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devildiva21

@devildiva21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: riyasarkar007
tere andar ussi mata ki atma ghusi hogi jisne mere se romantic os likhwaya tha😲🤣 bt jo bhi hain mast hain...u should write more.

yes tera tuch kamini...

kya last part ka spolier mujhe milega? pretty please???😃😳

hahaah aur wo atma kyu ghusi hai.. ye shyad sirf hum do hi jaante hai🤣🤪😉

write more😲 dimag thik hai na??

hmm dekhenge sochnge😉

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AbsoluteKasainuma

@Phir_Mohabbat

Trailblazer

+ 15

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: devildiva21

hahaah aur wo atma kyu ghusi hai.. ye shyad sirf hum do hi jaante hai🤣🤪😉
write more😲 dimag thik hai na??
hmm dekhenge sochnge😉

atma aur woh...karan ki jai🤣

yes divi i am serious write more...make it ss like thriller???

no dekhna sochna i want spolier kamini😡

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devildiva21

@devildiva21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: lizadavidmm
wt d?????????????
no pm!!!!!!!!!!!

kiya pm..

check kar😃😳

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devildiva21

@devildiva21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: khemanisarita
wow
beautiful
super start
cont soon

thanku sarita😳

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devildiva21

@devildiva21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: ll_megha_ll
Res
unres
devil tune os likha??😲
but it was awesome, blossom, amazing, fantastic, fabulous, super-duper, blockbuster and mindblowing updaste devil.
koi ni tune rocking ki madad li but kaam to sara tera that and its brilliant
loved sam and ayesha pov.
loved ariya segment.
omg sameer is missing but where is he?

update soon
or jaldi jaldi update karna

hahaha shocked haan?😎

thanku girl..!!

yup will do soon...😳😃

hmm sam kaha ha ye next update mai pta lagega😎😈

P.S. loved the emos😳

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princess_pari

@princess_pari

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Nice start...
Sam kidnapped? Arjun n aisha worried...
Continue soon...

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Anika_VR

@Anika_PreRish

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Divi darling,
super start...
Bhaiya ko kaun kambakht ne kidnap karlia????
Usse sirf mere haato lagne do.
Aise paath paraungi,ki,kisiko bhi kidnap karne ki halaat mein nai rahega.
Everybody is tensed so much.
Especially,Arjun and Ayesha...
Loved the way hw u wrote the POVs of Arjun and Ayesha.
Hope they find Bhaiya soon...

Bhaiya,jaldi wapas aa jao...
*sob* *sob*

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unisha

@unishaz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

awesome start.. Loved it.. Nice update.. Thanks for pm..

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Piya

@Piya_Malik

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: devildiva21

kiya pm..
check kar😃😳

kameeni , pm se pahle ka h ye commt...sys! huh😆

wt a bonding wid ariya😉

arj remembers to sam and aisha ka gussa...qatilaana😆 dil mera bole de dana dun!!

she is wife of sameer😉

it was awesome-dosome😆

dil ko sukun mil gaya re ,,...good job! ⭐️ 👏

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904129

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Awwssuumm Divu! Kahan Thi Tu Itne Din?? Itna Accha Likhti Hai Tu Yaar!! Now Coming To Update...What?????? 😲 😲 Sam Bhai Kidnapped??? Evryone Is Worried but Arjun nd Aisha Kuch Zyaada Hi?? I understand! Arjun Cares So Much For Him?? Awww...Aayesha Ka Pov Was Also Gud! Finallyy Dey Got A Location!! But Yeh Kya??No Sameer?? Gud Job Riya! Sameer Ka ID Hmmm!! Aayesh Dun Cry Hon! Tera Sameer Jaroor Milega! Awww...The Ariya Momentz Wre Cute...Thanxx fr d pm Divu! Continuee Soon! :)