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BitterBerry

@BitterBerry

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: Aisha.Vashishth
if PMs r only for buddies...thn why nt me getting a PM.. *sobs*

i m loving this story...

u knw wat anki...i've stopped reading Ariya fictions...as they vbring back th beautiful Ariya memories nd jst give pain...bt th only stories i m reading of Ariya...are all urs...
this mch i love ur writing...

continue soon

love
Aisha

oh Aisha , I thought u won't read it , as you said u have stopped reading ariya ones, yea it gives pain to the extreme but also makes some ppl smile ..
but i am feeling so special to having you with me 🤗
you really made my day aisha😛.
I will PM you from the next parts.

Solly iss khun peeti bachhi ko maaf kardo😭.

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Shravani / Arohi

@skrafty

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#92

awesome update
loved it
its getting more and more interesting and thrilling as u read it
i am curious to know what happens next
eagerly waiting for next part
cont soon

Edited by skrafty - 11 years ago

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isha

@naughtykittyyy

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#93

1stlyy huggyyy🤗🤗 my khoon peeti bahenaa

real mein khoon hi choos lia tune too..4 ur not rmntc mood

romntc scn ko kahe roka ree..suspence naa hoti toh

main hi teri khoon pee jati😆

well suspnce ne cover kar dia though

chall propr suspence ke lie unrmntcnees vi maaf

rd all dis parts nice buildng of suspnce👍🏼

though lots of confusions gt cleard yet lotzzz r left

spclyy on dat rocky..

try 2 guess wht will happn noww

gv some more flash back naa plzzz

wana see the flirty play full acp lil more

b4 da hursh present crash on him

is der is no rosh naa?

move on grl lv u stry

Edited by naughtykittyyy - 11 years ago

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Anjali

@AnjuRish

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#94

story is interesting too much due to twists

poor ariya both are struglling

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nakshatra92

@nakshatra92

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#95

nice part ... awesome 👏 👏 👏

ARIYA ko aise hi rahne do... i like this cat and mouse wala love... cute little fights... 😉 loved it to bits...

i'm waiting for arjun's reaction on finding the TRUTH ...

loved arjun - riya convo and their fights...

waiting for the next part...

precap mein twist... jaldi update karna...

update soon & thanks for the PM...

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-Carrie-

@-Carrie-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#96

You spin a really racy breathless suspense thriller👏👏👏

I was really getting annoyed at Riya & that commissioner for all this subterfuge games they were playing with Arjun😡

But her revelation and the way she went about it was fantastic👍🏼 She does not mean to hurt him but does not want to give up her mission too.

😲 Sikki murdered not Rosh but Arjun's mom & sis? That a new twist😳

But abhi Delhi door hai!

Superb update!

Waiting for the finale😊

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Shanafr

@Shanafr

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#97

Fab awesome super update
Loveiy
Bueno
Thanks for pm
Cont soon

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srividhya68

@srividhya68

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#98

loved it
Brilliantly written
loved Ariya moments..
cont soon

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Shivani P

@Lovelost_shivi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#99

It was awsm
i loved it
update soon

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BitterBerry

@BitterBerry

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#100

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