilemma
He and Karan went to find Arjun
Hope they find him soon
Kiran went to Avni
She slapped him
waiting for the next part
continue soon