Ariya OS.. Part 6 on page 19 updated - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Best of luck for ur exams
Waiting eagerly for update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice teaser
all the best for exam
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Posted: 11 years ago
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precap is quite scary
cont soon
all the best for ur exams
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanx for all those who have commented and waited patiently
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Part 3
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Arjun saw the doctor coming towards the whole team with a worried face. The doctor was fighting with himself because he didn't know how to break the news to them as he knew they loved his patient very much. The whole team rushed towards him and was waiting with so much hope for him to tell them that riya was getting better.
"I am really sorry we couldn't save...we tried our best but God took her away".
Colour drained from all of their face. Arjun felt like his life has been snatched away from him without his permission. He felt all his hope went in drain.
"NOOo" he screamed and opened his eyes, and looked around, he was sitting in the hospital chair. He took a deep breath and sighed as he realized it was just a dream.
His looked at his team who were looking at him with a worried expression. "kya hua sir",, "kuch nhi bus bura sapna tha".
He had come straight from mandir to hospital. While waiting for the doctor to tell about Riya's condition, he had dozed off as he was very tired but harshly woken up with a nightmare.
He sighed and came out of his thoughts and looked up and saw the doctor coming with a frown. Arjun's remembered his dream and his heartbeat started raising.
"Relax arjun, usse kuch nhi hoga, wo bus bura sapna tha" he was trying to calm himself down but not really succeeding.
The whole team rushed towards the doctor, and started firing questions at him, " Riya kaise hai? Wo teek tho hai na? Bach gai na.? Plz aap ku chup hai, kuch tho boliye "
Doctor took a breath," wo abhi khatre se bahar hai, par puri condition patha chalenga jab wo hosh mein aayegi, but for now she is safe" he said with a smile.
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Will continue after having lunch.tata 4 nw
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
Fantastic update dr...!!!!!
Wow Arjun had a horrible nightmare that hv shaken him to the core...!!!!!!
Yayyy Riya is safe...that's great...!!!!!
Continue soon...!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update ...!!!
omg arjun had a nightmare about riya... but glad that riya is safe...!!
continue soon...
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Continuation of PART 3 _________________________ Tears were rolling down their eyes. They felt so relieved and happy. "doctor , can we meet Riya, plz" "yea sure" They all rushed towards the room where Riya was.. She looked like an angel sleeping on the bed. *Thanx for listening to me ...noo...to us" arjun whispered silently. They all sat beside the bed waiting for her to wake up... Shree and chotu were holding riya hand... Chotu in the left and shree in the right. Rathore sat next to chotu and arjun next to shree... They all looked at riya adoringly but most importantly there eyes held so much respect for her. Hours passed,, Riya regained consiousness and slowly opened her eyes , she couldn't believe that she was still alive. She was going to raise her hand but couldn't ,she felt something heavy on both her hands and heavy on her legs too.. She looked at herself and her jaw dropped...her team members were sleeping clutching to her. She looked at shree and chotu, they looked so cute and adorable...her eyes went to her chief, the hard front chief who scolded them with DAMMIT was sleeping peacefully thinking her leg was a pillow.. Then finally her eyes rested on the hot cop, her love. Her breath stoped. He looked so so so... Riya slaped her head, "just now you woke and you r thinking like this" but she can't help herself, his hair was falling on his eyes, she wanted to move it ,caress his face... The one thing she noticed in everyone was that they looked so tired. She was overwhelmed with the love she is recieving from her team which she never experience in her life. But suddenly she felt the sight in front of her was funny and she burst out laughing... All of them woke up startled and looked at her strangely... "sorry for disturbing your sleep" riya grinned.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely update.. Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wonderful update dr...!!! Loved all their care n concern for Riya...!!!! Thanks for pm dr...!! Continue soon...!!!
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nice story and nice update
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