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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
Nice but short part. ..
Loved the concern everyone had for her... n the way they slept holding her too sweet
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
very emotional part
thank god that riya is save👍🏼
poor etf got so scared for riya
love the way arjun held love for riya❤️
plz update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
plz plz plz cont soon
n what made riya laugh like this???
what is so funny that she i s laughing on hospital bed??
n ya pm me 2 if u update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
Omg this one is just awesome yaar...


Jaldi jaldi update karo...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Short but sweet update. I liked Riya's POV very much and honestly that's the best way to wake her up. Laughing and joking around.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
I am sorry 4 late... I was busy. And its dificult to update through phone 😭
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PART 4
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They all were looking at her as if she was an alien. They were staring at her for so long that riya started to get worried.. She started to touch her face to see if there was something on her face, she looked at them worriedly and asked "meri moo me kuch hai kya?" then she started freaking out " Oh my god ab main kya karon. Mere skin kharab hogai tho? Riya thu gai. I swear i hate hospitals. They are not clean also.eeewww." She shuddered. The team were smiling happily, their hygiene freak is back... And thats when Choree attacked her and engulfed her in a hug shocking riya. She sighed and hugged them tightly. She realized she was fine and her only family was with her. She looked up and saw sameer and arjun smiling at the trio.
Then all of a sudden, choree and sam looked at arjun and smirked. "ahamm we gotta go, tata riya" shree said and pulled chotu and went out followed by sameer giving a thumbs up to arjun... Arjun just shook his head and glared but gave riya his famous smirk.
Riya's expression was worth watching. "close your mouth i don't think u'll like to eat a housefly,would you" arjun said and winked at her.She blushed when he winked but then remembered what he said and glared at him. He was grinning like a maniac.
"kya" riya asked angrily.
"oye sherni itna gussa math hona, tumhari health ke liye acha nhi hai ms.hygiene free" then he looked at riya and became serious.
He came towards the bed and sat next to her looking straight to her eyes."riya , tumne kya sochke wo bacteria ko apne moo me daala. Tumhe kuch hojatha tho.. What will shree and chotu do without their bestfriend , what will sam do widout his sister but most importantly what will i do without my love??"
Riya was shocked, was thinking, did he really confess that he loved me??..her heart skipped a beat and as if arjun read her mind.
He said"yes riya. I love you. I love you so much" he hugged riya tightly. Riya was overwhelmed and couldn't speak anything but she hugged him back."tumhe kuch hojatha tho mai kaise jee paonga" he started crying, " mai kabhi bhi nhi socha tha ki mai roshni ke baad pyaar kar paonga par riya you made the impossible possible. You made me fall in love again. Now don't you dare pull a stunt and leave me. I will die" he was sobbing now.Riya pulled out of the embrace and cupped arjun's face wiped his tears,"arjun, mai teek hu..muje khuch nhi huwa. I am there here, infront of you , talking to you. Aur muje kuch bhi nhi hoga. Tum jo ho muje bachane ke liye" she smilled and hugged him feeling complete. She got her love...
Arjun pulled out and made he lie down, "you have to rest riya" he kissed her forehead. Riya smilled at him and held his hand and drowsed off. Arjun slowly took off his hand,covered her with the blanket ,kissed he once more on the forehead and went out smiling.
He was so into his thoughts that he was startled when choree screamed "SIRRR,,,, kya huwa? aapne riya ko propose kiya kya, kab shadi hai aap dono ki?"
Arjun looked at them calmly said ," i told her that i love her. And now she's sleeping so don't disturb her " and walked off.
"Are yaar chotu tumhe bhi isse ye sewal puchna tha kya?? Jab Ri utegi na pooreka poora jawab mil jaenga" shree said shaking his head.
Arjun walked out of the hospital and sat in a bench was looking at the sky thinking how much he is lucky to get a second chance. He realized that someone sat next to him so turned to see who it was. It ws Rathore, looking everywhere but arjun's face he said "Rawte , i am sorry" then looked up and met arjun's eyes.
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Edited by CrazyHasii - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
Beautiful update dr...!!!!
Awww hygiene freak jaag gayee... 😊 😊
Loved trio antics...!!!!!
The confession was so adorable...!!!!!
Chotu n Shree were behaving like teenage girls... 😆
Wow Sam said him sorry... 😲
Loved it...!!!!! Continue soon...!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: Aks13

Beautiful update dr...!!!!

Awww hygiene freak jaag gayee...😊😊
Loved trio antics...!!!!!
The confession was so adorable...!!!!!
Chotu n Shree were behaving like teenage girls...😆
Wow Sam said him sorry...😲
Loved it...!!!!! Continue soon...!!!!


wowww di. Fast comment. Record banadi aapne 😉
thanx yaar ...
I'll try my best to continue soon. 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: CrazyHasii


wowww di. Fast comment. Record banadi aapne 😉
thanx yaar ...
I'll try my best to continue soon. 😃

Obviously yaar fast tou hona hi tha...as I was waiting for it from a long time...😉
You r most welcome swthrt...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
Superb
What a sweet confession
Continue soon

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