Farishtey (last part: Pg 114) 2/10 - Page 28

Edited my comment on pg 36😊

yeah you were right...lots of things here too...

a very intriguing update...anjali is the quest in their home..i loved that part...

then some more parts on kiran...and sikander...their relations...awesome part...you will make me fall for a villian...🤢🤢🤢😳(it was a complement)

karan simi anjali and arjun...what a bantar...thats called intellegent banter...😳

next comes the flashback of kiran and sameer...sameer the man of few words but great deeds...he was helpless then but what about now...will he help her??

then kiran meeting his daughter again...another parental affectionate story...👏

finally shree arrives...but will his meeting with kiran be of importance??i think yes...you have surely planned something...😳

thanks for the lovely engrossing update...continue soon...and thanks for pm

Part 8 and 9 both were very nice
P.s. sorry 4 super short coments, schedual is very tight now adays

A very comprehensive and well done analysis of the tale thus far. Do take a look at my comments on parts 5-9 on page 40. It might interest you,

Shyamala B.Cowsik

Originally posted by: -Carrie-

Here as promised!😆

And what a fantastic ride it has been.👍🏼

Just how seamlessly you have moved over from Arjun-ETF to Arjun-Lone Ranger. Brilliant.👏

I wonder why it was so hard for the makers to give us something as plausible as this, something solid a foundation to build the second innings on. It makes sense on so many levels.

Arjun's horror and the subsequent disillusionment at the system he had worshiped and dedicated his life to serve and upheld. His wife and the love of his life was sacrificed at the altars of that very system. Yet it did nothing but swallow down his other family, his team thus cutting off the line that was keeping him sustained, alive and kicking.

Then one by one you smoothly introduced the new players and I applaud you for weaving them beautifully and logically into the story.Each is a bundle of joy yet behind that cheery facade are hidden painful lives and memories. You began the unravelling by Anjali, the only one who manages to break through the tough armour of Arjun and reach and touch the soft heart within.

Her mother Avni, a struggling single mother hit something close to home. I can imagine the daily battle this brave warrior must be waging just to get through the day. Her profession is one which asks too much of those within its service. And to add to that is the care and raising of young girl who also happens to be physically challenged. Kudos to this lady.

To ease some of her struggle the kid is far more mature than others her age and that I am sure must be some comfort to her mother.

I totally get why she must have reservations against her daughter's proximity to an unknown man.My first impression was that she fears just like countless mothers do that Anjali is too close to a man who isn't a relative or a friend of the family. But later I am beginning to feel that given her sordid past with Rathore her mindset may have been coloured that policemen are not to be trusted.

It was Arjun's idea to "use" the family to net Kiran. Is something going to come off this? Will Arjun & Anjali have to drift further apart? Time or rather you will tell as the story progresses.

It was so heartwarming to see the two characters who had made the ETF parting so easy at the time. Karan & Simran. Still love them to bits and they even spoke to me via Twitter while I was typing this out. Some coincidence, eh?😆

Loved the lines you gave the threesome for their bickering😆

Then comes your priceless creation, Kiran Joshi.

First of all my compliments for the excellent choice of Avinesh Rekhi to play this layered flawed character. The talented actor is yet to receive his due recognition in the industry. I hope he finds a tough role like this to play on screen soon.

I feel partly sad and partly outraged at this man and his actions.

Monetary necessities may have pushed him to pick up illegal dough here and there but why did he allow himself to be turned into a hardcore killer and criminal, a minion that blindly carries out his fiendish master's every bidding?

Did Avni's love and Anjali's future did not mean anything to him?

And how does he propose to get out of all this alive and uncontaminated enough to carry on his life as her father? Does he really hope to?

But he is not all evil. Some moral anchor, feeble though it may be, still holds on to him.

The shocker of all was he was a witness to the murder of Roshni. He had accompanied Sikander so that makes him an accessory to the deed. How will Arjun take this? Will Anjali come between him and her father?

So many questions...

Eagerly awaiting the next installment.

Very well written.Bravo!⭐️

Originally posted by: sashashyam

A very comprehensive and well done analysis of the tale thus far. Do take a look at my comments on parts 5-9 on page 40. It might interest you,

Shyamala B.Cowsik

Okay

PTO😉