Raesha OS: yet another proposal!

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Hey moi friends dearest!!

I am back with vengeance... haha... ye koi film ka dialogue hoga mera nahin...

Mera dialogue to hey guys I am back to munch your brains!!!!' ;)

This is a love story,... uh uh!!! Mera matbal ek aur love and marriage ke beech waala romantic yet mushy story... uh uh I mean Iek aur propose karnewaala story toda hatke (I guess) uff!!!! I am conphoosed meselph!!!!

Chaddo ji... well this baby of mine took its birth on English notebook about a month and a half ago ( or two...i don't remember... :P*) under the auspicious occasion(s) of my 3 chemistry classes after my brain bore the extensive torture of all the lectures given by boring lecturers... humpf!!!!

Itna lamba bematlab ka sentence???!!! I am officially mad!! Nothing new right?! haha... I know...

Where was I? oh yeah!!! Then my closest friends read this and asked me- Ridz, tu sacchi theek hai naa?! Tujhe bukhaar to nahin hai?! Chahiye to ghar jaake rest kar...hum proxy daal denge...romance ke stories... TU AUR ROMANTIC PROPOSAL?!!!! TU SACCHI THEEK NAHIN HAI YAAR..."

LOL... it was so funny... :D :P if only they knew how much more cheesy and lovey dovey I have written here... ;) LOL

Haha... I wanted to type it so badly but... unforeseen reasons, I could not!!

Aaj I am bhery bhery appy...

Mela paanch egjams hue... wo bhi acche se!!! next paper on 6th nov although I need to prepare for that par... time hai naa ;)

Samer aur Aisha ki ek meethi si story padho aur bataoki kaisa hai...

Likes and comments karna oki...

Oopppiiiesss!!!! I guess blabber zyada hogaya...

I swear on my Cadbury gems mera irada nahin tha... ;) :P

Aapki naati si ;)

Pari

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Gulaabi aankhein! Jo teri dekhi! Sharaabi ye dil hogayaaa! Sambhalo mujhko, O mere yaaro, Sambhalna mushkil ho gayaa...!

All the time he sang, Sameer's eyes were glued on her. She was busy hiding her red face from her friends, who were taking turns in teasing her.

Her heart drummed against ribcage when Sameer strummed the last tune on guitar and jumped off the stage and started walking towards her, ignoring the congratulating mob.

He stood in front of her, taking her breathtaking form in. clad in black suit paired with white shirt and red tie, he looked nothing less than a regal prince.. she looked just like a dream to him, a nymph in cream ball dress, with red bow attenuating her tiny waist.

His eyes bored into her, sending tingles up her spine.

"Hi!" he said when he stood in front of her, with a slight smile.

"Hey" said Aisha and lowered her gaze.

"This will be the last day we are in college..." he said wistfully.

"Hmm... I will leave to Bangalore with bhaiyya... to my maasi's home..."

"Will you miss me?! Cas I ll" he said with a sad smile on his face.

"Yeah!! I'll...YOU WHAT!!!!??" her eyes widened dramatically and mouth opened in a perfect O'. Sameer stepped forward and put a finger under her chin, closing her mouth.

"I.said.I.will.miss.you..." he said with a playful smile, "par will you be able to be without me annoying you every day Isha?"

"Don't call me that." Aisha grumbled

Before she could continue, someone called sameer and he left her alone.

She kept a hand above her heart to calm her raging heartbeats.

It was always with her, when ever he was close. Her heart would beat as if trying to leap out of her ribcage and land in his hand.

"uff!!!! Stop beating so loudly you fool. Agar usne sunnliya to?!" she mumbled to herself.

She saw him from across the hall, stealing glances at him. She knew it was more than attraction. It could not be just attraction when she thought of him all time, thought well for him, prayed for him, admired him, respected him and the list would go on. Could she name it just mere attraction when he clearly invaded her dreams? Definitely not. They were companions right from their childhood, understood each other at a whole new level, played pranks together, got punished together, in other words they shared a very unique friendship, and now she felt much more than just friendship towards him.

All of a sudden she realized that he was nowhere to be seen. She turned around trying to spot him, but it went in vain. He was to leave to his training academy the very next day and now he had vanished without even saying bye to her, his best friend, his arch enemy, his confident, his everything.

Tears welled in her eyes in their own accord. She turned towards the door to rush out not wanting to show her tears to anyone. Suddenly everything around her went dark.

She stood rooted to her place, and she heard loud cheering behind her. She wiped her eyes and slowly turned around; saw a large screen, with many slow moving pictures. In those were two kids, hugging smiling, reading, fooling around, and playing pranks on each other. A slow smile crept on her face. She saw a boy and a girl looking at each other with smiles on their face. Slowly, a spot light focused on the stage, bringing him to light. She heard him speak, in his ever so husky voice.

"Hey pretty angel! Isha (he chucked)!! You crashed into my perfectly normal life and turned it upside down. You made me do those things that I never would even dare to dream of. You became my best friend, stood by me all the time I was low, patted my back when I accomplished thing. You teased me, annoyed me, pulled my perfect silky hair, and irritated me to such an extent that I wanted you to be shipped off to far off land. But even imagining my life without you is impossible. Your non stop blabber made me wonder how much this girl can talk"

She scowled at him. He slowly walked towards her, talking.

"But those words sound like music to my ears. I guess there would be no better time to confess that I am damn jealous when I see you with other guys"

She chuckled at his words.

"But I know why I see green. There is no other reason but one. That. I. Love. You"

He knelt in front of her, slowly pulled out a ring from his pocket and held it to her.

"Will you be mine forever? Will you marry me?!"

To say she was stunned would be an understatement. She was in shock. She could not believe that she believe that he loved her and it was much more unbelievable that he proposed her in front of whole college, in front of their parents. She, with unsure gaze, turned towards their parents, who were smiling. Her brother gestured her to say yes to him.

"sab ko pata tha ki... sab mile hue hai... that's not fair" she mentally debated.

"NO" her voice resonated in the silent hall.

He was shocked. Had he read her eyes wrong? Was the love he saw in her eyes were just his imagination?

"Aisha..."

"My answer will not change till you apologize" his face now showed the sheer confusion. Why was she asking him to say sorry...

"Apologize for all the times you pulled my hair"

A small smile crept on his face.

"Apologize for all the times you annoyed me"

He stood from his position and gave her a full fledge smile.

All the others in the ballroom were awestruck at the couple.

"Apologize for all the times you refused to complete my assignments"

"Apologize for the times you did not get me ice-cream"

Sameer slowly held her hands in his.

"Apologize for complaining about me to my brother"

Arjun slapped his forehead and spoke to his parents.

"papa, mamma, ye pagal sach mein meri behan hi hai naa? Ya aap usse kahin se utha ke laaye ho? Ye pagal meri behan ho hi nahin sakti. Main thehra ek seedha saadha policewaala aur ye... pagalon ki nani hai ye"

"Apologize for calling me Isha" sameer nodded in no.

"Apologize for not proposing me earlier" her voice was low and husky, eyes lowered and cheeks flushed red.

He chuckled and pulled her close.

"Sorry for all complains you have, sorry for all complains you will have in future. I promise I will fulfill every wish of yours. I will promise that I will always love and cherish you. I promise that I will try to be best friend, lover, and husband to you also best papa for our future kids. BUT!! I will not promise you that I will not annoy you, irritate you. Mera haq hai yaar!!!" he earned a slap on his chest from her.

"I am still waiting you know and going on one knee hurts..." sameer said, his eye mirroring all the love he had for her. His Isha.

"Do I need to spell it out DODO?! Yes!!!! I will" she leapt and hugged him tight. He encircled his arms around her and he could feel the love she as radiating.

"I love you" said sameer.

She lifted her head and locked eyes with him.

"I Love you two, three, four..." and winked at him.

Sameer held the ring in front of her "May I?"

She nodded a yes and forwarded her left hand. He slipped the solitaire ring in the finger and kissed her fingers, above the ring. Loud applause broke in the hall.

All of a sudden he pulled her flush towards him and dragged towards exit.

"Sameer?!" she asked with a brow raised.

"Its time for our private celebration baby!" he smirked and winked at her.



~THE END~

I know I screwed a big time. It was long due OS from me to Raesha.

Poora bakwas I know...

But padhlena guys...

Mainu khushi millegi...

Likes and comments?!

~Naati si Pari 😳

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IshitaRocks015 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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me 1st..dhinka chika..
beautifully written pari..
and thank u so much 4 the Raesha os..
u truly deserve a standing wala salute!!👏👏👏
it was so cute..
haye..natkhat bache..!!!
pulling hair?? haha...so sweet...ISHA..that is so cute!!
usey pasand kyu nahi hai??😕
jane do..mereko kya!!
i lloovveeedd it to the core..
arjun..hey bhagwan..pagal ki nani..haha!! sab bhai/behen yahi sochte hai ke unke siblings kahi aur se utha ke laye hue hai!! haha!!!
n baki xam k liye!!/...all d best!!
Edited by IshitaRocks015 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: IshitaRocks015

me 1st..dhinka chika..

beautifully written pari..
and thank u so much 4 the Raesha os..
u truly deserve a standing wala salute!!👏👏👏
it was so cute..
haye..natkhat bache..!!!
pulling hair?? haha...so sweet...ISHA..that is so cute!!
usey pasand kyu nahi hai??😕
jane do..mereko kya!!
i lloovveeedd it to the core..
arjun..hey bhagwan..pagal ki nani..haha!! sab bhai/behen yahi sochte hai ke unke siblings kahi aur se utha ke laye hue hai!! haha!!!
n baki xam k liye!!/...all d best!!


thank you ishita...
haha... i had not thought of couple name when i wrote this.
cos i had written it in my college notes ;)
about Isha... even i dunno ;) lets ask aisha next time ;)
and yes saare bhai iesp think sisters are brought from somewhere else ;) experience...
ye alag hai ki me n bhai both are pagal, i am more ;)
lol
thanks again dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Parii...Way to busy to even Answer u PMs hhaha hmm..!!1
chalo to ur OS!!
I just loved it!!!!
nothing new.. i always like ur works but this was cute one!
Isha..complains the photos slides..!!!everything was good!
i loved Sammer proposal and more than that I love Aisha response...!
I remb my bhai words when i read Arjun words..he also says that he seedha sada nd me devil is his sis..poor Arjun and Bhai,,,!
Sameer seriously dodo???he had complete haq true!!!
Loved it cute one gal!!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rocking_gal

Parii...Way to busy to even Answer u PMs hhaha hmm..!!1

chalo to ur OS!!
I just loved it!!!!
nothing new.. i always like ur works but this was cute one!
Isha..complains the photos slides..!!!everything was good!
i loved Sammer proposal and more than that I love Aisha response...!
I remb my bhai words when i read Arjun words..he also says that he seedha sada nd me devil is his sis..poor Arjun and Bhai,,,!
Sameer seriously dodo???he had complete haq true!!!
Loved it cute one gal!!😃

hehe first sorry i did not see pms...
i had promised myself i ll not open pm inbox till exam ends... till now i have opened only one link u know...
i ll read once i am done with exams...
and i am glad u liked this story...
missing u too diddum...
even i know,,... my bro calles me big time pagal too ;)
thanks again didu

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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome os.. Simply loved it.. Nice n unique type of proposal n acceptance as well.. Thanks for pm..
Gold.Abrol thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
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Pari os was so cute
Me big fan of samsha 😛
It was beautiful 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Pari such a awesome and amazing one
her all complains was so cute
Great pair Sam aisha
Arjun comment about his sis was so cute
totally it was a bang OS loved to the core
well written kudos to u
my request
plz write on arakshi yaar i will love to read
thanks for PM :-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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a very different os!!!! superbbb
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awwwsssmmm... OS
LOVED IT
sooo... cute...
thnks for PM

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