Arjun Case SS: The Devil's Trap, Chap4, Page 27 24/01

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Mimi2609

@Mimi2609

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Posted: 12 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: Aisha.Vashishth
Tina! ur changing my all the whole perceptions abt u...i always thought of u to be a beautiful romance genre writer...

bt u r a faaar more better as a suspense thriller writer...
not at all i meant that ur not a gud romance writer...

bt these thrilling suspense filled storties...they r jst awsm yarr...

so arti is not at all the way she ws portrayed...she is so evil...

it ws all a trap for the ETFians...
poor shireen and her husband became scrape goat

continue soon

love
Aisha

😲☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

You should stop flattering me, who knows i may make a mess of it in next update🤪

Anyway thanks for these lovely comments, meaning i should just leave romance for some time being then 😛😉

and it wasnt really a trap for ETF, but it somehow ended up like this😊

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rimi

@rimi_invisible

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Posted: 12 years ago

#152

omg what a trap??? so ETF has been trapped

and this arti is such a good actor no one could have guessed about her...but sakshi came to know abt her i guess then she must have some evidence for that...

awesome suspense u have created... hats off to u👏

thanks for pm continue soon dear...

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

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Posted: 12 years ago

#153

hey di...
u know nah..
i love thrills lol..
ekdum thrilling update
lovely
aarti so evil...
lov d confidence of arjun bro dat ayesha handle ...
well i love patriotism d most..
yes a Soldier can Die for their Country
d most Amazing feeling ...
waiting for next..
ps.
pls watch my last vm..
if u hv time pls...
Arjun Vm.. Zinda A Inspiration
hope u like it...

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Swara85

@Swara85

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Posted: 12 years ago

#154

Brilliant update..
The way the story is going i think it is far better than cases shown in the show..
loved it..cont soon.

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Farheen Shaikh

@ll-Farheen-ll

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#155

Another interesting twist.😲

I must say Tina,you are making me do brainstorming that i used to do in the past watching the show.

Whats next in store for us?

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Niki

@luvzindagi

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#156

Oh my god, Arti is involved in all this!!!
I hope our team finds Aisha and Sakshi soon

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sashashyam

@sashashyam

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#157

This, Tina, is a far harder and darker story than any you have attempted so far. The joker in the pack was of course Arti, and her turning out to be totally evil, and that too such a strong villain, must have come as a shock for most of your readers.

I still do not understand where all this is headed, nor what is the core motive of the villains. I shall wait for clues in your next chapter.

Shyamala Aunty

so here's the next part, given i had given a small update eariler 😉:

Chapter 3: