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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 2
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After they came out of their shock, all of them were grinning. Arjun looked at them and just glared and asked,
"kya???! Tum log paghalon ke tera ku has rehe ho?
"kuch nehi rawte.Kya hum abhi TUMHARE Riya ko dekne chale?" asked rathore grinning evily
Chotu whispered to shree,"ek baath batao,ye riya kab Arjun Sir ki hogai"
"shayad wo bacteria case solve karthe karthe,sir ki dil bhi hil gaya hoga.Par darne ki baath hai ki riya waapas aane ke baad,hume apne aankon ko band karke rakna chaiye,patha nehi kya hoga un dono ke beech me."replied Shree naughtily.
Chotu slapped shree's head,"thu zyada sochne se pehle, hum riya ko dekhe aathe hai".
They all went to see riya and were saddened when the saw her condition, oxygen mask on her pale face without no emotion.
Chotu and Shree rushed towards her tears rolling down their eyes
"Riya please utja please.Tere bina shree aur mai gossips kiske saath karenge"
"haan Ri,aur mere gadjets ke baare me kon muje chidayega?? Tu hume chodke nhi ja sakthi,aur...aur" Shree couldn't continue anymore, he's was breaking down seeing his bestfriend in this state and when he couldn't hear any sarcastic reply from her made him more cry.
"shree,ro math.Tuje Ri ke liye strong rahna hoga."chotu was fighting within himself not to breakdown because he had to be strong,and riya wouldn't want them to cry like this and thats what Shree has to do too.
"chal shree baahar chalthe hai, waiting room me"
Both the buddies were going to go out , when Shree stopped and turned to face Riya again,"ek aur baath Ri, tuje aana he padega,humse zyada, koi aur tumhare wait kar raha hai"as he said this, he gave a sly grin towards Arjun and rushed before he could have been killed by Sir's glare.

Sameer looked at the person who was a sister to him which he never had. He sent a silent prayer to god to make riya alright and went out as he knew arjun needed to be alone with riya.
While the others were talkng, arjun were standing in a corner and smilling at them when he saw their love towards her. As he took baby steps towards hes and took her hand in his,and looked at her with full of love hoping that she will open her eyes and give him her dazzling dimpled smile.

He closed his eyes and clutched her hand in his as if life dependent on her,
" Miss Statistics, tumhe utna padega. Tum muje ayse chodke nhi ja sakthi just when i found a reason to live Riya.. The reason is YOU. Tumne muje hasna sikaya aur tumne muje phirse jeena sikaya, muje chodke mat jao...mat jao." arjun was trembling as silent tears rolled down his eyes.
"Excuse me ,Sir"
Arjun turned around and saw a nurse.
"Kya" he asked irritatingly.
"sir, woh, doctor checking karne keliya aa sahe hai, aap ko bahar jaana padega" she said.
When she left, Arjun faced riya ,leaned towards her and kissed her forehead, "Don't worry, main tumhare pass he hun. I'll come back to you".
As he was going , he turned and looked at her once again and went out. And Now he knew what he had to do.
He went outside the hospital, jumped in his car and drove. When he came to the place where he wanted to come. He got down from the car and stared at the place,
"Rawte, tumhe karna padega, you have come for Riya" arjun muttered to himself.
He entered the place, which is, MANDIR...
The great ACP Arjun Rawte has come to pray for his riya.
He joined his hand and pray "please riya ko mujse math cheena jaise aapne roshni ko cheena tha. Please kuch bhi karke riya ko bajao." tears were rolling down his eyes but he didn't bother to wipe them off and continued to pray.
And when opened his eyes, they were full of determination...
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Will God listen to Riya's gang and save her?? If He didn't,,, how will arjun cope up with his second loss?? Tuned in for the next chapter.
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Please like and comment. Thank you so much..
HASI
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
superb update..
arjun went to temple for his riya..


waiting to see how riya will come back...


thanks for the update...

loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome dear.. Change in arjun.. Others teasing him.. He went to pray for riya.. Nice.. Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update yar...
love how everyone were teasing arjun...
aww everyone loves her so much...
omg arjun going to mandir to pray fr her cool..
update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
Wow
awesome update
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
awesome plz dnt kill riya plz plz riya mean a lot for arjun & they should b together love ariya
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Nice update... Loved the way Rathore and later shree teased Arjun... Arjun confessing his feelings for riya...nice... he went to temple just for her well being...
hope Riya will be fyn soon...
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
awesome update
wow arjun confessed his feelings
loved etf team's teasing session
arjun went to temple for riya
hope she ll be fine
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
Awesome update
love it
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
Superb update dear...
Shree and Chhotu were so broken. ..
Such sweet best best friends are bliss in life...
Rathore was understanding...
Loved Arjun...the way he stood by his girl..
Continue soon dear...will wait. .

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