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deffa

@deffa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#291

So well written 👍🏼
Their inner turmoils are written so nicely...
Sikander ko ab pata chal gaya hai ki Anjali iz with Arjun 😡 😡 Ab kya karne wala hai wo??? 😡 😡 😡
Sree n Arjun in ETF office... 😭 😭 they r so much sad n hurt 😭 😭
Rathod ka call aaya... Ab kya hoga????
Update soon

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Swara85

@Swara85

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Posted: 11 years ago

#292

Hey nice update..
Shree analyzing about the incident and Arjun got a partner..that was nice.
Sikander..! scared about what will he plan now..
"Silence was too much that even the heartbeat seemed scary"..this line itself explained every emotion and the turmoil they were going through when they entered ETF..
And lastly Rathod called Shree and here Arjun..!
waiting for next part..thanks for pm.

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Shreya

@shreya09

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Posted: 11 years ago

#293

"karna padtha hai sir. Agar meine ab thak kuch seekha hai, wo bas yahi hai, ke jo bath kehna hai, use keh deni chahiye. Sahi waqt ke intezaar kare, tho wo bas nikal jathe hai. So aajkal jo kehna hai, wo keh dethi hu" that was sooo true .

Very nice update Helna 👏

the 1st part in the garage... the sweet banter between mechanic saab & copy cat... Arjun and Sree's convo... Arjun's concern for his new family... Perfect 👍🏼
Sikandar !!! dont know whats his plan this time... he came to know all about Avni Anjali Kiran & Arjun... and thats obviously not a good thing.

The scene in the ETF office was very painful... there was suffocation all the way...
Rothod came to know about Shree & Arjun...
& now i am waiting for the next part.
excellent writing 👏 👏

Superb 👍🏼

Edited by shreya09 - 11 years ago

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Shravani / Arohi

@skrafty

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#294

Awesome update
loved it
"karna padtha hai sir. Agar meine ab thak kuch seekha hai, wo bas yahi hai, ke jo bath kehna hai, use keh deni chahiye. Sahi waqt ke intezaar kare, tho wo bas nikal jathe hai. So aajkal jo kehna hai, wo keh dethi hu"
Truly said dear
I don't have more words to describe it
It was great
waiting for the next part
continue soon

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Shweta Gupta

@ll_megha_ll

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#295

wow di.

it was awesome and mind blowing update.

just loved it.

do continue soon.

and thanks for the pm.

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Snehajain

@Snehajain

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#296

Awesome update...

Don't why but I m very scared now...

Karan-Anjali & their banter...😆😆😆

Arjun has indeed became the head of this new family...😃😃😃

Shree saying that he had learnt to say things at the same time instead of waiting for right time...😭😭😭...u wrote it perfectly...👏👏👏

Now Sikander knows about Avni & Anjali......What he is planning???😕😕😕

Going back to the same office is really painful...😭😭😭

Rathod's call in last was

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

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misakiscarlet

@misakiscarlet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#297

amazing update...

loved karan and simi...
sikandar is planning something horrible 😕 😕
shree and arjun convo was awesome
office part was well written... 👏 👏
loved it
contd. soon
thnx for pm

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638783

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#298

Awesome update 👏

arjun shree convo was really nice...

and the end part was superb 👍🏼

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Ritu Dang

@coolRD

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Posted: 11 years ago

#299

i'm nt getng d ri8 wrd 2 say abt dis prt.. u made me speechless.. it ws so vry wel writn

wel it did had a lot of pain.. nd i cud vry wel feel it

i mst say shree do hav a lot of guts 2 lock his horns wid THE ACP RAWTE.. bt it ws quite needed though.. it's bcz of him dat arjun has realized dat he needs 2 luk into d matter.. nd i cmpletely agree wid wat he said.. jo bolna hai krna hai abhi kro. future ka koi bharosa nhi..

it seems dat sikander is planning smethng really vry big.. nd bcz of him kiran wil b in a huge mess.. i really h8d him wen he had his hearty laugh.. his cruelty seems 2 hav no limit..

d scene in d ETF office ws really emotnl nd it deeply touchd my heart.. d pain bth arjun nd shree r goin thru ws vry beautifully writn.. i feel dat rathod's fne call ws required a lot.. he needs 2 b a prt of dis mission.. d earlier d betr..

ol in ol it ws a supr-fantstic upd8.. do cntinue soon.. dying 2 read d nxt prt.. specially rathod's reactn on hearng arjun's voice.. thnx 4 d pm

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Farheen Shaikh

@ll-Farheen-ll

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#300

Each of the individual is some or the other way connected to each other. Its just the matter of time to recognize each other.🤔

So finally Shree took the first step to know what transpired in the past that lead to the destruction of the entire team in one blast & I must say, he managed to make Arjun join hands with him for this BUT what about DAMMIT

At times evil power becomes so strong that it looks like a dead end everywhere but then a tiny ray of hope does turn the table on .Fingers Crossed**

You want lollipop? Here it is 😡

P.S:I loved the Montage😃