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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
As usual very moving n touching
Cant say aloud a lot
I did expect pain n tears
But what I got was a suffocation
I have lost count as of how many times I told u that Lady always make me hold my breath
untill the last Phew you write
and this time it was very deep
Aisha hats off my dear
I just cant imagine the pain in every word
I am glad that I am only reading it
i dont think I wud have stood well to see it onscreen
and yr writing makes the whole sequence infront of my eyes
and thats yr success than anything
and anyone who read yr story will second me without a second thought
thats d only comment i can give
n it says it all
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
ah u made me cry ...so so painful
cant imagine how ro felt


and poor aishu seeing a sibling in pain can torture u too

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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
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Very apt quote for the update di👍🏼...Though Arjun now knows a part of the truth but still he doesn't know a huge chunk of it. But now that he will be back in his ACP Arjun mode, it won't take him long to unravel the whole truth.
So even before Ayesha told him the truth, he got a inkling of what could have gone wrong and Ayesha distraught face was already giving him negative vibes.

I always knew that our lady dabaang has suffered a lot and sooner rather than later, she need to vent out all her anger and anguish that she has kept dormant somewhere deep within her. And maybe now was the right time for her to do so. Maybe this will help them in rebuilding their friendship.
Ayesha POV welled up my eyes with unshed tears di. Her pain is no less than Arjun and Rosy. Not only she lost her whole family in that fire but those living were no less than dead. First, to see Rosy getting consume by depression with each passing day and then later, see her stepping in the world from where returning without any scar is very difficult. And to top of it, to harbor guilt of keeping a secret from another of her best friend. But still she dint gave up. She gathered herself just for the sake of her sister with a tiny hope that maybe all is not lost yet.

Arohi was living in denial.. Clutching onto her lifeless child, she sat there running fingers through her soft curly hair, refusing to let go of her😭😭


Seriously di, nothing could ever match to Arohi selfless love for Arjun. Even after all this she gathered herself just for the sake of her Mr. A. So Arohi stepped back in this mission because of Arjun. Maybe she knew that if Arjun stumbles upon the truth of his family death on his own, all hell will break loose. He will do anything to bring justice to his and her family. Even if that involves risking his life and that's what exactly Arohi dint wanted. After losing whole of his family, husband and child, she can't even imagine losing Arjun. She wanted him safe even if that involves keeping herself away from him. That explains why she was hell bent on keeping her survival under wraps.

Ayesha out pour on Arjun was very natural and much needed one. Arjun need to know that if staying away from his loved one has given him immense pain than their pain was no less.

Finally the much awaited revelation and conversation has started. I can so imagine their pained expression. Sigh why their lives have to be so complicated and painful. 🤔

Rosy condition gave me Goosebumps di. Though unintentionally Arjun has opened up all her wounds. Feeling relieved that she has Karan with her during this time.
I loved the silent support Sameer gave to Ayesha. After all these tormenting years, she needs someone who can be with her and help her bringing her lost family together.

So Arjun liked Yash and trusted him to prove a good man to Arohi. But that reminds me, that what Yash take on Arohi working for undercover mission was. I mean Yash would know that Arohi is working as undercover for some mission. Was he okay with it?? Or was he not aware of it. And did Yash know about Arohi's love for Arjun??😕

But that had also been a major turning point for him, personally.He realised that she had moved on and was happily settled in her life with a new family. Maybe he needed to try and move past her as well.And hence, when Roshni's parents had approached him with a proposal for the second time, he had given in.

And with this one more piece fall in place that why Arjun agreed to marry Roshni. Second time? 😕

All Arjun decisions in past were taken by his clouded mind and insecure heart, who believed he won't be able to do justice to his love but then what Ayesha said is not completely wrong. If just for once, Arjun would have thought rationally and tried to look beyond his guilt and broken heart, maybe the truth would haven't taken so long to come out in open. Maybe as Ayesha said, he would have found them if he would have searched for Annu and Yash. But then it was not meant to happen that time.

So Arohi knew that the fire was not only for SP Gupta; it was for her as well. Was it because she stumbled upon some vital evidence during the case that can lead to the destruction of the enemy and if her survival will be revealed they will be on trail for her and during that process they may get Arjun and her family.
So baba told him to back off from the mission. And the mission was aborted officially but I guess baba and Rosy were still working on it, unofficially.
So Rosy send Annu to Aatya so that she can keep her safe. Is this why, Yash blames her that she was not a good mother as Annu life was in danger because of her. Was that car crash also for Rosy..??

Karan Rosy conversation was very heart wrenching. I so wished to give a tight hug to Rosy.😭
Thank you much for the wonderful update di🤗, after scratching my head for so long, I got some answers to my questions. I kept my Sherlock and Watson hats spinning at full speed but I don't know how far I have reached. I am never sure when it comes to lady.

And I don't feel at all that Arjun reaction was mild as I know we are not done yet. There is more to it and as you said part B bhi h.
Can't wait to read more...Update soon.😃

Thanks for the PM!


Edited by -Rajvi- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
Very emotional updt.
I m crying.
Superb...
Cont soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
Awesome update
very emotional
Rosy, arjun and Aisha has lost soo much
really feel bad for Rosy
Aisha venting out everything to Arjun that happend was amazingly written...she to has suffered a lot
way did Yash blame Rosy for being a bad mother
looking forward to Rosy Karan conversation
thanks for the pm...continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
That was so emotional... It's sounds so real yet hear wrenching
Take a bow avantika...

Btw any specific reason ur giving back to back updates on the lady are u trying to finish it before u move on to ur next one ... I know I'm desperately waiting for the live story to kick start in Shayad yahi to pyar hai

Thanks for this update and pm x
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
Great update..!
It was emotional, upsetting and what not.
All 3 of them have suffered so much..feeling bad for them..and mostly for Ro..
The cono was good..And Aisha's point of view was well written.
Your revealation in bits and pieces was nice. Waiting to know more.
cont soon and thanks for pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
Awesome update
loved it
It was so emotional and painful
Beautifully written
waiting for the next part
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
wow it was an awesome update
just loved it to the core of my heart
precap superb
but felt sad for them
plzzz do continue soon
thanks for the pm dear😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
Trust me girl,never had i took any fictional story so seriously.Since the last few updates,till the end of each of them ,it gives a choking like feelings in my heart & it looks like this is just the start. 😒

I said this once that I do not pity any one particular individual in this story coz i felt that each & every 1 has suffered in their own way whether it be Ro, Aisha, Arjun, Roshni or even Ro's father.I wonder how their father might have felt when Arjun left their home long back even if he didn't voice it out. But the loss of a baby is the one unbearable.To lose a child is to lose a part of yourself which Ro has already lost.

Aisha:We know her as Lady dabangg but then here she was no less than a broken woman who has lost everything & the one left is on the verge of being lost. She lost her parents, friend, Annu who was a daughter to her as well.But then she couldn't even show her grief & had to pose as a strong individual to gather her shattered sister.Now that she has blurted out the truth to Arjun which was bottled up since long & I am glad that it is finally out.But then as you said there is Part B as well which gives me nightmares.

Arjun: First the pain of unrequited love,leaving behind his foster home which was more than anything to him ,parting from his best friend or rather a soul mate of his,guilt of not being able to shower the love to a selfless wife ,then her brutal murder,later the girls betrayal &now this.Aur kuch baaki hai
I wonder what he might b going through once Aisha questioned him about him not even trying once about finding the whereabouts of Ro's daughter & her husband.An added guilt to the already burdened one.
I m not sure if i m right on this one.If Annu &Yash were brutally murdered by the car accident then when did yash accused her about none should get a mother like her.

You have still wrapped Yash's character so neatly that it is really impossible for me to judge him. Even his accusing words at the end here seems out of context but then to be honest I hate him for the words that he blurted out whatsoever be the condition .I can not even imagine the state of mind a mother going through at such an accusations & that too from her husband.If he lost his daughter then SHE WAS HER MOTHER TOO.
If there were answers to many then there were new questions rising.

Ro: Where should i start with about her suffering.There wasn't an iota of doubt that she was the one to suffer the most among all.Every update brings in the surprise about her losing something or the other & now it feels she has lost at every stage of her life in one or the other form.The major stroke being her bloodline is no more who was dead right in front of her eyes.Aisha ne sach hi kaha hai,we can never know what she might be going through.I m relieved that she has karan beside her but then i wonder what support can he lend her knowing the fact that the part of her's is no more.
"It has been said time heals all wounds... I do not agree. The wounds remain. In time, the mind protecting it's sanity covers them with scar tissue and the pain lessens, but it's never gone..." -Rose Kennedy
No soothing words will help a mother to heal the wounds that is now opened by the one who means the world to her.Her action of gazing absent mindedly at her empty palms welled up my eyes.I could actually visualize her action.

In all this ,I must applaud Sameer Rathod for being patient enough to connect the dots that was missing which for an outsider is very difficult as the layers of mysteries is much more deeper than what it is visible to the naked eyes.

Many mysteries surfaced but then it is equally wrapped in suspense.I was more struck in the part about wat Ro might have said to Arjun that is still another mystery.

Another incident proving the depth of relationship shared by Mr. &his Miss A was the point wherein she came out of the trauma once Aisha told her about Arjun getting involved in the pending case.Just a mere name of his &she was out to the trauma not for herself but for him.Seriously,a relation beyond ones understanding.

Lastly,I wish she speaks her heart to Karan about her state of mind.She really needs to blurt it out somewhere as it is high time.

In all this the only gud thing that happened was that Arjun Rawte is thinking with a clear head & is finally able to connect the missing dots.
I cried ,cried ,cried with this one & who said that this was a bearable one.

P.S:I officially hate lolly Pop😡


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