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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Beautiful update dear awesome

Contiue soon

Thanks for the PM

Loved sherni bhuki hai 😆😆

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Tabassum Nitol

@_Tabassum_

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Awwssmmm part
loved it
Brillantly written
loved Ariya moments..
cont soon
thanks for PM

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rizwanaa

@rizwanaa

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#83

awesome update
Ariya moments were nice
and the chutney part n Arjun saying 'khaane ke liye bulaya h canteeen ka safaya karne k liye nhi'
was really nice n funny😆
the fb was nice
thanks for pm
cont soon

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unisha

@unishaz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#84

awesome vampu..
Loved it..
Interesting..
Thanks for pm..

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ishita

@IshitaRocks015

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#85

oh...poor riabis stuck in a miserable situation...
arjun trying his level best..bechara!!
lol tht parantha n dosa part.. it seemed as if chhotu's atma had entered into her all of a sudden...
plz updt soon!!

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Aabish_02

@Aabish_02

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#86

Awesome update
love it
continue soon

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Shweta Gupta

@ll_megha_ll

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#87

it was awesome update dear.

love ariya moments..

riya ke andar lagta hain chotu ki aatma aa gaye.

love chutny wala dialog..

so arjun knows everything...

i hate dustin chelo.

hope arjun save riya and forgive her and ariya together..

continue son.

and thanx for the pm.

and i love you

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fly.high

@fly.high

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#88

if PMs r only for buddies...thn why nt me getting a PM.. *sobs*

i m loving this story...

u knw wat anki...i've stopped reading Ariya fictions...as they vbring back th beautiful Ariya memories nd jst give pain...bt th only stories i m reading of Ariya...are all urs...
this mch i love ur writing...

continue soon

love
Aisha