Ariya FF:'Deception,Intrigue..'#4 *Discontinued* Note: Pg 8

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srividhya68

@srividhya68

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

congrats 4 the 4th thread
awesome upt
so sad of arjun...i too felt like crying
waiting eagerly
cont soon

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rosela

@rosela

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

i was trying to read something new..

and here i got it...its owsom

just outstanding i read all parts today

all the characters are described so beautifully

and thair emotions...

the story plot is also fabelous really curious to read more

nd truly i m impressed and waiting very impatiently for next update

plzzz plzzz pm me next time when you update

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Aabish_02

@Aabish_02

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Api congrats for the new thread
Mindblowing update
love it
Arjun feelings and his emotions were described very beautifully
he is shocked and hurt
aisha and lisa shocked to see rathore rude behaviour
It was amazing part
waiting for next part
update soon

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Scarlett kevin

@Mrs.JamesBarne

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

hey dear this story was going so nice and mind blowing

I could not replay for the previous chapter.

I am so sorry for that .

but u r doing a great job.

true to my heart if riya will have a rentry in the show I want exactly the same as this one.

so continue ur writing .

u r doing a great job .

love u for this🤗

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Shreya

@shreya09

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

just finished reading all the chapters

beautiful story 👏 👏

felt sad for Arjun's condition

brilliant writing

superb

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

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SATRISHI

@SATRISHI

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

superb

I am eagerly waiting for this story and searching every day for updates

please give update soon.

Thank you for wonderful story

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devildiva21

@devildiva21

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

hey so sorry for the late comment...!!

the update was again a super hit...!!!

beautiful portray of emotions and words...!!!

aisha and liza feeling left coz of they weren't included in that discussion going on...!!! well they are entitled to feel like that after all they are apart of ETF and have all teh rights to know whats happening...!!

their feelings were awesomely depicted...!!! hmm both even thinking of listening chupke chppke through the forensic lab...!!1

poor aisha already having head ache...!!after the morning's lecture from rathore...!!

hmm so they saw rathore kicking out riya from the conference room and hel sympathy for the girl till the time they saw her... hmm women power naturally instinct...!!

but why was aisha shocked on seeing her?? i mean does she know her from before ?? or she has just seen her pic and shreetu talking about her???

and the words you used to describe arjun's condition...!!👏 ⭐️ 👏 ⭐️

felt really bad for him... he wasn't in a state to understand what happened... how rathore pushed riya out.. and his new found love? now that's something interesting...!!

continue soon..

P.S. its already 29... where is the update??

waiting waiting...!!