Arjun FF: O Ri Chiraiya - Part 11 Pg 39-40, 12-Nov

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unisha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#181

nice part n cs.. Interesting.. Like it.. Thanks for pm..

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Anika_VR

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Posted: 11 years ago

#182

Awesome update.
Loved it a lot...
Wow...
New case...
The case is also kinda related to Arjun,as it was the case of his mooh bola Kaka who used to work for his Dad in Kolhapur...
Oh No.. Case mein dead ends...
Height of carelessness exceeded...
Waahhh...
That parade laga dene wali dialogue reminded me of Bhai saying that dialogue in a certain episode... Superb.. Claps for that...
I have a very strong doubt on Sudha...
Yay..
Farida dadi is the warden of the hostel.
Like Gauri's father,she too believes that Gauri didnt flee away...
Aww...
ETF trying to look for Gauri...
When i saw the pic of Mr.Ratwe,directly mere dimaagh mein Gumaan ka hi chehra aaya thha...
Aww...
Anjali and Arjun share such a strong bonding... Lovely bro-sis bonding...
Other than Sunaina,loved the CS of Mr.Rawte and Anjali...
Missed Dadu and Aashima in this part...
Anjali knows Sam bhai and Aayesha,as well...
Case is really very interesting...
Loved how Sam bhai thrashed the Police Station jahaan pe Gauri ki gumshudgi ki FIR report darj ki gayi thhi...
Precap looks really very interesting...
Continue sooonish...
Thanks for the pm...

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GOLDIEE ABROL

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Posted: 11 years ago

#183

Beautiful Bhavna Awesome

CS was too Good

Loved Rawte family

Case u brought up is really nice

Hope ETF saves that poor girl on Time

So lets see what Mr. Rawte brings along

Loved it

Thanks for the Pm

Continue soon 😊

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Shravani / Arohi

@skrafty

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Posted: 11 years ago

#184

Awesome update

Loved it

Hope ETF saves the girl on time

Loved the Rawte family

Precap looks interesting

Waiting for the next part

Continue soon

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Maham

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Posted: 11 years ago

#185

Originally posted by: laila1994
Firsly, About the case:
the Picture of the girl you added said it all, I have seen her in many crime petrol Episode. She is the perfect choice.👍🏼
About the case I like it that you took care of minutedetails. Like she is under eighteen and all.

CS of Arjun's family:

Most of the people would think Mrs.Rawte as a negative character But I would say she is influenced and manipulated But not completely wrong.
A woman who never got well deserved love & pampering just becauseshe is a girl, that married to a man who is much older than her, And cherry on the top Have a step son who is just few years younger than her.
YOU WROTE HER CHARACTER BRILLIANTLLY👏

Mr.Rawte: A must say the way you wrote his stand as a husband and as a son, defined him very well.

Anjali: Her bonding with Arjun is beautiful. He is not just her brother but also a father figure.

Loved it😛

same is my thinking n kea mom nikali hai di app ne ek dam Classic 2day 1st tym i read this but its interesting story thanx 4 pm

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904129

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Posted: 11 years ago

#186

Awsumm Di...How can the officers in-charge be so careless?? 😡😡 Hate them!!!! But then again...Bhai Rocks...Ra Ra Ra Ra Rowdy Rathore Roars!! Mazaa Aa Gaya!! Love U Bhai...!!!! Ab Aapki story mein Bhai ki importance na ho aisa toh ho hi nhi sakta!! 😉😉 Im worried fr Gauri..😕 Loved The Way My Juno Boy consoled Jaydev Kaka!! DamnIt!!!! ETF ke haath phir kuch ni laga...!!!!! Awww...Luv Arjun nd Anjali!! The bond dey share is sooo cutee!! Love dem! ❤️❤️ Amazingg CS Di..Love the Characters nd Der Profilez!! Continuee Soon Plz..Intrestingg Precapp!!

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kunchu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#187

Sorry I am late
a new turn in Arjun's life shown
I loved that CS
none is bad but they had to be so
Loved Arjun-anjali bond
The new case is very intersting
I felt the Sudha a bit odd type
waiting to know more

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pinky gupta

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Posted: 11 years ago

#188

superb update

the story getting more interesting and more temptng to read

loved it

thanks for the pm

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-Carrie-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#189

Very emotionally charged update👏

Ashima's & Sameer's first time meet & their subsequent run ins were very cutely described. I loved their pushing around in the lift the best😆

What a colossal injustice that this girl was not allowed to pursue her dream & thrown at the mercy of a heartless brute.

Then came realisation that the love of her life was nearby or had been nearby. Very heartening that immediate improvement was seen in her mental faculties. I feel she is on her way to full recovery.

Shree's heartache was so sad to bear. That's the beauty of sibling bond. No matter how far apart we might be if one hurts the other feels the pain.

Very well written👍🏼

Edited by -Carrie- - 11 years ago

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-Carrie-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#190

Part 6

The case was painful to say the least. Here was a poor father doing his best to educate his daughter and give her a bright future and now she is taken. Hopefully she is rescued in the nick of the time.

May be her face is an unfortunate one but Sudha, Meenaxi's mother seems fishy to me. What is she hiding? And Meenaxi really away at her uncle's house. Hope Arjun-Aisha crack it before its too late.

Hmmm...Arjun's family. Waah! Waah! Papa Rawte ke taste toh bahut Hi-Fi hai re Baba😉😎 Kya Item hai Mummy Rawte. But what's to dislike in Arjun?🤔 Its not as if he came in between her & all that she covets.

Kudos to you for incorporating yet another aspect of the mentality to hanker after male heirs. Here Mrs Rawte wants to consolidate her position in the Rawte household for which she wanted Anjali to have been born as a boy.Its a sad day when children become commodities or weapons instead of remaining a source of joy for parents.

As always very well written!

No need to tell you how I am salivating for the next part

Edited by -Carrie- - 11 years ago