Arakshi SS ...... Tanhayiyaa part 10 on page 23

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Arakshi new story ...






hey friends ...
All ETF characters r same ... sikandar is dead ...


Mumbai International Airport ...

Man standing on gate ... proceeding towards ... exit ...
taxi driver .. sahab taxi ...
Man :hummm ...
taxi driver : kaha sahab ... Mumbai crime branch ...
Taxi me radio on hai ...

phirta rahoon dar badar
milta nahi tera nishaan
hoke judaa kab main jiya
tu hai kahaan main kahaan
teri yaadon mein khoya rehta hoon
mujhko dasti hai tanhaaiyan
phirta rahoon dar badar milta nahi tera nishaan
hoke judaa kab main jiya
tu hai kahaan main kahaan
tu jo judaa ho gayi teri sadaa kho gayi dekh le phir zindagi haa kya se kya ho gayi...


Meanwhile in MUmbai crime branch ...
DIG raghu : ik baar fir me mene ussko yaha bulaya hai ... mujhe yakin hai ki wo jarur aayegaa ...
Sameer : lekin sir ... r u sure ? me ussko bohot baar bulaa chukaa hu ... lekin wo nahi mana ...
Raghu : sameer ... picchali baar bhi ussko meri wajah se aana padha thaa aur ab bhi ayega ...
sameer : lekin sir ...

Man : May i come in sir ...

DIG raghu : mujhe pata thaa tum jarur aaoge ... sameer ... meet ur second in command ... guys i have some important work .. u take care bbye



friends i m really new ... writing something first time ... let me know ur views ... should i continue or not ..if u like plzz comment ...and like . plzz excuse errors ... i know bohot saare honge 😆... bbye



Part 2 on page 4
part 3 on page 9
part 4 on page 13
part 5 on page 16
part 6 on page 18
part 7 on page 19
part 8 on page 21
part 9 on page 22
part 10 on page 23

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Posted: 11 years ago
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👍🏼 good start
pr ye start hone se pehle hi khatam ho gya 😛

so next time thoda bada part post krna
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: chulbuliannu

👍🏼 good start

pr ye start hone se pehle hi khatam ho gya 😛

so next time thoda bada part post krna

yess i know ... pakkka next time ... bada update hogaa 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely Concept And Writing !!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Radhikerani

Lovely Concept And Writing !!!



Thank u so much 😊...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: skrafty

Nice start
continue soon




Thank u so muchh 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Good! Would like to read ahead. Continue soon and pm about updates please.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice start...I get a feeling that it will be a story after ETF dies..or may be something else...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice start, do continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Devangana

Good! Would like to read ahead. Continue soon and pm about updates please.

thanks for liking ...

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