Ariya FF:'Deception,Intrigue..'#4 *Discontinued* Note: Pg 8

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DivineDarkness

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

AMRIII😡

UPDATE YAR😭

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Shweta Gupta

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

awesome update dear.

i am angry on riya😡

how she can do this?

continue soon

and please pm me.

sorry for short comment as my hand is paining

and congrates for new thread

and why dont you pm me?😭

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Live-life

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

update

s'il vous plait!

I am waiting...!

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Suryatapa sengupta

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Read two update togather. Fantastic updates dear. Part -8b After knowing the truth everybody is shoked. Arjun is shattered with pain because his riya thought his mudered his roshni. Shree and chotu's pov is perfectly written. After seeing arjun is shatered with pain Acp rathore becomes arjun's best friend sam who wants to protect his friend from pain. Overall the update is prefectly written. Part-8c Ayesha's pov was beautifully written. When she saw rathore manhandling a women, women with her woke and she question about rathore's gentleness. Arjun pov is also perfectly written. Sorry for late comment and short comment. I was busy my exam. Pls continue soon.

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Live-life

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

bEHNA!

Had hoti hai yaar! 😳

Jaldi update de na please!!!

I am really eagerly waiting!!

please please please! 😃

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prachi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Happy new yr...Superb update...:-)
u hv written Arjun cndition very well nd in deatils...:-)
Did Aisha nd ria knw each other?
Plz Pm me nxt update dear:-)