Ariya OS.. Part 6 on page 19 updated

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Hi!! Ye pehli baar me ek story lik rehi hu...
Par kabi kabi try tho karna pardtha hai šŸ˜‰ ... Padne ke baad plz muje maarna math 😭 šŸ˜›
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This is from the time when riya swallowed the bacteria
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Riya knew she had no escape, she knew this time her Arjun Sir can't help her and she knew can't hurt the people of her country. So there was only one option left. SWALLOW THE BACTERIA!!! Thats what her mind said and thats what she did.
A man was looking at her, saw what she did, he felt as if someone had his heart, he screamed " RIYAAA..." He was her Arjun Sir. He rushed towards her and carried her "Riya, tumhe kuch nehi hoga,mai tumhe kuch nehi hone dunga. Riya keep your eyes open ,please".. She was trying to listen to him but she couldn't and fainted.
Arjun rushed her to the hospital and she was admitted
AFTER FEW HOURS
Arjun was going through his memories from the start when he met riya, and the memories how she had her place in his heart. Silent tears were rolling down his eyes but he didn't bother to wipe them off.
The doctor came and saw the state he is in and felt really bad, but he has to tell him the truth, "Excuse me, sir she is in very critical condition. I don't want to give you false hope. I am sorry but i don't think she'll make it but we'll try our best. Only thing i can say is pray to god for her recovery"
The whole ETF team heared what the doctor said. Colour drained from their face. They can't believe they are almost losing her. She was bestfried to Chotu and Shree, sister to Sameer, and life to Arjun.
Arjun wispered with determination,, "MERE Riya ko kuch nehi hoga"
All looked and him with shock except Rathore. He just grinned.
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How was it guyz... Should i continue??
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INDEX
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Part 2
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3758092&TPN=4&#p93515248
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Part 3 - page 8 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3758092&TPN=8 and page 9 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3758092&TPN=9
Part 4 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3758092&TPN=12&#p103038902
Part 5 -
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3758092&TPN=16&#p106644193
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http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3758092&PID=107980186&#p107980186
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome start dr...
U should continue this...
We love to read it further...
Update as soon as possible.
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awesome start.. Continue it dear..
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Nice start
cont soon
plz pm me when u update next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very nice story plz plz continue love ariya
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awesome dear.. please continue soon
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well lovely start...
update soon want to read how arjun saved his Riya!!!
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beautiful
do continue
loved the way he said mere riya
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Beautiful start, plz continue soon
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Beautiful start!!! Please please continue soon!šŸ‘šŸ¼

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