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Anjali

@AnjuRish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#311

sam the friend resurfaces

what will ri do now??

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rinku95

@rinku95

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Posted: 11 years ago

#312

Awesome can't wait for nov 26 to come

Loving Sam starting to support arjun. 👏 👏

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DivineDarkness

@DivineDarkness

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Posted: 11 years ago

#313

I so hate Riya man...

sorry to say she is heartless...

Gosh the way Arjun broke down...

why the hell did she come back.????

this time i dnt had heart attack but i'm emotional wreck...

Hope Sam will be able to take care of Arjun...

update soon

oh You are going to end this by year end hmm... well that means i should be ready to say bye bye to forum... cool

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benaz

@benaz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#314

Hey thank you for the PM. I didn't want to bombard you with any more request of updating since I figured you were already receiving too many those😛 But I'm glad and was so excited when I saw you inbox me with the update😊 It's been too long but I hope now it will be truly regular updates. Your story is the only one that makes me remember the original AriYa scenes😊

I liked how you started this update. It was a summary of their emotions since Riya came back in their lives. You left us on a cliffhanger but it was worth it. Arjun's breakdown was simply wow and Rathod's friendship was even more amazing. I sure as hell wasn't expecting him to throw Riya out. That was kinda funny😛 But I sincerely hope they all somehow manage to accept her back into the team. Oh yeah the way Arjun was slumped showed his human side. We often forget that he is not only the hot-headed cop with no emotions but here it was epic.

So looking forward to your next update!😊

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Mdmadona

@Mdmadona

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Posted: 11 years ago

#315

What the...
what the hell riya is doing yaar???
poor arjun is completely broken
why the hell she is saying all these now???
couldn't see arjun like this poor him
cont soon

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rimi

@rimi_invisible

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Posted: 11 years ago

#316

excellent update...I had felt the remorse that arjun would go through after knowing the truth,but reading it from ur end was beyond imagination...and sam,my fav character,always had the state of mind to control situation how hash they are...👏👏

do continue soon...will be waiting for the update...

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abhya/akanksha

@Aks13

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Posted: 11 years ago

#317

Finally we got a update...thanks a lot dr...!!!!!

Wow wht a mind blowing one...!!!! Back with a bang...!!

Obviously yaar that was a hell shocking day for all of thm...!!!

There is no second thought about that this time she crossed her limits n hurt Arjun vry badly...!!!! Nvr imagined Arjun like this...so broken as if lost everything...!!!! But is there more about Riya or that is the only reason behind her joining ETF...????

I don't knw but i think there is more to her thn meets the eye... Let me knw if i m right...or thinking way too much...????

Glad that Sam took over n supported his friend...!!!! Wow Sam pushed her n said get out...!!! His reaction was justified...!!!!

Loved every bit of it...!!!!

Thanks for pm dr...

Continue soon...

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Tabassum Nitol

@_Tabassum_

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#318

Awwwssmmm... part
Mind blowing...
Amazing...
Wonderfil...
cont sooon
thanks for PM

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devildiva21

@devildiva21

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Posted: 11 years ago

#319

yes amri back ...

and that too with a update yayy...!!!

super awesome girl...!!!

feeling bad for arjun.. poor guys is so heart broken...!! and the words you used to describe his condition...👏 ⭐️ could actually visualize his reactions...!!!

just love your writings kills it makes you think like you are actually watching it and not reading it...!!!

and riya... she really has just crossed all the limits...!! but there's still something hidden about her.. there's some mystery about her...

and Sameer Sam.. what should i say about him.. although he wasn't on talking terms with his friend.. but his one hurt look.. one broken scream.. and he is back to Sam.. Arjun's sam.. who can't see his best friend hurt and can go to any extent to comfort him...!! like he did now.. by throwing riya outside the office...!!

i have no words to explain how much i liked the update...!! glad to see you back in form.. ready with the updates...!!😉

can't wait till tom for the update...!1

continue real soon...!!

waiting waiting...!!!