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@Aks13

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Super Duper Fantastic update dr n a bit mysterious as always...!!!!

Awww Arjun carried her all the way to her room...!!!

OMG Riya's father is so cool...loved his convo with Arjun...thy seem more like frnds...!!!

This Arjun is so different...loved Ariya moments n both their Mvs...!!!!

Awww Arjun tried to comfort her n assured her frm his words so that she could share wht was bothering her but she didn't budge...!!! Loved Arjun cheekiness...!!!!

Wow even his thoughts made her relaxedn brought a smile on her face...!!!!

Rathod n Riya's convo was so shocking...!!!!

OMG she was a spoilt brat n Ricky was her frnd n she is doing all this to knw about him...!!!!

Wht the...!!! Dustin Choelo sent her to ETF n wanted her to make Arjun fall in love with her...but why...?????

Does her dad knw about all this...???? I mean he is the one who sent her to Dustin...!!!!

Awww loved Arjun's messages...he cared for her a lot...!!!!

Wow this update is filled of so many shocking revelations...!!!!

Precap looks scary...!!!!

Loved it to the bits...!!!!

Thanks 4 pm dr...

Continue soon...

Edited by Aks13 - 11 years ago

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nakshatra92

@nakshatra92

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#42

nice part...

rakesh gupta...

dustin -- the villain or the savior ...

arjun will blast him off when he gets to know the truth...

play with arjun... bhari padega...

precap mein ricky or sikander...

same here... love thrilling and suspense stories... 😉

update soon and thanks for the PM

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DivineDarkness

@DivineDarkness

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

My BSB Didiyaa too loves you🤗

Super awesome part...

was romantic, emotional and suspense too... only you can do it BSB... i'm proud of you👍🏼

aww Riya's dad is super cool... why cant my dad be like him!!!!???😡😭😆

oh ho so Arjun chori chupke visits Riya that too coming through windows... how romantic😳

haww i was 😲 reading about real Riya ... OMG

so it is Divi's bf behind all this i hate Coehlo... even in serial he s jerk🤢😡

So she joined ETF coz Coehlo asked her... but why is he behind Arjun????

i do have a feel he is Sikki in serial😡 😡 😡

So Riya was acting to help her friend but she really fell for our Super dashing hawtt cop☺️😳

Rathore knows the truth and thats what they talked abt ...hmmm

Arjun Riya moments were really sweet... lovely😳

ah that SMS😃

continue soon BSB... me waiting...

well dnt update till 19th you know the reason right

Edited by Leki - 11 years ago

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-Carrie-

@-Carrie-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Vampu,

How come I always feel breathless and my heart races after reading every one of your fictions?😕 You have a way of thrilling your readers to bits,Anks👏👍🏼

Now what is this Riya's problem?Sikki kya kjam hai bechaare Arjun ko pareshan karne ke liye? Methinks his whole life will pass by figuring out his destiny and the people around him 😛

But you have depicted each one's confusion and heartbreak very nicely.⭐️

Ab jaldi bata iss ladki ko kya hua hai? Kahi Saamy ne kiss toh nai kar diya cabin mein le jaa kar?😲