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rocking_gal

@rocking_gal

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

VAmpu!!!🤗

Damn gud one gal...dont i think i enjyed Arjun char change in this os way too much..itna ki i had goofy smile on my face the whole time...

Yeh arjun bahut hi cute hai:)

i liked the way her was flirting...the way he proposed..

his concern to know wats wrong with her...den his dialogue " Jaan ho tum meri..."hayeee kuda toh kamal hai!!!

den the next part was the coat over them waaahhh!!!!

den his teasing haha!!!

the road walk was damn gud one gal loved it..man still smiling like an idiot...!!!!

why is riya running away???

wat happened in sam cabin...make a quick next update samjhi!!

I want to read more of this Arjun...i dont why but I seriously like ur version of Arjun...his quicky witty taunts,comedy dil legaya..gals dont kill me plzz!!!

kil vammpu if u want

👏

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Anjali

@AnjuRish

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

complete son na eager to kno y ri is behaving like this

sam knows y rite??

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abhya/akanksha

@Aks13

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Mind blowing start dr...!!!!

Oh my mystery queen...romance mai bhi mystery ghusa di...!!

Yayyy Ariya r in a relationship...!!!

Wow Riya was avoiding Arjun but why...????? Is all this coz of her convo with Sam...????? Wht did ha say to her...????

Awww that jaan ho tum meri frm Arjun...stole my heart...that's really so sweet...!!!!!

If staying away frm Arjun made her so miserable thn why is she doing that...?????

Riya's Pov was beautifully written n was so painfull...!!! You portrayed her inner turmoil vry well...!!!!

Wht lie was she talking about...?????

Awww loved to knw that Arjun didn't leave her alone n was there for her whn she needed him the most as she was so shattered n couldn't share her problems with anybody...!!!

The BG song was perfect n protrayed their emotions perfectly...!!!!!

Awww all the gestures of Arjun showed that he was so concerned for her...!!!!!!

Wow she broke down in his arms...feel bad for her...she is in so much pain...!!!

OMG thy r engaged but why suddenly she broke their engagement...????

Wht does she mean by that sometimes second chance even fails...????

Loved their convo...that was so emotional...!!!!

Arjun's Pov about beautiful time thy spent with eachother was lovely...!!!

FB was so sweet...!!!! Loved Arjun's confession so much...!!

How smartly Arjun made her to tell him I lv u...!!!

Awww loved the way Arjun flirted with her...!!!!

Loved Arjun's POV n Ariya little but cute moments in the end...!!!!

Precap looks damn interesting...!!!!!

Thanx 4 pm dr...

Continue soon...

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kaveriw2008

@kaveriw2008

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Nahi nahi nahi...mujhe babaji ka thullu nahi chahiye...lol

Hey dear another mystery for me...

Why suddenly riya changed hermin and just broke her engagement with arjun...

Aakhir baat kya hui hai riya and rathore ke beech mein...

Flashback parts is so so so so cute...love it...

I love this flirty arjun...omg poor riya...bato bato mein I love you bol bhi diya...lol...

But the present time...something is hurting her...

I just want ariya to be forever...

Whatever hurting her please solve asap...

Vampi dear...next update ke liye khoon mat choosna...

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Snehajain

@Snehajain

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Awesome...

Just loved it...

About what lie Riya is thinking????

jaldi-jaldi update karo...I m eagerly waiting...

plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

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rizwanaa

@rizwanaa

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

awesome update
the fbs were lovely
loved Arjun's flirty side n the way he made her speak that
she loves him too
eager to know what made Riya broke her engagement
with him n her convo with Rathod
thanks for pm
cont soon

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ishita

@IshitaRocks015

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

arey...kaha rok dia??😭😭

tension se pet me gur gur hota hai!!😆😆

ria..why is she behaving as if she is drunk!!!

speaking all insane!!

aur bechara arjun..he has become a majnu!!!😆😆

wah...flashbacks!! rocking👏👏

and that one.."road sasurji ne banwaya hai.."hahaha😆😆

update soon!!

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ishita

@IshitaRocks015

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

arey...kaha rok dia??😭😭

tension se pet me gur gur hota hai!!😆😆

ria..why is she behaving as if she is drunk!!!

speaking all insane!!

aur bechara arjun..he has become a majnu!!!😆😆

wah...flashbacks!! rocking👏👏

and that one.."road sasurji ne banwaya hai.."hahaha😆😆

update soon!!...👏

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Shweta Gupta

@ll_megha_ll

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

wow vampu this was the surprize for kbb awesome re.

riya avoiding arjun and even broke her engagement😲

what the?😡

she want arjun to hate her but why?

love arjun love concern to riya hayee...

what riya and sam talk?

love arjun flirty avtaar.

loved cute confession.

kya plan tha riya se i love you kehlvane ka.

loved arjun pov.

i loved rain romance.

but yeh kya itne razz😡

apne har update main ek na ek razz.

chal koi ni i manage.

continue soonish.

and thanx for the pm.

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ishita

@IshitaRocks015

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

arey ria ko kya hua hai??

why is she behaving like a mad girl..

something is definitely worrying her.

hope arjun finds out soon..

haye..rain me romance..how sweet..

.lol.."sasurji ne road banaya"..haha!!😆

update soon..

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