Arjun-Anjali FF-Man on Fire-A SEQUEL pg 10 - Page 6

Originally posted by: Payal_156

Sadhna di 🤗
u may be not believed dat i Googled abt d movie
as i m not watching any english movie 😉

I do not watch a lot of them..but you can try this one-its beautiful😊

I don't thought dat u complete in a day
take a bow 😳

Kiara is a such a lovely cutie pie 👏

Arjun bro seriously ⭐️

i cannot imagine kiara dies 😭

but happy ending 😛
irs really outta of d world
seriously

hats off
one of d bestest work on AF
i ever read so far--This is really humbling. Thank you😊

lovely
😉
really short of words

pls if u ever write any novel n published it HAHA--am far from it! Am studying the wrong course I guess..!!

pls do lemme know 😛
its my pleasure to read it...
beautiful ⭐️
thanks di for d amazing
memorable work

touched my soul...

after a long time
feeling connected...

love ya..

keep writing
short of words i m
tc..
ps. like button not working..!!

Originally posted by: Sadhana_pr

Originally posted by: Amritamalhotra

For a minute my heart stopped. .
I thought Arjun is no more..
No I never can imagine him to be selfish. .it doesn't suit him...
Awesome ending. ..HAHA..since you have seen the original you can imagine how difficult it was to end this! Arjun could not die without killing Sikander!
The highest sacrifice one can do...
I am surely living under some spell. ..
Let me come out from this trance. .. AM back with the customary 'Thank you'😛
Keep writing girl...

Originally posted by: -Amri-

I just LOVED your story.😊

The dynamic between Arjun and the little girl Kiara is so sweet. The bond of trust and understanding that develops between them, slowly yet steadily...it was portrayed very well by you.

I haven't seen the movie you speak of- but I can only imagine Shaleen in such a role. I am sure that if asked to portray such a situation on the show, he'd do an awesome job of it!

Thanks a lot for sharing this beautiful tale with us, and please do write more!😛

And man are you generous for posting all the parts at once! *claps*

Originally posted by: -Carrie-

Thank a millions for not killing Arjun a the end 🤗 That was such a relief but then you will never let him go unless he has cleared his dues with Sikander

Awesomely written! The thrill part was as racy as the movie but I loved the growth of relationship between Ki and Arjun👍🏼 Some of the most impactful linesof your story:

Protecting a 9 year old kid. Sorry, but I thought that you want to fight the cowards who break the most basic rule of combat- Target the enemy,not the family. Why should she pay for her father's profession?

Okay! That was painful but then there wasn''t any other way to convince the bull headed ACP

"But no one would cut your salary if you could just smile and protect me".

That was one spunky kid!👍🏼

"Kiara,..I. am. here." he emphasized on each word.

There! That's all I need.I am not afraid.I will be alright!😳 Kiara also has come to realise it.

"But that is now. At some point of time in the past,he must have given you something which made you the luckiest man on earth. Could you not come inside to thank Him for that?

👏👏👏 The one line none of the folks that have issues with God have an answer for.Very well said!

Kudos!👏

A piercing darkness. A deafening silence. A flickering bulb lighting a scarred body, lifting weights. The sweat dripping from his body was pale in comparison to the fire emitting from his eyes.

Mr. Arjun.S. Rawte. Or the man with no past' as called by the neighbors. And not very unfairly. Because it had been a while since he had moved into the underbelly of a dingy town in the outskirts of Delhi and he had yet to strike a conversation with any outsider. He lived on the second floor, running a small in-house utility and repair store . And his disheveled appearance,combined with his long,untidy hair earned him the suspicion and fear of the neighbors. All, but one.

Anjali. She lived next door with her drug abusing mother-Maya. Neglected and lonely, yet brimming with innocence of childhood,leading to a natural affinity for a father figure.

"Mr Arjun...Can you fix this camera for me?" She peeped through the bars of the shop counter.

Arjun turned around impatiently. This had been the fourth time in two days that she had arrived with a broken object.

"Ask your mother to come and clear her bills for the purchases she had made last week"

"She is not at home and nor has she left the keys for me".

Arjun stared at her silently, not missing the pain in her voice. "Put the camera with its cover on the table. Collect it tomorrow."

"Ah..can I..eh...you see...can I share your dinner?"-she blurted out looking at the locked door of her house.

Arjun lowered his gaze and muttered a come in'.

At the dinner table:

"Do you eat Maggie everyday?"-she attempted a conversation in vain.

"You know I did this nail art" she displayed her 10 fingers before him. " And I am the best in my class at this".

Arjun silently poured a glass of water for her. She noticed the scars of wounds on his fingers.

"Are you really a gangster?" she asked with hesitation.

Arjun looked up with surprise.

"Everyone says you did something wrong in your past and you are hiding here.Everyone is scared of you".

Arjun had a faraway look, a crop of hair covering his eyes. " And you?"

"Well, you do look the prison breaker type. But...she thought pensively. " I am not scared of you".

They shared a glance,

Just then some noises could be heard outside.

"I think Mom is back" she cried running out. Maya indeed was back but not alone. There were two bottles of alcohol, three drunk men, two girls and a lot of syringes.

She looked at Anjali and said in a drunk voice-"Go to your room and sleep".

Anjali locked herself up in the room but could not lock the music,the screams and the filth being carried out in the hall. She quietly moved out of her house and knocked at Arjun's door.

"Ah..I promise to go once mother's friends are gone".